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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: shaan...

Amazing update...

Manan r so cute & ansh is cutest...
Totally luved it...
Sorry 4 cmmntng late...
Plz continue soon...
Will be waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...




Thank you..
Atleast you commented, glad on that part😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Cooldude101

Curse you Shreya curse you!
I'm crying here you dumbass.
I have maths tomorrow but I love you more so well here I am!
I can't tell you the amount of sadness I felt when you didn't want to continue, but here you are making me along with many others smile and cry at the words that so vividly describe the things going on.
Both are broken, and this broken boy is just the missing piece between them.
I can't tell you how much I pride I feel at the fact that you're my sister.
Keep on rocking sis!😳




Hyaeee my behen finally commented...
Wait you have maths what are you even doing here😲
Well I knew you were sad when you told just ok😆
But be happy I am continuing so enjwwaay because you know once I take up things I complete it with full shiiddat😳

Now go kick some asses because it is maths😛
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: siyaaali

Beautiful update.. Ansh is so cute...
Manan ki shadi wow...




thankoos..
Keep the excitement brewing😛
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Annieeeiee

You made me proud girl. Very very proud.

Obviously I am not your mentor but friend and I am glad that you wrote this.
It was good. And you didn't drag it too. It was to the point yet flowing. Thanks for paying heed to my words.
There are mistakes still buy I will let that go. I love little Ansh. He is an Angel :)
So okay they arr getting married. Finally!
Manik is such a cutard :D
Thanks again for not making it mushy-feely. Love loads. Update soon. And please for God's sake pm me. It is difficult to find the ff amidst the swam of many others.
Keep writing and don't get swayed away that if tge response not well then you should stop updating. No!

Annanya



OKay finally you are proud.Finally🥱
When I tell you to give me feedback I ask because I want to improve so ofcourse I will listen to you because you are my pyaara reader.😳

And correction My MAnik is such a cutard alright.
I will keep writing because I want to complete this stroy so bad.IDK why though😆

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Posted: 9 years ago

PROMO😛

After past midnight Manik returned to the room not before checking if Ansh was asleep in his room. He came back to see Nandini sound asleep too. He kept his things and looked around.

His life had changed. He had changed and how much ever romantic that may sound he had changed for Nandini. To be with Nandini.Otherwise how often do you see Manik Malhotra smiling, cracking jokes, buying things from the places she liked and being flirty..It was a rare sight but he had done all these things in the past one month.

He looked at her sleeping figure and the silhouette of both of them that was created in the wall. The moonlight was dim and it entered the room exactly showing her face in the dark. He smiled looking at her and moved in to adjust her face as she had put a pillow over her face. He slowly removed the pillow careful enough not to wake her up from the deep slumber.

He stared at her shamelessly without any hesitation and smiled again. This was a shocker if anyone would see him right now because Manik Malhotra never smiled so much. He was not this mushy and cheesy romantic but now he was imagining all sorts of future with Nandini. He seemed to have a realization and sighed thinking how hopeless he was getting day by day.

He then looked at her one last time and said" I am in love with a girl who might never tell me that she loves me too."

Manik slowly closed his eyes content for finally being able to tell their shadows the state of his heart if not the person in real.But well there wasn't just those shadow in the room as Nandini had heard what he said.

She had not slept and just jumped to bed seeing him come back from study room. As she knew Manik's brain worked very quick she had kept the pillow on her face to hide her facade and not to get caught. But she had felt whatever he did. His touch, that stare which mad her so weak even though she had her eyes closed and his last words.

Nandini woke up from her pretence of sleep as realization dawned pon her.She whispered to herself looking at Manik who had turned the other side and probably was asleep by now"Manik loves me."


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Posted: 9 years ago
No one is mad at you dear, at least I am not. Promo was exciting and I am eager for the update.
Glad that you will update regularly. Must tell you "OUR CHANCE TO LOVE" is one of my favorite. I still go through the chapters. Why? I don't know, but feels good after reading it.

Specially "Devil and his star" chapter. you carried the emotions of two broken soul in that chapter really well. And not only that, in fact all the chapters, all are super mind blowing.

The concept of "Bonded by love" is what attracts me. It's something which is a sought of major issue in the society.

Awesome work, brilliant selections of words and beautiful depiction of the emotions.

Good job.. waiting.. update soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow. ... amzing promo:)Update soon. Waitinggg impatiently :* Pm me too :)
Stay blessed and keep writing AMZING stories :D
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Posted: 9 years ago
the last chapter was really good...Ansh's happiness on knowing that he is finally getting a family that too with people he knows and loves was so palpable...he is such an innocent kid!...frankly manik did the best thing here..he couldn;t have given a better set of parents to Ansh than him and nandu but he should have atleast asked her first..lolz
nandini's reaction was natural..and well written too..i loved manan's convo..the best thing was i had expected manik to say that this arrangement was purely for ansh's sake but he promised her love too..and even in the promo he is already accepting that he loves her..now that was quite a twist ..lolz

i am so excited abt the upcoming chapters..u write really well👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome promo...
Manik's realization was just amazing...
Luved it...
Plz continue soon...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Posted: 9 years ago
mushy and cheesy romantic 🤣
So our thing^ , nahi?
And haaaye khush hogyi mei promo se.


Update kab deri hai?


Annanya

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