#2 MANAN FF LOVE IS MY LIFE PART LINK TO THREAD 3 ADDED PG 143 - Page 21

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Tanu_9090

Update na... Pls aur suspense maat bano.. Waise bhi show is doing no mercy on us atleast u do with sone updates ... When will u update ?


Working on it dear will update soon mostly in an hour pakka promise
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: pranitha1866

Hi:):) i just wanted to tell you that your story its just amazing and you know i just feel very nice when i read your ff and i can tell u i wait for your update evryday,day and night :):)
Your writing is just amazing and the way you depict the various kinds of relation like love or friendship its just amazing :) you do justice to all kinda of relations :):) one last thing would like to say is your ff is just amazing and i just love it to the core :):) keep smiling :):) and yeah like others readers i would say update the story na :p just joking :p take our time to update as i know how much time and efforts you guys have to put to write one update :):)


Aawww thank you so much dear 😊😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: shanhavi_manan

Loved it loved it loved it
Totally awesome amazing
Just loving their ignorance game
What a bonding btw fab4 and nandini
Just admiring them
If possible update ASAP
Plz
...
Plz
Thank u for the quick update
Shanhavi


Thank you thank you and thank you 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
i am in luv with ur story iats really sooo amazing i found ur story 2 days ago and i had read all the parts in one go they r sooo nice all the best dear stay blessed
luv u
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Posted: 9 years ago
I read ur story.:) It's wonderful ...:) Continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Di when will you update
Waiting eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
PART 132 :

Seeing nandini moving manik closes his eyes immediately pretending to be asleep.

He slowly opens his one eye and looks her.

Nandu was sleeping by keeping her both the hands under her chin.

Manik gets relaxed and opening his both the eyes smiles cutely looking his love.

He keeps his right hand under his hairs taking his elbow support and gets lost admiring her.

He looks her for sometime silently.

"Chahthi kya ho"

He slowly removes the hairs from her face and tugs them behind her ear.

"Panch saal guzar gaye lekin tum vaisi hi ho jaise main tumhe chod kar gaya tha"

He slowly caresses her ring and "ye anguti"

He slowly touches her locket and "ye chain"

He looks her and "tumhare pairo main payal"

He caresses her cheek and "tumne kuch nahi badla na"

He looks her lovingly and "tum mera intezar karri thi na"

Nandu moves a little and manik immediately tries to take his hand back but fails because nandu holds it.

He smiles seeing her holding his hand with both her tiny hands.

"Mujhe dekh kyu nahi rahi ho mujhse kuch bol kyu nahi rahi ho hmmm"

Nandu makes her grip tighter on his hand.

"Ouchhh"

He looks her and makes angry face.

"Mera chehra nahi dekna hain meri awaz nahi suni hain lekin phir bi katori bar ka daal mere hath pe girani hain"

Nandu slowly moves her lips on his hand and brushes them softly.

He immediately smiles and "ye acha hain tumhara sabke samne hath jalao aur akele main aise maram lagao hain na"

She slowly frees his hand and moves a little close to him.

He looks her and slowly bending down starts playing with her jhumki.

Mujhe na kuch samaj nahi ara hain tumhare dimak main chel kya raha hain matlab jabse main aya hoon tumne mujhse ek lavz bi nahi kaha mujhe tho laga ki tum shayad pehle mujhe marogi dantogi chilaogi phir puchogi ki kyu main bina bathaye us chela gaya

Lekin tumne tho aisa kuch nahi kiya aur mera pura plan flop kardiya haan patha hain main na already plan kar chuka tha ki tumhare mujhse sawal karthe hi main tumhe ignore karunga aur soha se bath karunga aur phir tumhare puchne par usse apna gf batha dunga.

He slowly moves his hand and starts playing with her bangles.

Sryyy I know aise karne se tum bohuth hurt hothi par mujhe tumhare liye hi sab kair bath ye hain ki tumne mujhe 440 volts ka shock dediya haan tum tho meri tharaf deki bi nahi aur tho aur aise behave karri thi jaise main koyi mr india hoon jo tumhe dikayi nahi dera tha.

He looks her and slowly moving closer keeps his head on her heart.

Main tumse door rehna chahra tha par jab tum mujhe ignore karri thi na mujhe bahuth gussa agaya tha aur isliye na chahtha huye bi kitchen main tumhare paas and lifting his head looks her and ab bi yaha tumhare paas nahi aana chahtha tha.

He rests his head back on her heart and closes his eyes.

"Lekin kya karu khud ko rok hi nahi patha hoon tumhare paas ane se"

Nandu slowly opens her eyes and slightly tilting her head kisses his hairs.

Manik immediately lifts his head and she immediately closes her eyes.

He looks her and "tum sach main sori ho na"

Nandu doesn't move and manik sighs.

He slowly moves beside her and taking her left hand kisses it.

"Patha hain itne saal main teek se soya bi nahi hoon"

He entwines their fingers and "maine tumhe bohuth miss kiya"

Nandu moves and keeps her head on his chest.

Looo neendh main door jathi nahi aur hosh main paas athi nahi and nods his head

He looks her and smiles cutely.

Manik places his another hand around her waist and kisses her hairs.

"Aaj mujhe neendh achi ayegi" and holds her tightly smiling.

"Good night doll" and closes his eyes happily kissing her forehead.

Nandu opens her eyes and looks him smiling.

NANDINI POV : am sry manik i know ki tumhe bahuth bura lagra haan par main kya karu tum seede seede mujhe kabi bi sach nahi bataoge isliye mujhe tumhe ignore karna padra hain lekin am even making it up for you haaa and smiles.

She looks him like that silently and "I missed you too manik bahuth"

She smiles seeing him sleeping like a baby.

She slowly caresses his cheeks and "tumhe aaj se har roz neendh achi ayegi mr malhotra"

She softly kisses his forhead and gets busy adoring him.

MORNING 9 AM :

Manik slowly opens his eyes and instantly blushes having a cute smile curved on his lips.

His more than half body was lying on nandu.

His face was very close to hers or rather should I say his lips to hers. His legs were tangled with hers and his right hand was entwined with hers left one. His left hand was on her stomach while her right hand was on his back.

Manik smirks and slowly rubs his nose on hers which were already touching.

He smiles and biting his lower lip slowly whispers "good morning baby"

Nandu hides her face in crook of his neck not wanting him to witness her red flushed cheeks.

He pulls her more closer and "my morning can never be more perfect than this"

She nuzzles her nose on his neck making him smile hugely.

He kisses her hairs while she brushes her lips on his neck.

Knock knock knock

Manik makes an angry pout and holding her tightly closes his eyes.

Knock knock knock

MANIK : arrey kon hain

KABIR : shonaaa darwaza kol na

MANIK : saale ki abi bi perfect timing hain

DHRUV : pariii

Manik looks his love once again and quickly kissing her forhead gets up and opens the door.

MANIK : tum log ye and before he could even complete the sentence kabir and dhruv enter room pushing him away rubbing their eyes.

MANIK : shonaaa

DHRUV : pari

Nandu gets up and smiles seeing them.

She gets down from bed and standing infront of them "good morning"

Kabir and dhruv open their eyes and hugging her "good morning"

Manik couldn't control his smile seeing the trio.

Soon mukthi and alia enter into room same like kabir and dhruv.

Manik nods his head in disbelief.

Nandu smiles and going close to them "good morning"

Mukthi and alia hug her from both sides and "good morning princess"

NANDINI : sab yaha

Kabir and dhruv pull nandu on bed and hugging her "haan tum aaj hame utane nahi aayi na"

Mukthi and alia fall on them and "tho ham hi tere paas agaye"

Nandu smiles and "acha chelo utho ab"

KABIR : nahi

DHRUV : aaj vaise bi koyi kaam nahi hain

MUKTHI : tho please aaj kuch math bol

ALIA : and sleep with us

NANDINI : arey lekin

KABIR : shhh please naa

Manik was silently standing at a distance watching them.

Nandu moves them with great difficulty and gets up from bed

She stands before mirror and removing her bangles "kya tum log batha sakthe ho ki aaj kuch kaam kyu nahi hain"

KABIR : kyuki aaj kaam ki chutti hain

NANDINI : aur wo kisi kushi main

DHRUV : tu sach main suna chahthi hain

NANDINI : haan

MUKTHI : soch le

NANDINI : soch liye

ALIA : don't blame us after wards

NANDINI : I will not

KABIR : ek baar nazre utakar ayna dekh

NANDINI : ayna lekin and stops noticing manik reflection in mirror

She hides her smile understanding his words and moving towards bed "guys utho aaj koyi bi kaam se chutti nahi lega"

DHRUV : kyu

MUKTHI : arey kyu matlab samja karo dhruv

ALIA : sab detail main explain kiya thodi jatha

Nandu takes one pillow and starts beating them.

DHRUV : ruk na

MUKTHI : kya karri

ALIA : arey listen

She throws pillow on them and again moves towards mirror.

Kabir takes a pillow and hits nandu

NANDINI : kabirrr and hits him but he bends down and dhruv comes in between

DHRUV : mujhe kyu mari ho

NANDINI : arey main wo dhruv aaoo

DHRUV : hahaha

Manik was enjoying their fight and was smiling secretly.

Nandu again throws pillow but this time dhruv bends down and alai comes in between.

ALIA : what the hell and they all start fighting like mad running around the room.

Nandu hits manik accidently in between which makes him angry.

She bends down and kabir comes in between manan.

KABIR : tu mujhe kyu maara bey

MANIK : arey wo

KABIR : ruk beta abi batha tha ho and throws a pillow on him

MANIK : arrey kabirrr thu

DHRUV : hahahaha

MANIK : tujhe bohuth hasi aari na ruk and throws pillow on dhruv

Nandini slowly moves towards door and stands wearing a beautiful smile along with tears in hers eyes.

Mohan comes and gets surprised to see the view infront of him.

FAB 5 once again become kids enjoying happily laughing shouting and throwing pillows at each other.

Mohan too have tears but soon he smiles hugely and side hugs nandu.

Nandu smiles and blinks her eyes.

FAB 5 fall back on bed laughing like mad having teary eyes.

Nandu stands looking them while mohan leaves smiling.

NANDINI POV : ayyappa in sabko hamesha aise hi kush rakna

Kabir dhruv and manik make signals and smile evily.

Kabir gets up and shonaaa

NANDINI : haan

KABIR : ek minute yaha aana

Nandu walks near them and kya hua kabir tum

Kabir gets down from bed and woo actually woo bath ye hi ki

NANDINI : kyaa

Kabir,dhruv and manik shout in unison 1 2 3 gooo

They all start tickling.

Kabir tickels nandu,dhruv tickels alia and manik tickels mukthi.

NANDINI : kabirrr please haha

MUKTHI : sun ruk please

ALIA : stop it dhruv

Soon room fills with their laughter.

Finally after a long session of ticking manik,kabir and dhruv fall on bed hugging mukthi,nandu and alia.


Bada vala thank you for loving my work and now an important thing I learnt that many silent readers are enjoying my updates so now I just want to tell all that start commenting because am gonna pm next chapter to only those who gonna comment here am sry par kya karu I cant compromise here...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing di
Maza agaya
Whole part was amazing
Loved it to the core
Continue soon

Love you
Ekta
Edited by manan_eku - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing update
nandu is rocking in this
story by pretending that
she is sleeping and he told
her everything
fab 4 and nandu bonding
is very cute
manbir and dhruv there tickling
session with nandu is super
waiting for another update
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
U r awesome man like seriously yar all your updats are diffrernt from each other pls update soon

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