#3 Devil's Bride manan ff link of thread 4 on pg 1 - Page 64

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Posted: 9 years ago
I guess yeh ab tak ka tumhara sabse zyada emotional update tha...
I was literally crying..
Infact at a moment in a middle i felt the lump in my throat and i cant read anymore
I need a lot of energy to complete this update
Heart wrenching update it was..
Till know i feel ki puri galti manik ki he
bcoz of his impulsive behavior...not for once he tried to clear or atleast share his insecurities with her...
Only decided to punish her..
She was right
when he will realize that she is innocent soul
even if he take a second birth also then also he can reduce the guilt for being inhuman wid her till know
Very very emotional and touchy update
No doubt
Loved it
Directly touches my heart
This story is really very close to me
Cont soon
LOVE,
MINI

PS- HATSOFF DEAR...I KNOW BAHUT MEHNAT OR WILL POWER LAGI HOGI LIKHNA KE LIYA...AS JAB MUJHE PADHNE ME LAGI TO TUMHARA TO ME IMAGINE BHI NI KAR SAKTI.. 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
Its amazing
Jst too emotional
Plz jaldi update karna plzzz
Thankyou soo muchh

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Posted: 9 years ago
That was so emotional!! Both manik n nandini are hurt...but still they love each other... God!! When u created love then why u created so many difficulties in its way... I m really feeling bad for nandini,poor soul,has to face so much for no mistake of hers... The bad phase of their life has began... Thnx for pm... Devils are really very scary now... Pta ni ab kya hoga aage... Pls update soon,waiting eagerly...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Kya misunderstanding itni blind hoti h???
Manik nandu k saamne usko dikha rha h ki she is nthng 4 him n showing the worst sides of him wch she nt even dreamt of...
Agar manik ko lagta h ki nandu ne usko cheat kia h she only dhruv den usko q lagta h ki usko uski in harkaton se farak padega...
Q lagta h manik ko ki wo usse hurt kr paayega jab wo usse pyaar nai krti h...
Q manik khud ko regret feel krvaana chahta h???
Kya is this true love???
Ki tum usse sabse zyada pain do aur wo pain bear v kr le bt fir usko uss pain se chodo b nai...
Jab Manik itne worst words use kr k nandu k liye rota h toh usne ek baar b nai socha ki nandu pe kya bitegi ki uske child ka father usko itna cheap n low samajta h...
I knw at the end manan ll together n I wan together bt I m wondering jis pain se nandu pass ho rhi h ya fir jis pain se manik pass hone waala h kya wo pain unka love heal kr paayega???
Kya nandu wapis kabi jaa paayegi manik k paas???
N dhruv ki sabse badi mistake nt mistake ek blunder krne k baad nandu usko maaf kr paayegi???
Update soon...
It really made me cry 2 see ki jisko koi galti nai h wo log hi sabse zyada pain mein h jisne manik ko misunderstanding krne pe force kia h wo toh mast apni life mein enjoy kr rha hoga bt jo pain h is non other than our manan...
Pls. Update soon...
Let manan together again n this tym beyond forever...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Emotional update
n literally crying
u made me cry by ur emotional words
omg that was an amazing update
both are in so much pain
one who dont wanna let go of her though he is angry on her and the one who feels betrayel used
both are dieing on pain
why they just cant confront each other and talk about it
manik ko kisi ne distrack kiya he mirchi namak bhar bhar ke baate krne se esa lag raha he tabhi to use lag raha he nandu ne revenge liya
thnx for pm
tc
keep writing ur pov it is amzing
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi u r an amzing writer
Really ur work is amazing
Today update was quite emotional feeling sad for nandini the pain she had go through is seriously unbearable
But no offence i like ur concept is unique
Stay blessed
Keep updating
& plzz pm me

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome waiting for the next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey girl I love ur story every part has something unique in it n so did dis one had I loved d way u portrayed all d emotions of being hurt anger love everything it was very nice please keep writing and entertaining us
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Posted: 9 years ago
painfull update dear ur story was owsm ... but what happend to manik why he is doing this... plzz bring manan back...and ur an owsm writer...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thank u so much ash for ur pm.But sorry yaar I think I had became a silent reader of ur from past few updates..Sorry yaar kaan pakadke..but really very sad & emotional update yaar I was crying. Hope next update will come out good ...
U r an awesome writer keep it up 😊

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