#3 Devil's Bride manan ff link of thread 4 on pg 1 - Page 48

Amazing update.the way u organise one chapter after another was mind blowing .thz update was full of emotion and u scripted the emotions very well.eagerling waiting for ur next update👏

emotional update.. u made me cry...pooor nandu.. so this was one of the 2 surprises nandu meant...bt totaly wrong timing sm1 give unlimitd slaps to manik..til his akkal comes back.. neonika is back..bt she talks sensibly...wow... waiting for next update...

Oh God that was so so emotional

arey yar...dis update was sooo chota...
plz ab update jaldi sa kar dey nah..plzzz

hey...
amazing chappy...vry emotinl...
they wre thinking that the othr betrayed thm...this confusion created is making me confuse that aisa kya ho gya london me tht our majnu trnd into devil...bt amazing...nyo ki entry...vo b consoling nandu...shocked to see...anyways...liked the chappy...
cntinue soonnn...dii...
tc

Awsome update...excellent i loved it...
Eagerly waiting for the nxt update..
Thanks for pm..
Update soon...
N plzz pm me

Seriously yaar...a big confusion.
What happened to him all of a sudden...
He loved her like anything still he is but what is this??????ahrrr dying with this suspense yaar...so nandu is pregnant now...that means the flashback is gonna end soon right...I really want to know the reason behind manik's this behavior... Poor nandu ...can't see her like this...that too at this time...she must b happy now as she was pregnant with manik's child...and she is gonna have a complete family soon...but now...i really feel sorry for her...plz plz plz open the suspense soon yaar...u have completed 33parts but still u haven't opened this mystery... Plz reveal it very soon...thanks for the update yaar...will b waiting for the next one...

interesting update...
what happened to manik that he changed so much...
both are hurt😭...but why is manik not trusting her❓
please reveal the mystery behind it soon...
love the way nyonika consolled nandini...
but nandini is totally shattered...she was soo happy to tell him that she was pregnant...😔
plzz continue soon
and if possible plzz give some update on present track too..
thanks for the pm dear😊

Awesome
Amazing
Superb
Emotional update
Aisa kya huya ke manik ko ye sb kch krna padaaa...jldi se mystery unfold kro...aur nyonika kahan se aa gyi...kahin ye ab nyonika ka pln toh nhi...lovd it...continue soon

Awesome awesome awesome update
I literary don't have any words to express how well u
Potrayed the feelings of Nandini when she got betrayed by the
Love of her life
The way you expressed each and every feeling I could
Literary feel the scene taking place in front of my
Eyes I mean it was so virtual that I could feel the emotions
That Nandu was going through
And the way nyonika explained Nandini
Awesome
It seriously couldn't get better than this
Hats off dude u rocked it!!
Stay blessed and keep posting ! 😊