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Posted: 9 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: Pradishma143

Nice start... wrap it fast .. coz if u don't kno rituals(neither ik) u won't be comfortable penning it down do wrap it fast ... rest is ur choice.don't soon

Keep shining



Yupp ..this is the only thing...
As I dnt knw abt them...I am not able to write it..!!!
Thanks for understanding... 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: estherzac

Nice ss
Continue soon.do pm me...
Stay blessed


Thanks...
And will pakka pm uu 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#93
Sorry, for typing mistakes, if any

HAPPY READING

PART -4


The function was over...all the guest were gone...only some family members were present...

we fab-5 were sitting ,chatting with each other...
when mukti saw nandini coming towards us...

Mukti- bhai!! Bhabhi is coming...

all got alerted with it and I was suspicious that now why is she here...i was looking at her without blinking my eyes...

cabir- aakhe bahr aa jayegi bhai...!!!! he mocked at me while all other chuckled...

Nandini came and passed a smile to all...mukti asked her to sit but shei politely denied it and turn towards me...


Nandini- Manik...we need to talk...

she directly asked me while all other gave me a teasing smile...!!!

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nandini came to a room and I too followed her keeping in mind no body saw us..!!!

there was complete silence in room then...

Manik- Nandini...( with this she came out of her thoughts and looked at me and instantly moved her eyes...!!

Nandini- vo manik mene Jo bhi us din kha...voh...I mean...

she was stammering...
then she closed her eyes and said in one breath " manik , I didn't wanted to hurt u, I'm really sorry for what I said and I will give my 100% to work this marriage...so can we be friends...???
with this she opened her eyes...

all this while i was just looking at her that how innocently she was saying all that but still i was hurt with her words but also I can not deny her this look...
I dnt knw when I was standing so close to her...I can clearly listen her heartbeat...
I put my hand on her chin and make her look to my face...
as soon as her eyes met mine...for the first time I noticed her deep eyes...how innocent they were...

Nandini's pov

I was looking down releasing my breath when manik came dangerously close to me, I was getting insane with his fragrance , his hot breath were falling on my nose...dnt knw what charm this man carries with him...how much I try to not fall for him but...!!!
then he kept his finger on my chin...my godd!!!! his touch...I would have collapsed if I wouldn't hv hold of table kept beside me...
I looked at his face and our eyes met...!!!!!
I started feeling week in my knees...but then i remember...I cnt fall for him...

"Manik tum ye kya kr rhe ho, koi dekh lega!!" said nandini slowly and stammeringly...

this brought a smirk on manik's face making nandini confuse...

Manik- so agar koi nhi dekhega to u dnt hv any problem...is that so..??? he said while smirking and sliding his fingers on her arms...

nandini's eyes popped out hearing his words and manik was enjoying her condition and then he said...
"vese if u forgot 'soon to be Mrs Malhotra' we are alone in this room

He brought my hand upto his face and kissed my knuckles while I was at loss of words...

then he looked in my eyes and said " friendship accepted but yet u need to work hard for ur apology" and he left the room...
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At night..

manik was sitting on bed with laptop in his lap...actually he was lost in nandini's thoughts but his pa called him and informed that the deal he is going to sign has problem which needed to be solved otherwise will cause a great loss to their company..!!!

Manik was so engrossed in his work that he didn't even realised the time and slept in the same position...

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MORNING

Nandini's pov

I woke up with the ring of my alarm nd all the memories of past night flashed in my mind...I dnt knw what was I feeling that time and what is this feeling which I'm experiencing now...

My thoughts were disturbed by the beep of my phone indicating a message...

as soon as I read the message my face lightened up , it was message of navya reminding me to get ready to pick varsha

with a happy face I went to washroom to get ready...as we will be leaving in 1 and half hour for airport to pick her...

navya was there on time and as soon I get into the car...I hugged her...as finally we three will be together..we both were equally happy...

we reached. before time and were waiting for her to land...the time passed by recalling our childhood memories and then there was announcement of her flight...and here she came...

as soon she came we both hovered over her not even able to breath she said...relax guyzzz, marna nhi h mujhe itni jaldi...let me breath at least...

NAVNI- we missed u!!
varsha- i missed u both too...

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all chit-chatting with happy faces we were going when suddey navya shouted
"Manik"

NANDINI'S POV

as soon as navya shouted his name, I looked in the direction where she was looking and saw him...
but the first question came in my mind "what was he doing here?" and then I noticed his luggage and then...
"WTH,
why is he coming here, ??"
I was not so happy ,and with his expression I knew he noticed frowns on my faces but alas how can he leave a chance to come closer to me...

He came near us with his 2 bodyguards and said hye to us..!!

After little introduction and talk navya and varsha left giving time to us...

Manik- hye frienddd...!!!

( he said stracting the word to irritate me)

Nandini- manik stop irritating me and tell me, what are u doing here...??

Manik- aah.. wo I'm going out of country for my concert..

Nandini - but mom told that u will be going after 2 days and where is everyone.?

Manik- yrrr...kitne question puchti ho tum... I hv my office work so I'm leaving before and all other will be there after 2 days and ab agr tumhara ye interrogation khtm ho gya ho to m jau..? there is announcement of my flight...

with this he started to leave and just then ha turned again and pecked on my forehead and said "bye and I will miss u"...

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so finally , like seriously Im done wih the update...i..
I knw I'm late and the only reason is I myself being lazy...
u all are aware of the fact that how awesome our if writers are...so I was just so buzy in reading the stories that I didn't get enough time to write mine...!!!!

anyways here was update...
so now tell me...how was it..??
plzzz leave a comment , it appreciate me a lot and do hit like button

KEEP SMILING

KERP SHINING

LOVE

SAKSHI

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Posted: 9 years ago
#94
Yipee!!! m d frst one to cmmnt...
Its awsm...Manan beinv Freeenzz ;)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#95
Really interesting storyline dear! Do continue soon!😃😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#96
Looking forward the read :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#97
Its a beautifull story
i really liked it alot
bt nandini hamesha manik se aesi ukdi ukdi kyu rhti hai
anyways its a night story
lukin forward to read more
continue soon
n plsss pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
#98
Superb update.
Manik's rumantic mode on. Rumance was very cute.
Nandu is being irritated. 😃
Amazing update.
Will wait for next.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#99
superb manik so cute thanks for pm continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
heya,
interesting storyline looking forward to the bond of MaNan it seems quite interesting...n yes i read all 4 chapters in one go..keep writing dont let lazy bug bite yu 😉 for us 😃
cheers!!
keep smiling!!
Anita

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