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shivanighate.38

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Posted: 9 years ago

#631

I read 5 chapters in a go its awesome hatsoff to ur imagination

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Kritika_05

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Posted: 9 years ago

#632

It was nice really nd d pics u added made it more beautiful
Keep it up 😛

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kimyraa_

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Posted: 9 years ago

#633

Amazing. Amazing. Amazing. Loved it.

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garima64

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Posted: 9 years ago

#634

Amazing ...It was beautiful..!
update the next part ASAP! 😊

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sweet_kaur

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Posted: 9 years ago

#635

Beautiful update
Loved the way you described and potrayed every minor detail
Keep it up and ya Get well soon and Take care!! 😊 ⭐️

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Ria

@riachawlalko

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Posted: 9 years ago

#636

that was such a lovely update
from start to end...i read it all with a smile on my face
mahn! YOU'RE SO DAMN AWESOME AS A WRITER!
the way you play with words is amazing
your writing helps me imagine all this happening in real
well i also say this for a reason...due to some prob,the images you uploaded in the update did not open bt ur description of the things helped me imagine each n every thing
other than that...i literally loved the part where nandini massaged his body n he slept asleep immediately :) such is the power of her touch on his body to bring him at ease so quickly
the idea of babymoon is really cool
seriously mahn! the channel should hire you as their writer! i'm sure you will nail it ;) i mean where do u get such superb ideas from ?!
looking forward for future updates
waiting for manan romance
ps- get well soon !
thanks for the pm !

Edited by riachawlalko - 9 years ago

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Bubbly1234

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Posted: 9 years ago

#637

excellent update always you have some thing new to share lovely keep it up :) <3

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Shivani Agrawal

@shivi07

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Posted: 9 years ago

#638

As always it was amazinggg

For the first I heard about babymoon

Its intersting

I loved how Manik asked chachi so cutely to make pickles

Nd den their care for each other😛

Nd his surprise

Nd how can Manik Malhotra book something small

I lived Itt totally

Take care

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ankitalodha

@ankitalodha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#639

I love your love story and the way u describe the love scene and i love the way you describe nandini's cuteness is just awsome

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yuvasri

@lovelyyuvi10

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Posted: 9 years ago

#640

res

unres...

ufff finally my comment got posted u kno wat dis stupid forum is not letting me to post my comment nd i'm posting this fr the 4th time...

anyway coming to the update...

OMG... such a lovely update it was...

u never miss a chance to make ur readers speechless nah... the way u play with the words... ufff... u please help me in searching words to describe ur work in dictionary srsly i lack words... and also knowing the upcoming track definetely i need ur help to enrich my vocabulary skills...

i hav said dis already nd i'll say it again nd again nd again... dat... the way u portray manan nd their relation... ufff its a bliss or sumthing more thn dat...

i just LOVE it...

manan in a private island fr a week nd aarav's bday is coming and here my heart goes all dhintaanaa...😆

please please please please continue as soon as possible..

keep writing nd smiling... :D

Edited by lovelyyuvi10 - 9 years ago