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Posted: 9 years ago

Hello people...

Here comes another update...

Hope you will like it...

Keep smiling <3

Chapter 15

Location - Shopping Mall

Muqti was dragging a helpless Nandini and smirking Manik towards her favourite boutique from where she want to buy her a dress but our sweet, innocent Nandu was denying and when it comes to her choti Muqti never listens to anyone...

N - Muqti yaar please listen naa...I have many dresses...abi vo wali bhi to new hi hai jo mai last month laai th...mujhe nahi chahie itni heavy dress...

She pouted after saying this and Muqti said glaring her...

Mu - choti, don't pout...ye sab mere samne nahi chalega...kya problem hai? And ab to Fab 5 is like a family to you too...they all adore you...and mere sath un sabki ki bhi choti ho gai hai tu...

In the mean time, Manik was admiring the duo but as they turned towards him he turned his gaze as he was searching for something and Muqti cleared her throat to gain his attention...

M - ohh...ho gaya tum dono ka? I thought you will spend whole day idhar only...

He said sarcastically and the duo glared him with Nandini biting her inner cheek to prevent her from blushing because of their previous encounter ;)

Manik smirked seeing her like this and winked at her and she was standing there with her eyes open wide and lips in open in a perfect o...

The trio entered the boutique and being a part of Fab 5 and also leading business man of India Manik and Muqti were welcomed by head designer and Nandu was nervously standing with her head hung low as she was not very friendly with such surroundings...

She was holding corner of Muqti's top as a child holds of her mother when scared and Manik was carrying his all time aura of ruthless Manik Malhotra...

Muqti was talking to designer explaining her the choice of clothes she want for wedding and also on behalf of her two dumbass best friends who were doing nothing but stealing glances of each other and looking here and there...

The head designer showed them the VIP room and left to select attires for them...

Manik was wandering his eyes in there and his eyes caught a beautiful dress and he instantly liked it for HIS girl..the only thought which came across his mind was Nandini when he saw that dress and he knew what he wanted to do...

He secretly called the boy who was carrying that dress and asked him to make it pack with his all time famous attitude and went back to the girls only to find Muqti gawking at the dresses while Nandini was still holding Muqti's top and was not even sparing a glance to the dressed...

He smile at her innocence and vowed himself to give her whatever she desire...he knew he feel something for her, he never felt before...

All were settled on a sofa with designer showing her best collection and Muqti rejecting almost every dress as she was not liking them very much and Manik checking his e-mails...

At last after 3 long hours they came out after finalizing dresses for all the functions for all of them...with Muqti selecting dresses for both of them with loads of difficulty as she never shopped without Aliya and that too for some Indian function...

Manik was also not very excited for this shopping this until he found Nandini there...he was really a bad hand when it comes to shopping,...he generally wore suits and it was hell difficult for him to wear and to select Indian attires...same thing was Muqti too...so the left one was Nandu and she was as usual nerves but on having no choice she voiced out her opinion and Manik was very impressed with her choice in Male attires...

They were coming out from mall when suddenly out of blue Muqti bumped into someone and all the bags which she was carrying along with the person's bag and being lady hulk she is she shouted n that idiot who was till now busy in collecting the scattered bags...

Mu - What the hell...dekh ke nahi chal sakte the? Idiot...

With that she bend down to collect her bags along with Manik and Nandini and when all the bags were in the hands of their respective owner the person moved his neck upwards to be get a shock of his life and was staring Nandini inanely as if examining her and being Possessive like hell Manik was burning with jealousy but Nandini didn't understand why she was not felling creepy from his watch...she too was staring in his eyes as they know each other from so long...

Muqti was shouting on the person but he was busy in staring Nandini and expression of being shocked never leaving his face...

Manik held Nandini by her waist and said while gritting his teeth out f jealousy...

M - hey you...cant you watch and walk? Or why are you staring? Hmm? Do you know with whom are you messing?

Nandini came out from her trance and looked at Manik with scared expression as he was angry and she can feel that...

He calmed down a bit after seeing her scared expression and said to Muqti who was shooting daggers to that person..

M - Muqti lets go...

He was about to turn when that person spoke the one and only word which was threatening to come out from his throat due to choked emotions was...

Nandu...??

All were shocked and Manik, Muqti were angry too...how come a stranger know Nandini..and why the hell is he staring at her???

Who is this stranger? What is his relation with Nandu? How does he know her? So many questions...

Shopping to ho gai...but surprise ab aya hai...any guesses what it could be? And who is the person? I know thoda boring laga hoga...MaNan nahi than a is bari..but this was necessary...

P.S. - all the dresses will be unfold with chapters containing the particular function...

Hit like and do comment...

I will be waiting for the comments...

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Posted: 9 years ago
mukti s shopping with manan


it was awesome



who s that n how he knows nandu ????????
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazinggg
Suprrbbb update
So cute nandu
Lovd it
udtarockstar thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
I just can't get over your way of writing..
You always somehow manage to make your readers more excited abt ur story..
This time I thought surprise is gonna b a dress..bt wait..thats not it..
And now m excited to know what it'll b..

My interest in ur story keeps increasing by every chapter.. please keep updating.. and that too soon.. :)

Thanks for pm.. take care..
Keep smiling.. :)
sweetheart2110 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: thamannamanan1

mukti s shopping with manan


it was awesome



who s that n how he knows nandu ????????


Thank a lot...
sweetheart2110 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: dhillon90

Amazinggg
Suprrbbb update
So cute nandu
Lovd it



Thank you so much...
sweetheart2110 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: udtarockstar

I just can't get over your way of writing..

You always somehow manage to make your readers more excited abt ur story..
This time I thought surprise is gonna b a dress..bt wait..thats not it..
And now m excited to know what it'll b..

My interest in ur story keeps increasing by every chapter.. please keep updating.. and that too soon.. :)

Thanks for pm.. take care..
Keep smiling.. :)


Thanks a lot dear... You really don't know what your comments do to me... You really motivate me to write ... Thanks a ton... And pleasure is all mine...I am happy and content that you like my way of wiring... Thank you...
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update ..

manan shopping with mukthi ..

love it

who is that person ?? how he knw Nandani ???suspense ..

waiting for next update ..

thnks for pm ..

stay blessed ..
Edited by Manansamkhan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update
Is that new guy abhi??
Or maybe madhyam
And how come he knew nandini but she didnt???
MYSTERY!!!!!!!!!!!!
waiting for the next chapter
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update...
Luved it...
Who's d person???
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...

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