MaNan FF - I WILL MAKE YOU MINE U/P CHP 20 20/02 page73 - Page 13

O ho...!! that was beautiful update..
when he feel her soft touch removing and he looked at her and grabbed her hand again and said intently looking in her eyes...Aww..how cute...
Loved jealous Manik..
keep smiling n stay healthy..

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Lovely but too short yaar

The update was so chotuuu...
Hey i liked ur story n read all in one go... N why does nandu sy so many soorry yaar...
I saw tht u were angry coz u didnt get a good response ... But trust me this is just a start n may b ur 1st FF... So not many ppl knw u... But once u become a old writer here...n write 1-2 or mire FF thn u see the response... It would b tremendrous... Ur way of writing... Penning ur down.. Everything us beautiful... But it will take tym...SO KEEP PATEINCE... N enjoy writing this Ff...n see one sy u'll get more thn 300 likes...

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amazing update

I know..I know guys this is so small for you guys...but trust me I am so much busy and even my health is no supporting me...I have completed this chapter too in long time...due to some family functions I am not able to...I am so sorry...I apologise...please accept that update and please like and comment...I will try to update soon...

Keep smiling <3

Chapter 6

As they came out Cabir and Muqti passed a nod to each other and started with their second evil plan to know about their stupid best friends feelings...Cabir said looking in Manik's eyes which he was avoiding knowing well what is going to come yaar...Manik kaha reh gaya tha tu...yaha pe khane ke lie world war ho gae the...sambhal apni is lady bheem ko...bahut maarti hai yaar...vese tu itni der tak kar kya raha tha andar? Or Nandu...he was going to continue but was interrupted by Aliya who had bought food for the bhukkads and said cabir tujhe bhook lagi thi naa...to ab thoos...mujhe bol raha tha khana hai ya nahi...and all burst out laughing seeing Aliya mocking at Cabir and he mocked back saying tu laai hi itni der se to baato se hi pet bhar raha tha...laa ab finally le hi aai hai to de naa...yaa khud kha jaegi sara? and Aliya huffed again and all again laughed their heart out but Manik just smirked or smiled a little and Nandu noticed this and alas...she had never seen him laughing...that's strange...she was still busy in her thoughts that she didn't realised that everyone has stopped laughing and was looking at her with curious eyes as they wanted to know what is she thinking so deeply but when she came out of her thoughts she saw all of them looking at her and she was surprised and asked what? Why you all are looking at me like this? Muqti?? Kya hua?? Kuch laga hai kya face par? She was blabbering and jabbering continuously and all were amused to see this awtar of ever so sweet Nandu...but again nobody replied and started laughing like crazy...and this time Manik too was laughing and the whole world stopped their for her...he looked soo good when he laughed...even other too stopped laughing seeing Manik laughing after ages...but he didn't stopped..he was still laughing his heart out and all were admiring him...when he controlled his undying laughter he saw all looking at him and he gave a what happened look to them and then realised that he was laughing and that too so much...His heart was happy and was dancing that finally someone was broking the walls he had created long back slowly and he was loving it...woww that was amazing...laughing like manic after so long...but when he saw HER admiring him something stirred in his heart as he wanted to tell her something...actually not something but everything related to him and wanted to know about her...and she too was looking in his eyes wandering what is he thinking and why he was looking confused? What is bothering him? There is so much they need to know about each other...

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Amazing update
Bhukadd cabir hajahahaha...haan hasi bn gye...manik smile krte rha kro bht ache lgte ho...lovd it
Continue soon

W all loved your story. Do continue.

Another lovely update..cabir and mukti are having fun planning to know manan feelings for eachother..and Maniks hearty laugh with him realizing the reason for his smile is nandini and being happy about it..and he wants to share everything about him with her and nandini too wants to know what he is thinking..though a chotusa update but loved everybit of it..looking forward for the next chapter..take your time and update when possible..take care :)

Cute story