MANAN FF- EVERY TRUE LOVE DOESN'T HAVE A HAPPY ENDING!! (part 3-pg 2)

Page

1044737

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

PROLOGUE!!!!

WHY ALWAYS ME!!!😭

I HATE YOU VINOD!!! I JUS HATE U"

a girl was aimlessly running on road..having no idea what was happening around her nd finally stopped near her favorite place beach which gives her peace!!

She is cursing god for hurting her so badly!!

"Ayyippaa!! Apne mere sath yesa kyun ki pyaar hi tho kiya!! Kya pyaar karna itna bada gunna hey!! Agar usse mujhe chod na hi tha mere paas aya hi kyun!! Ayyippaa!! Why do this always happens to me!! Jisse bhi mein pyaar karu kyun aap unn logon ko mujhse cheen lethey ho!! Haan!! Are you jealous seeing me happy?? Haan!! Bolo na!!! Agar mujhe aap khush nahi dekh sakthey toh aap kyun bhejthey ho unne meri life!! Haan!! Bolo na ayyippaa!! Pehle Amma Appa!! Phir Rishu!! Nd Amms tho mujhe bachpan se mujhe nafrat karthi hey!! Aur abh Vinod!! Kya mein kisiki pyaar ke layak nahi hyun?? Ae sab sirf mere saath hi kyun hotha hey!! I JUS HATE MYSELF!! I HATE MY LIFE!!! NO-ONE LOVES ME!! nd starts crying vigorously!!!

Hie guys!! I have been an silent reader!! But I love writing!! I am sacred to express!! Becoz I don't want any one to get hurt by my words!! But wen I started express my feelings to few writters in this forum!! Nd they felt happy!! I know u ppl may think wats there to get scared in expressing feelings!! We say na CHILDHOOD FEARS!! same case!! Hope u understood!! I know mein bohout bolthi hyun!! This story is one my favorite writings!! Hope you ppl enjyd it!! Plz express ur views in comment box!! I know its too much to ask!! Plz try to!! Nd plz do like!!! Plzzz!! I will continue the story on the basis of it likes!!! Plz!!! Plz dnt copy my story!! Ask me if u wanna post it in ur page!! But plz do not copy!! Plzz!!!

Edited by UggliBuggli - 9 years ago

Quote

Frequent Posters

1044737

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

CHARACTER SKECTH!!
Nandini Moorthy- A girl with chuby cheeks Age- 18
College-Space Academy!!
nd she neva judges people
She loves music!! she lost her parents wen she at 13 due to carelessness of the pharmacy department who xchangd their tablets in a hurry!!She HAD a brother RISHAB MURTHY!! she loves him to the core!! after her parents she considered him as her only family!! But even he wen she was 15 due to an accident (which is actually not)... she is d nly heir of moorthy industries!! so basically shez rich!! but actually not!! (why actually not u will get to knw it in further parts) At present she lives in her own BUNGALOW with her Amms,Chacha,Chachi!!havng three besties NAVYA,MUKTI,ALIYA

Rishab Moorthy- He is like an father role for Nandini!!
Age-27 wen he passed away
Late owner of Murthy Industries
Hates her Amms and chacha becoz they miss behave with nandini!!
Loves nandini to the core!!! can do anything jus to make her happy!! But unfortunately passed away in an PLANNED accident!!
Chachi- She is a sweet person!!
She loves both nandni and rishab equally!!She is an god sent mother for both of them!! Nandini shares each nd every secret with her!!

Chacha- NEGATIVE ROLE but in future turn into a POSITIVE ROLE
He is a greedy person!! Money minded!!
He wants to become the owner of moorthy industries by hook or crook!!He hates nandini as she is nt the heir!!nd pampers rishab alot thinkng he will write nd company on his name !!

Amms- NEGATIVE ROLE

Hates nandini to the core!!Becoz she thinks she is responsible of her(nandini's) parents death!!

Vinod Kumar- Nandini's EX!!
Double Faced person!! Can easily manipulate anyone with his words!!he dates girls jus to fulfil he greedy needs!! or say lustful desires!!

NOW COMES THE HERO

Manik Malhotra- The HHH of college!!

(HHH-Hot Handsome Hunk!) Rich enogh to hav minimum luxuries!! playboy types!! loves music!! Guitarist!!neva had any serious relationship!!But never crossed his limits!!Loves to make people happy!!Have Two best buddies!! DHRUV ND CABIR!!

Cabir Dhawan- The prankster of SPACE ACADEMY!!Has a great sense of humour!!
Drummer!!
Loves Mukti but sacred of xpressng it!!
Brother of Navya!!

Navya Dhawan- Sassy Sissy of Cabir!!Lives life to the fullest!! Science Student!!Hot rich nd BOLD ;) In relationship with Dhruv!!

Dhruv Vedanth- The Naughty boy of SPACE ACADEMY!!Loves navya to the moon nd back!!Can do anything just to make her happy!!
Brother of MUKTHI VEDANTH!!
Guitarist!!

Mukti Vedanth- The Tomboy of Space academy!!( Doesnt hav any past..shez tomboy from birth) Loves cute guyz!! Science student!! LIKES cabir!! But is too stubborn to accept it!!

Aliya Malhotra- Simple girl!! Loves INDIAN TRADITIONS!!
Keyboard player!! Manik's sister!!

Harshad Saxena- Distant cousin of Nandini!!In love with aliya head over heals!! But doesnt hav enough courage to xpress!!Treats Nandini as his sister!!Guitarist!!Prankstar!!cabir nd harshad are evil twins!!

Abhimanyu.aryaman,soha,nyonika,Pandit!! will be described wen dat character comes into story!!

Hope u ppl liked d character skecth!!
As i tld its a different concept! so chracters are also different!!

plz do like!!

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

1044737

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

Part1

Nandini's POV-

'No nandu!! abb bohout hogaya!! u wont cry!! pyaar na sirf aur sirf takleef dethi!! sirf takleef!!!tuh jisse bhi bhi pyaar karegi na woh tujhe chod ke chela jayega!! abh se no love!! pehle amma appa!!phir rishu!! abh vinod!! woh sadu!! woh jerk!! wow dare he!! usne kya socha!! agar woh chod ke chalajayega toh mein jee nahi sakthi!! noo NANDINI MURTHY is strong!! abh se no love!!

I NANDINI MURTHY PROMISE MY SELF KI I WILL NEVER LET LOVE ENTER IN MY LIFE!!!

I will restart my life!! yes!! ohh shit 3:00 hogay!! chudail ek ghante mein utt jayegi!! agar uss ko patha chala ki mein raath ghar peh nahi hyun khacha khaa jayegi!!! chal baag nandu!! bhaag!!' with that nandini reached back home at 3:45!!

End of Pov

She opened her room door nd was shocked to see chachi there pacing worriedly in her room!!

nandini-chachi aap yaha??

chachi- nandu!! she hugged her.. beta kaha thi tuh raath bhaar haa?? patha hey mein kitni darr gayithi!!

nandini- chachi..woh..woh mein beach gayi thi!!
chachi- beach?? bacha tuh teek henna?? phir se jagada hua kya tere aur vinod ke beech?? hey bhagwan!! aap dono ladna kabh chodoge!! i am iss bhaar bhi ussi ka galthi hoga peechli baar ki tarah!!

dats it for nandini startd cryng badly hugging chachi!!

FLASHBACK

Nandini- vinod tune mujhe yaha kyun bulaya?? agar kisine dekh liya toh!! agar uss vyshnavi ne dekh liya toh!! dftnly chudail ko bolegi!

Vinod- aabh darr ne khi zaroorat nahi hey!!

Nandini-haain?? i dint get you!! darr ne ki zaroorat nahi matlab??

Vinod- its over etween us nandini!!
Nandini- what????????????????????????? vinod r u out of ur mind!! yeh koi mazak nahi hey!!
she was literally begging vinod tell its a joke nd not the reality!!

Vinod- yeh mazak nahi hey nandini!! i'm sick nd tired of u!! tumari yeh bachkane har kathose mein taang aa chuki hyun!! tumare saath bahar jaane mein mujhe embarass feel hotha heey!!! nd u want me to stay with u life long!! no way!! jus get lost!!! anyways for ur kind information mein kal se clg nahi aa raha hyun!! i knw mein aaungi toh tuh sabke saamne puchogi!! aur mereko embarass feel karvavogi!! so goodbye!!! hope i never see you again!! by the way!! ur lips r too sweet!! i love them!!

telling that he kisses her forcefully for the last tym nd leaves from there!!

nandini stood there like a statue not knwg wat to do!! nd seeing her nly love!!her first love!! gng far away frm her!!kicking her out of his life!!!

FLASHBACK ENDS

PRESENT-

Chachi- hai mera bacha...shh.shhh. kuch nahi hey!1 mein hyun na tere saath!!! tuh mere strng bachi henna nahi royegi tuh!! tume ye jo bachpana hey na wahi sabse acchi baath hey betta!! shh..shh.. chup hoja!! acha hua chala gaya!! tere liye tere ayyappa ne sonna munda dekha hoga!!
Nandini- nahi chachi!! abh aur nahi!! bohout hogaya!! life mein jinse bhi pyaar kiya na ayyappa woh sab ko leke chale jayenge!1 abh nandini murthy ke life no love!!! ah nahi sehan sakthi mein!! i wont let any hurt me again!!

Shanooo... amms calls chachi frm down!!

Chachi- lagtha hey chudail utt gayi!! abh tuh jaa soja!! tuijhe aram ki zaroorat hey!!

with dat chachi goes down kissing nandini's forehead

MORNING 10:30

MUKTI AND ALYA comes to nandini's home!! they call chachi standing outside main gate!!

TRING!!TRING!!

Chachi- Haan mukti beta bol!!
Mukti-Chachi dayan ghar pe hey kya??
Chachi- Nahi beta chudail aur murthy ji donno kuch kaam ke liye bahar gaye hey!! shaam takk vapas nahi ayenge!! aap donno andar aa sakthey hey!!

Mukti- ji chcahi!!
Alya-! chachi ke saamne amms ko dayan bolrahi ho?? pagal ho kya??

Mukthi-chill alya!! chahi bhi chudail bothi hey!!abh andar chal!! dayan ghar peh nahi hey!! shaam tak nahi ayegi!!
With that they both go inside

Murthy mansion

Alya- namasthe chachi

Mukti-hey chachi

Chachi- hello baacho!!

Mukti- chachi nans kaha hey??

Chachi- woh so rahi hey beta!!

Alya- kya woh ab thak so rahi hey?? chachi woh teek hey na!! tabiyat teek hey na usski??

Chachi- nahi alya!! kal usska aur vinod ka breakup hua!!

WITH THAT SHE NARRATES WHOLE FLASHBACK PART LEAVING THAT KISS PART BECOZ SHE KNWS AGAR MUKTI KO PATHA CHALEGA ABOUT THAT KISS VINOD IS DEAD!!

DATS IT WITH THAT MUKTI AND ALYA RAN UP WITHOUT GIVNG A CHANCE TO CHACHI TO STOP!!ND MESGD NAVYA TO COME TO NANDINI'S PLACXE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!!

Preacap:- Nandini nd Vinod few flashbacks!!
Manik's entry!! Dhruv and Navya's lil romance!!
Mukti to break manik's hand!!

Hie guys!!! in this ff Igive attention to all characters!! Hope you ppl like it!!Plz do like!!

Edited by UggliBuggli - 9 years ago

Quote

prathyushaeluri

@prathyushaeluri

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

interesting

continue soon

----------------------------------------

manan FF linked by destiny (https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kaisi-yeh-yaariaan/4491577/manan-ff-linked-by-destiny-part-17-b-pg-139-23-feb)

Quote

1044737

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: prathyushaeluri
interesting
continue soon

thank yeww!!

----------------------------------------

manan FF linked by destiny (https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kaisi-yeh-yaariaan/4491577/manan-ff-linked-by-destiny-part-17-b-pg-139-23-feb)

Quote

1044737

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

Part-2

Nandini's Room:
NANDINI is sitting in a corner nd blankly starring at key chain!!!
FLASHBACK
Vinod- Nandu yeh kya hey???
Nandini- khol ke dekhona!!!
Vinod- key chains???
Nandini- arey buddhu!! Yeh sirf key chains nahi hey!! Couple keychains hey!!!
Vinod-ohhh
Nandini- iss mein Jo ladki ka hey woh tumare liye aur ladka ka mere liye!!
Vinod- okkie sweetheart!! Yeah lo!!! ND THEY KISS!!!
FLASHBACK ENDS!!
Nandini- kyun ayyappa kyun????

JUST THEN MUKTI AND ALYA ENTERS
Mukti- Nans tum teek ho naa!!!
Alya- babyyy!!!
NANDINI LOOKS AT THEM WITH TEARY EYES!! ND STARTS CRYING HUGGING THEM
Nandini- muku yeh sirf mere saath hi kyun hotha hey?? Kya mein inti buri hyun??? Bolo na muku!! Als tum toh bolo!!!
Mukti- nahi Nans!!! Tum bohout acha ho!! Woh jerk unlucky hey!!! He doesn't deserve u Nans!!
Alya- han baby he is not worthy ur love!!! Tumare pyaar paane ke liye they should be made of gold!! Becoz u r made of diamond!!!
JUS THEN NAVYA ENTERS
Navya- Nandu!!!
Nandu tuh tuh roo math mein Bhai ko bolke uska hadiya todvadhungi!!! Tuh roo math bacha!!!shh... Shhh... Chup hoja!!!
ND THOSE THREE STARTED CONSOLING HER!!

" A broken heart is one of those experiences that all of us as humans can share, yet you can only experience alone!!!
Everyone tells that sharing problems can reduce pain!! But the truth is it increases!!! Every time you share your problem.. Every minute u remember it!!! Nd everysecond you suffer more!!!"

EVEN NANDINI IS GNG THROUGH THE SAMETHING!!! AS SECOND PASSES HER PAIN IS INCREASENG!!! SHE IS NOT ABLE TO LET GO OFF HER MIND OFF THOSE BEAUTIFUL MEMORIES SHE HAD WITH HER TRUE LOVE!! ONLY LOVE!!

Nandini- (to herself) nahi Nandu u cant show ur weak side to anyone not even to als muku nd nav!! I know it they won't tell me but deep inside they think dat they are responsible for this for nt enquirng abt Vinod!! No Nandu u shld pretend to be strong in front of them!! Yes Nandu u can do it!!!
WITH THAT SHE BROKE THE HUG!!

Nandini- guys abh bohout hogaya yeh rona dona!! Mera chera karab hogaye ga!!! Nd aap log kyun ro rahe ho??? Haan!! Mera break up hua bas! Koi Mar nahi gaya!!!
Mukti ALYA nd navya- NANDINI!!!!!
Nandini- ahhh!!! PALMING HER EARS!!! Chilla kyun rahe ho??? Arey baba mazak kar rahi thi!! Acha OK sry!!! Cholly!!!*puppy face*
All three smiled- Aweee!!!!!!
Mukti- let's have a break up party!!!! Yayeee!!! Finally tujhe humse milneko tym milega!! Nd voh negro nahi hoga tujhe humse cheene ke liye!!!
Alya- yayyy!! Break up party!!!
Navya- par muku dayan??
Mukti- arey dayan aur cricket ground donno bahar gaye hey!! Shaam tak nahi ayenge!!! So chill!!! Shaam tak nandini humari hey!!!
Alya- Nandu chal abh fresh hoja!! Bohout stink kar rahe ho chee!! Yuck!!
ND NANDINI PLAYFULLY HITS ALYA ND GOES TO WASHROOM FOR SHOWER!!!
IN ROOM-
Navya- Nans nahi bolegi par woh teek nahi hey muku!!!woh sirf humare samne strng honeki pretend kar rahi hey!!!
Alya- haan muku issliye kyun ki usse patha hey that we are blaming ourselves for not knowing abt Vinod properly!! ND ALYA STARTS CRYING!!!
Alya- navz I want our childish nandu back!!! Plzz kuch karo plzz!!!
ND MUKTI IS CONSOLING HER!!!
SAME TIME NAVYA'S PHONE RINGS!! ITS FROM CABIR!!
navya- haan Bhai bol!!
Cabir- ek surprise hey!!!
Navya- life is a surprise bhai!! IN A LOW TONE
cabir- baby kya hua!?? Y r u soundng low??
Navya- Bhai woh nandini aur Vinod ka breakup hogaya ND TELLS HIM WHOLE STORY TILL ALYA CRYING!!
cabir- uss Vinod ko toh mein chodunga nahi!! Saala marega mere haath mein!!!
Acha ek kaam kar tuh muku als aur Nandu abhi ke abhi ghar pouhach!! Mere paas ek surprise hey tum chaaro ke liye!!!
Navya- okk Bhai hum aathey hey!!!
AFTER BIDDING BYE ND ASSURNG HER CHACHI THAT NANDINI WILL BE HOME BEFORE AMMS REACHES HOME THEY ALL LEFT FOR DHAWAN MANSION!!!

DHAWAN MANSION-

ALL FOUR ENTER MANSION HAVING FAKE SMILE ON THEIR FACES!!

Cabir-Nanduuu!!! ND HUGS HER

NANDINI TO ESCAPE FROM THESE SENTI ATTACKS

Nandini- Bhai aap ne is keliye humme yeha urgently bulaya???
surprise kaha hey???

Cabir-yeh raha surprise!!!
ND A YOUNG MAN AGE AROUND 19-20 CAME OUT WITH A BIG SMILE ON HIS FACE!!SEEING HIM ALYA RUNS ND JUMPS ON HIM WITH UTMOST HAPPINESS!!

Alya- bhaiii!!!!!! bhai kaise ho app!!! 5 saal hogay aap ko dekhe!!!5 dino se mere call kyun nahi lift karaho!!!itna busy ho app haan!! apne behen se bhi baath nahi kar saskthey ho!!

ND YES HE IS NONE OTHER THAN THE HEARTTHROB OF OUR HEARTS!!

MANIK MALHOTRA!!!

Manik- saans toh lele behana!!! mein iss liye call lift nahi ki kyunki mein tum sabko surprise denna chatha tha!!

Alya- PaR...

Manik - before u ask me question let me tell you answer ki mein cabir kobhi nahi bataya cabir se bhi mein abhi mili hyun!!! khush!! ND HUGS HER AGAIN

MUKTI COMES NEAR HIM WITH A HOCKEY STICK ND BEATS HIM HARDLY ON HAND!!

Manik- ouuuchhh!!!! muku!!!! tere town mein aise welcome kar they hey!!
Mukti-nahi issebhi Buri tarah welcome karthey hey!!! kaamina 20 dinn hogay mujhse baath karke!!tere coffe date ke baad mujhe call kyun nahi kiya haan!! bol!!

Manik- muku..woh...wohh...

Mukti- wohh.woh.. kya!! haan!! aur date ke baad tujhe patah uss ladki ne cal karke kitni danti thi mereko ki meri himmat kaise hui ki mein ek GAY ke saath usski date fix ki!!!

CABIR ALYA NAVYA - GAY???????

Precap:- GAY coffee date story...dhruv nd navya romance..

Hie guys!!! guys mein flashback parts mein kissing scenes zyada elaborate nahii karungi!!!
Hope u lyk this part!! Plz do like!!

Quote

1044737

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

PART 3

All- GAY????

Mukti- Haan guys!! iss idiot ne uss lisa ko vahi kaha ki yeh GAY hey!!!

Manik- arey muku woh..woh..

Mukti- Kya wohh...woh.. tuh sach bolega yea mein tumari woh washroom wala secret leek kardhu!!

(Even they act infront of everyone as jus frnds they hav a secret bond of besties which they dnt wanna share with anyone!! they have a very pure bond!! u cant name bro-sis!! nor u can name them lovers!!no name is worth deir bond!! u can name them SOULTWINS!! yes SOULTWINS!! becoz they both are mirror reflection of eachother!! they act as if they dont care!! but deep inside they are one who cares the mostt!!!)

Manik- nahi...(horrified)..main batatha hyun!!

Mukti-bol!!

Lisa- She is a hot chick!! she uses men jus for her sexuual desires!! shakal se innocent dikhthi hey!! she creatd her profile in a datng aap for new men!!

mukti was browsng in internt wen she saw her advrstmnt nd thought is looks good with manik nd fixd her date with manik in a coffee shop!!!

FLASHBACK!!

20 days back!!

Patricia Coffee Brewers Shop!!

Eveng 4:30

Lisa is waitng for waitng for manik in a private cabin!! nd as usual our Manik is late!!

After good 20 mins Manik enters!!

Manik-I'm soo sorry!! i'm really sorry!! I was stuck in traffic!! I'm sorry!!

Lisa- Yeah its ok... sit down!!

Manik(in mind)- maine isse kahi dekha hey!!par kaha!!hmm!!

Lisa- where are u lost??

Manik-Ahh!! nthg!! you look beautiful lisa!!

Lisa-thanks hottie!! ;)

Manik(in mind)- Hottie?? yeh toh baadi fast nikli!!

Manik-What would u like to hav??

Lisa- I would LOVE to have u dear!! with a naughty smile!!

Manik- What?? Excuse me?? (shocked)

Lisa- I mean I would love if you choose for me!!

Manik- ok!! Hot MOKA!!

Lisa-There cant be anythng more hot than you!!

Manik(in mind)-yeh toh bohout bold hey yaar!!Muku kaha phasa diya tune mujhe!!

Jus then lisa"s phone startd ringng!!

Lisa-Hottie!! its imp!! i will just be back!!! until then miss me!! ;) :*

Manik- Yea sur!! *fake smile*

Lisa leave!!

Manik- MIss you!! oh god!! maine isse kaha dekha????yes! yes! david!! david ke saath!! par kabh!!hmmm!!! OMG!! she is that one night stand girl!!! Oh god!! Muku kaha phasa diya mujhe!! tujhe toh mein chodunga nahi!!

Lisa comes back and sits on manik's lap instead of chair!!

Lisa- sry hottie... it was an imp call!! i hope i dint made wait soo long!! come lets do it!! as its privte cabin no-one can see us!! SEDUCTIVELY MOVING HER FINGER ON HIS FACE!!

MANIK GOT UP WITH A JERK!!WHICH MADE LISA FALL DOWN!!AS HER ONE HAND WAS AROUND MANIK'S NECK THAT RESULTLD IN MANIK LYING ON TOP OF LISA!!

Lisa-Awee hottie!! I guess you are too eager to do it!! ND PECKED HIS CHEEKS!!

Manik's POV!!

She enterd into cabin with a naughty smile!! instead of sitting on chair she sat on my lap nd put her left hand around my neck nd nd with right hand index finger she is seductively caressng on my face!!

Lisa- sry hottie... it was an imp call!! i hope i dint made wait soo long!! come lets do it!! as its privte cabin no-one can see us!!

"What??? bhagwan plzz mujhe bacha lo!! mera izzat kathre mein hey!!! plz mujhe bachav!! muku agar isski vajah se mei virginity gayi na!! trust me!! i swear chodunga nahi tujhe!!" I thought!! (with a horrified face)

I got up with a jerk which made me rgret my action!!

Lisa-Awee hottie!! I guess you are too eager to do it!! ND PECKED MY CHEEKS!!

"Beta kuch soch!! nahi toh muh dekhane layak nahi bachega!!! (in mind)

END OF POV

With that she placed her lips on his!!

Manik stood with a jerk as soon as she left her lips!!nd this made Lisa annoyed nd confused!!

Lisa- what is this hottie?? dn wry no-one will come!! i lockd the door!! lets do it!! SEDUCTIVELY LICKING HIS COLLAR BONE!!

Manik moved away witha jerk!!

Manik-NOOO!!! (he shoutd with a horrified face!!) we cant do it!!

Lisa-Why u wanna do it on bed?? (naughtily)

Manik- no!! we cant do it!1

Lisa- Why?? (annoyed)

Manik- becozz...becoz... {(in mind)kuch soch beta izzat ka sawal hey!!} becoz i'm a GAY!!

Lisa- What??? (horrified) (shocked)

Manik- yes!! I'm a GAY!! I even hav a BOYfrnd!!

Lisa- you iodiot,jerk,asshole!! how dare u moron to waste my time!! ND POURS JUG FULL WATER ON MAIK ND KICKS HIS ASS ND GOES AWAY!! LEAVING A SHOCKED+HORRIFIED+DRENCHED MANIK MALHOTRA!!

FLASH BACK ENDS!!!

All except manik brust out laughng catchng their stomach!!!

Precap- Manan scene!!