#3 Devil's Bride manan ff link of thread 4 on pg 1 - Page 36

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Posted: 9 years ago
awsum update...manan us too cute..luved it...
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Posted: 9 years ago
hahhahaha ... i ws eagirly w8ng fr ur ds post ... wht aa writer u r yrr .. seriously u r aa dam good .. devil turns into majnu .. hahahhahha ... awsm update ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow wat an amazing update yaar...
Bt ab manan separation...
I feel lyk crying
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Posted: 9 years ago
Loved the update
But don't be sad we like our Manan like this only
Plz give the present track in nxt update
Plz pretty plz
Want to see their present relation
Chalo anyways update was awesome
Continue soon...
Shanhavi
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Posted: 9 years ago
finally u have updated the story..asusual the update was awesome😊
loved majnu manik...they both love each other ...wondering what made manik devil again...

feeling bad for nandini...

airport scene was excellent...

can't wait for next update..plz update soon...'

thank u so much for pm...
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update...
but little sad knowing dat a big storm is gonna come into their lyf..
waiting to kno wat its gonna be...
awww their sooo much in love...
next update will be in present track or continuation of past one...???
please update next part as soon as possible...
thanks fa the pm...
keep writing nd smiling... :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
This is so awesome..loved and that lil devil thing.. Cute.. Hehehe.. But 2 weeks ki judai.. :( update soon.. :) :*
khushiarun thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
I just love it ff a lot...and hope u will continue 😊it...but he last accha update tha!...ab sb bura bura hoga...😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
It was a very emotional n heart touching update...
their beautiful morning...manik teasing her...their cute hubby-wifey talks...loved every bit of it...😊
n ofcourse the convo of manik n his lil devil aka mind was awesome...
offo yaar..y did nandu lost her passport...bichara manik kitna upset hogaya...
wow..nandu made his fav aaloo k parathe... nandu is chhoo cute n sweet...mana hi liya ussne manik ko...
he is soo much in love with her...doesnt wanted to leave her n go...the way he said ke "ghar se nikalne ka pura plan hai na"..it was damn funny...
she being more stuborn dan him...told him to go as it was his father's dream...
yet again the song was perfect for the situation... seriously the POV of manik n nandu...wen manik was leaving was beautifully written...u always amazingly write their emotions n feelings...
i was soo happy that she did came on airport...their hug was bliss...
The way they both were talking luking at each other's photo...was amazing...
nandu is an angel...she has a pure heart...iss update se toh pata chala ki how much deeply they r in love... then wt happened that manik is behaving soo rudely with her... i guess it is surely related with druv...



continue soon n keep smiling...!!😊



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Posted: 9 years ago
hello😊...i just read your story in one go...your an amazing writer.. keep it up👏👏👏 a very diff plot, i was just glued to it that i finished in one day... 😃

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