MANAN FS-Mysterious Kiss LAST PART-114Epilogue-143(Completed)

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ak88

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Posted: 9 years ago

#851

Loved it

U just killed it girl

Pls epilogue bhi de dena

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Manishadevnani

@Manishadevnani

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Posted: 9 years ago

#852

Muje laga hi tha...

Bt ye malhotra siblings always tease nandu...

Waow yr manik ka proposal sun ke kon mana krega usse...

Finally manan r together yippie...

N yes jaldi se epilogue update kro...

Update soon...

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Vandyandy

@Vandyandy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#853

Woooh !!!! Damn good Kavya 👏

Last part was sabh se lamba wala.

Ek hi din main intangible Sara,

Awesome mind blowing

So finally Manik realised that he loves Nandani, and that she is his Mystery Kisser, wow.

Cool haaan Malhotra siblings planned everything , good one .

Mukti srsly DNA test, hahaha

Awww, Nandani got so tensed on hearing that Manik is still in his house, may be not feeling well.

Finally she got the courage to speak up n let her heart out in front of his love.

Finally all swell that ends well.

Thk u for such a sweet ss.

Keep writing.

Epilogue, if u can spare some time to think n write.that would an icing on the cake.

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Princeraj1425

@Princeraj1425

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Posted: 9 years ago

#854

Wow it was just incredible.
I felt like just keep reading it on again n again. It was pure manan.
Such a bliss to read this last part.
U r an exceptionally talented writer. I hope to read ur more works.
Fall in love with manan once again.
These two malhotras siblings are just awesome. I always adore manik n mukti as siblings. They just rocked it together.
That mattress scene, it reminds me of nandu's set up at terrace. One of the cutest scene.
Plz give the epilogue.
N do write some new story related to manan or pani.

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vaastha31

@vaastha31

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Posted: 9 years ago

#855

Wow!?it was just wonderful..
This malhotras r so naughty.. Bichari nandu ko Dara diya..
N I love that mukti nandu convo
DNA test..lol mukti...that part waas really hilarious
N the way they both confessed was also very sweet..every word was soo calm..
U were awesome always girl.. Keep it up...n best of luck for ur xams..

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manandeeplove

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Posted: 9 years ago

#856

awesome update...
my guess was right...
mukti knew abt mystery kisser ...hehe

manan convo was super cute...
d way they confessed...awww
loved it

all d best for ur exams

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siyaaaali

@siyaaaali

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Posted: 9 years ago

#857

Wow its amazing... Fab...love it...

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sophia

@sophiaclarens97

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Posted: 9 years ago

#858

awesome update dear kavya!!! that msg was just damn good.malhotra siblings was just a hilarious part especially they are famous for their smirk😆.that DNA test wala part by mukti was too good.nandu's kiss after hearing manik's scold about not telling him that she was his mystery kisser was nice.that cute confession by manik to nandu was cherry on top of the cake.that kiddish reply 'really' by nandu was so cute to read.you gave an really mindblowing update.keep writing!!!kavya.👏

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ArSha_ManNan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#859

Woww
Its more of a dream- like situation
Nandu's condition after the party...
Mukti n Nandu's convo... Lol...
Nandu finally went to meet manik...
After that it was sooo magical
Nandu kissing him n explaining her pov...
Manik kissing her to stop her...
And then manik's proposal... Hayyeee
Their convo while lying on the mattress so cute ...
Loved it