MANAN FF: Tu Jo Mila! chapter 2 UPDATED - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sakshi_maheta

hey.. That was really nice
I like it so much
please continue soon
take care dear😊


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Posted: 9 years ago
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chapter 1

The sun shone brightly,the road was filled with cars,buses,bikes...every one was busy in there own work.a school bus came and stopped in front of a 20 floored apartment. a girl of short height got down the school bus and walked towards her apartment.while walking she felt a gaze on her,she looked around and saw a man,probably he was a labor who was washing car,she guessed it by his dirty and somewhat torn cloths...she rolled her eyes and turned her face and started focusing on the road.she never liked the way same ppl see her or i should say gaze her...it was really disgusting but alas she could do nothing about it...she was not a girl who would tolerate anything happening to her but in some cases ignoring such ppl was the best option.

she sighed and stepped inside the lift and pressed the 7th floor button.she stood infront of the door which said murty's and rang the bell.her mom opened the door she greeted her and asked "how was your day nandini?" "it was fine mom"nandu replied and went to her room to change while mrs murty served the lunch.
She was munching her food and watching tv when she suddenly remembered something "mom navya is coming today at 4.she said she wants me to teach her physics we have an exam this Saturday."
"ok beta but i will not be home at that time i have to go out for some work.i will make something to eat for both of you ok? Ok."
After an hour she got a call from navya to tell her that she will be coming now.Her mom had already left .

Though navya was her best friend but nandu never liked teaching her for two reasons.a)she gets distracted very easily and goes off topic most of the time maybe talking about some stupid tv serial, gossiping about some heroins or other silly stuff.b)her face is always painted with a blank expression which makes it very difficult to understand that she understood or not which is very annoying!!

she was pulled out of her chain of thoughts by the sound of the doorbell.she went and opened the door and they went ti her room to study.After 1 hour of teaching talking about silly stuff added with some blank expressions of navya they finally decided to take a break.
"navya you wait here i will get some snaks" "ok".
navya was sitting in nandus room all alone and then she saw nandus phone on her bed.she quickly grabbed it and was looking through her whatsapp messages when suddenly an idea stuck to her mind.with a naughty smirk on her face she took out her own phone and copied a number to nundus phone messaged something.


nandu came back and saw navya doing something on her phone"navya what are you doing ?" with this she took her phone back from her hand and saw what navya was doing."whose number is this navya?"she asked her giving a glare..."this is maniks"navya said causly"manik...the tall guy who is a friend of cabir?"asked nandini."yup" "why did you message him from my number that to you have written soha's name...who is she?"asked a confused nandini."she is his ex girlfriend."said navya looking at her nails. "what???"nandu shouted first looking at the mobile screen and then at navya..


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oh god navya messaged manik from nandu's number and that to soha's name.soha was his ex girlfriend and manik gets very angry on listning to ho her name.what will happen when he sees this message?what will be his reaction?what will nandu do???so many questions...

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i know guys there is no manik it this update but he will come in chapter 2.
and a little info about cabir he is navya's boyfriend and he and manik study in different school than nandu and navya.



thanks to those who all liked and commented on the previous post.
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To be Continued ...
Edited by manan_rocks - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice Start dear
Continue soon
Take care dear😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thank you😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sakshi_maheta

Nice Start dear
Continue soon
Take care dear😊


thank you😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thanks😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome
Amazing
Navya silly talk
Continue soon
Thanks for the pm

Love you
Ekta
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Posted: 9 years ago
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chapter 2
first chat or first fight


after a bit of shouting at navya and some studying navya went to her home leaving nandini all alone in her house."oh god ab mai kya karu?suna h manik is very aggresive and arrogant...agar usne kuch ulta sidha bol diya to?? nai nai nandu aisa kuch nai hoga...be brave and think positive"nandini thought with fear. ting tong."lagta h mam aa gayi".nandini went and opened the door for her mother...they talked for some time had their dinner and nandini went back to her room.all this while she couldnot stop thinking of manik.she took her phone and checked if had any messages from manik and thankfully it had none."jo hoga hone do"thinking this nandini slept.

next morning she was very late for school...she quickly got ready and rushed to the bus stop.the day in school went smoothly."uska koi reply nai aya?"asked navya as they were heading back home."nai navya kal raat tak to nai aya tha."replied nandu."usse dhyan se baat karna ulti sedhi bate mat kardena."said navya."navya mai usse darti thodi na hu vo mujhe kuch bole ga to mai bhi use suna doongi"replie nandini with full on attitude."ha dekh lenge...bye ghar aagay" "bye...navya ko to bol diya par what will i say if he messages me...oh god kaha phas gayi mai"thought nandini looking heavenwards.

nandini went home ate and went to her room.she checked her phone and to her horror there were many messages from maniks number.

who the hell is this

do i know you??

why are you not replying??

just tell me who you are or its not going to be any good for you..

how do you know soha?

REPLY KARO.


"god ab mai kaya karu par yeh aise kaise gussa kar sakta h.i will not leave him now"thinking this nandini replied calmly yet sternly.

"hey...the message was not sent by me...my friend sent it by mistake...dont get so angry and stop being rude".she could not help but add the last line.

i like being rude and i will be rude with you thats my wish and you just tell me who you are and dont try to act smart by telling it was sent by your friend...just tell me.

seeing maniks message nandu became more angry and replied:who i am is none of your business and i told you no that it was a sent by mistake why dont you understand.

you...just tell me who the hell are you...you *****.

mind your language...or else its not going to be good to you.

i am not...just tell me who you are or else there can be real words instead of that star sign.

you know what this is the last time i am telling you that the message was sent by mistake and that to by my friend and there is no fault of mine in this...now this conversation is closed for me...goodbye.

saying this nandu got offline...how could some one talk to her like that if he was manik mallhotra then she also was nandini murty.
Edited by manan_rocks - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
Nice start..liked it...
Continue please..
Take care...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
Ahaan.. Amazing 😃 very well written.. 😉
Ye to awesome se bhi awesome hai.. 😃
MaNan fight ...i enjoyed it really 😆

Please do continue soon..would love to read more... And if possible plz pm me 😊

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