#2 MANAN FF LOVE IS MY LIFE PART LINK TO THREAD 3 ADDED PG 143

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Yathignna Arhitha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#101

Wow it was awesome and amazing
Yaar yeh Nandu kitni amazing hai
Matlab bina kuch kiye sari such pasta Karl
Beauty with brains haan and now I'm super excited to know what is going on in naughty Nandu's khurafati brain
But I had confusion did manik heard what Nandu said to fab4
If possible please update tonight it's a request pls

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devilkhushi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#102

THIS was an epic update loved the way u portrait nandini trust on manik n the way manik is trying to hide the truth from her to keep her safe n if my guess the sole reason of manik going away is her so called MOm n I myself would love dig her grave

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assuuu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#103

addicted to ur story yaaar... jst lvd it... 128 epi... each nd every epi a lot of things hapng... cngrts for ur new tjread... keep gng.. dnt sptop this ff... and as much as possible unite manan soon...

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anumanan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: Yathignna
Wow it was awesome and amazing
Yaar yeh Nandu kitni amazing hai
Matlab bina kuch kiye sari such pasta Karl
Beauty with brains haan and now I'm super excited to know what is going on in naughty Nandu's khurafati brain
But I had confusion did manik heard what Nandu said to fab4
If possible please update tonight it's a request pls

Thnx dear and no manik doesn't hear anything because he stands at a distance

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anumanan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: gtilwani45
ohhh how much sweetly... u portray their emotions. .. lovely... I Love their pure love. .. I just love it.. Itsss soo awesome .. So amazing. .just love to the core. .. Soo .fantastic. ... Keep updating. .. U r such a beautiful writer... Update soon.. Waiting for next update eagerly impatiently. .. Thanks for this update . Thanks .. :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-):-) :-) :-) :-). ..

Thank you so much 😊

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anumanan

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: assuuu
addicted to ur story yaaar... jst lvd it... 128 epi... each nd every epi a lot of things hapng... cngrts for ur new tjread... keep gng.. dnt sptop this ff... and as much as possible unite manan soon...

Thank you so much dear...

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HTA111

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Posted: 9 years ago

#107

Aww so beautiful superb fantastic loved it

Manik was at peace with her as she is so close to him and he could feel her after such a long time and she was awake dint want him to know otherwise he would not be himself and start his acting she was dint want to break the hug and feel him after years of wait

Continue soon

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anumanan

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Posted: 9 years ago

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PART 129 :

Manik moves down quickly seeing everyone approaching towards him.

He sees soha sitting in the hall so he goes near her and sits beside her.

MANIK : heyy

SOHA : so hero ka mood teek hogaya hmmm

MANIK : haa

SOHA : jab use itna pyaa

MANIK : soha please

SOHA : agar bath shuru karne se pehle hi tum mujhe tokoge tho kaise hoga

MANIK : forget it vaise yaha tumhe kaise lagra hain

SOHA : acha lagra hain

Nandu reaches there at the same time with FAB 4

MUKTHI : baby you go and change ham bi change karke aathe hain

NANDINI : mmm and goes upstairs without looking manik

MANIK POV : ek baar yaha dek nahi sakthi kyaa

FAB 4 changes and joins manik in hall and manik sits silently looking them.

MANIK POV : sab log agaye hain tho ye madam kyu itna vakth lagari hain

MUKTHI : so manik

MANIK : haa

ALIA : kaisa lagra hain

MANIK : good

Dhruv calls nandu and pari tu kya kari hain itna vakth kyu lagari hain

NANDINI : offooo dhruv aari bas doon minute

DHRUV : jaldi aao and cuts the call

ALIA : kya kaha

DHRUV : aari hain

KABIR : ye thayar hone main itna vakth kabse leni lagi hain

MUKTHI : common guys ab se iski aadath dalo tum log

Alia smiles and yeaaa

KABIR : shonaaa jaldi kar yar kya karri hain

Mukthi and alia sit smiling enjoying kabir and dhruv's expression

ALIA : babyyy jaldi aa we can't tolerate this idiots for longer time

MANIK POV : pari...shona...babyy... Matlab I was right ye log uski hi bath karre hain

Soha bends closer to manik and yar they all are so cute matlab how much they love nandini naa

Manik smiles while mukthi and alia see them and get angry.

MUKTHI : man tho karra hain iska gala daba doon

ALIA : yaa seriously par kya kare baby ki vajah se arggg

KABIR : shonaaa

DHRUV : pariii

MUKTHI : guys will you please shut up

ALIA : wo athi hogi yar

MUKTHI : looo there she is

MANIK POV :

I slowly turned and looked towards stairs.

Goddd how can someone look so beautiful!!!!!!

She was wearing a simple plain baby pink salwar kameez. Her jhumkis and bangles matched her dress perfectly. Kajal across her eyes made her eyes look more big more beautiful

That smile across her lips made her face glow more.

I was busy admiring my love that I didn't even realised that my mouth was open until soha said me.

I quickly turned my face and looked other side.

(End of POV)

Nandu comes and stands behind the couch on which manik was sitting.

NANDINI : guys don't you think ki kisine kuch zyada hi vakth laga di hain vapas aane main

MANIK POV : kya bolu main aur kaise bolu

NANDINI : see ab tho mujhe koyi jawab bi nahi dera

MANIK POV : manik common just stand and turn towards her

ABHI : sryyy na jaan please maaf karde

Manik slowly turns back and sees abhi who was standing infront of nandu

MANIK POV : hooo so ye iski bath karri thi

NANDINI : mujhe tumhari koyi sry nahi chahiye

MUKTHI : common baby tu janthi hain use kaam tha

NANDINI : haan haan ab tum tho usiki side logi na

Mukthi gets up and side hugging nandu "meri princess ko chod kar main kabi kisi aur ka side le sakthi hoon kya"

NANDINI : hmm tumhare liye isse maaf karri hoon

Abhi hugs her from another side and "thank you"

Someone closes nandu's eyes.

KABIR : ab ye batao ki ye koun hain

Nandu smiles and navuuu

NAVYA : bilkul sahi and hugs her tightly

NANDINI : mujhe miss kiya

NAVYA : bahuth

DHRUV : acha ab yaha aao aur baito

NAVYA : haan haan bai tumhari pari ke paav dukhenge na varna

NANDINI : navuuu

NAVYA : mazak karre the baba

NANDINI : vaise tum log sab milke hi aye na tho phir yaha ane main tum dono ko der kyu lag gayi

ABHI : puch math jaan its long story

NANDINI : hooo

KABIR : ooo bayi saap ankhe kaam karri hain na aapki

ABHI : haan kyu

KABIR : yaha itni sari jagah hain baitne ko lekin phir bi kade rehke bathe karre ho tho mujhe laga

ABHI : bas bas samaj gaya

NANDINI : tum log baito main abi aathi hoon

MANIK POV : ye ho kya raha hain ye mere samne nahi aana chahthi hain kya

KABIR : arey abi tho thu ayi hain aur

NANDINI : bas do minute kabir abi ayi and leaves to kitchen

Navya comes and sits beside kabir who was sitting beside dhruliya. Mukthi sits beside manik along with abhi.

ABHI : suno

MUKTHI : haan

ABHI : ye nandu itni normal kaise behave karri hain ye janthe hue bi ki ye ladki manik ki gf hain

MUKTHI : wo kehri hain ki manik jhut bolra hain

NAVYA : kyaa

KABIR : chilao math

NAVYA : lekin use kaise patha ki manik jhut bolra hain

KABIR : bas patha hain chodo na kya tum bi sawal pe sawal karthi rehthi ho

KITCHEN :

Ufff ayyappa ye mujhse nahi hoga main kaise usse ankhon ke samne hothe hue bi na dekhu arggg shhh calm down nandini calm down tumhe ye karna hi hoga haan and leaves

MOHAN : kya bath hain aaj puri ki puri and stops at a distance seeing manik

Manik looks him and immediately gets up.

Nandu returns to the hall and sees mohan standing shocked.

Manik was looking mohan and nandu was standing at back of him.

Manik smiles hugely with tears.

Mohan slowly looks nandu and she nods her head assuring him that yes he was real and its not a dream

Mohan and manik slowly start walking towards each other.

All have tears along with a smile.

Soon manik and mohan stand opposite each other having tears in their eyes

Mohan slowly moves his hand to touch manik but manik holds his hand and kisses it.

Mohan stands looking him while tears were rolling down.

Manik looks him and hugs him tightly.

MANIK : I missed you I missed you so much

Mohan hugs him back tightly and missed you too

After some time they slowly break the hug and wipe each others tears

MOHAN : tu tu kaisa hain tha kaha itne din aur vapas kab aya mujhe bataya kyu nahi main

MANIK : daddd relax wo sab chodiye aur ye batayiye ki aap kaise hain

MOHAN : meri beti ke hothe huye mujhe kuch ho sakta hain kyaa

MANIK POV : jantha hoon dad isilye bina kuch bataye chela gaya kyuki mujhe patha tha ki wo yaha sab sambal legi

MOHAN : acha chel aa tujhse der sari bathe karni hain

KABIR : hamari tho koyi value hi nahi rahi

DHRUV : haan kabir ab hamari zarurath thodi hain

MOHAN : tum dono notanki bandh karo apna haa

Soha gets a call so she gets busy attending the call.

MOHAN : yeee

Soha ends the call and manikkk

Manik turns towards soha and haa

SOHA : wo alex ne mail bej diya hai kehra tha ki tumse bath karni hain

MANIK : teek hain main bath karlunga

FAB 4 were making faces while nandu was pleading them with her eyes.

MOHAN : beta ye tumhari friend hain kyaa

MANIK POV : sryyy dad mujhe ye karna hoga

MANIK : nahi dad wo meri gf hain soha

MOHAN : gfff????? Par

NANDINI : mr mohan malhotra

Mohan looks towards nandu and she walks towards him.

MOHAN : nandu ye ma

NANDINI : aapko patha bi hain main kabse aapko call karri hoon

MOHAN : wo nandu

NANDINI : kyaa nandu aap the kaha par haan maine apse gar par rehne ko kaha na par nahi apko tho meri kaha sunni hothi hain

Manik sees her from side ways and smiles.

Mohan comes near nandu and beta sry wo

NANDINI : sry kya baarish hori hain mousam karab hain aise main apko bahar jane ki kya zarurath hain

MOHAN : sryyy baba aage se dyan rakunga

Nandini remains silent

MOHAN : vaise ye

NANDINI : mujhe bhuk lagri hain kya aap jaldi se fresh hoke neche ayenge ya

MOHAN : doon minute main bas abi aaya and leaves not wanting to make his princess wait

Manik turns towards nandu but she immediately turns and starts walking towards kitchen.

MANIK POV : what the hell

NANDINI : guys chelo main kana lagari hoon

KABIR : ofcourse shona chelo

Manik stands confused.

DHRUV : buddyyy

MANIK : haa

DHRUV : kya hua chel na

KABIR : haan sharma math apna hi gar hain

All laugh and manik replies haan haan

Mohan soon returns and everyone settles on table.

Mohan sits at centre chair of table.

Manik,soha,mukthi,abhi sit on one side while nandu,navya,kabir, dhruliya sit on the other.

Manik again and again looks at nandu but she doesn't look him.

MANIK POV : what bullshit is this main dikayi nahi dera hoon kya

NANDINI POV : nandu control dekhna math usse

MANIK POV : usse dekhe ignore karne ka plan mera tha lekin ye kyu mujhe nahi dekhri hain

NANDINI POV : I know manik ki tumhara plan mujhe ignore karne ka hain tho bas isilye main tumhari help karri hoon thaki tumhe pareshani na ho mujhe ignore karne main hehehee

MANIK POV : you have to look me girl lekin kya karu jisse and looks soha and then hooo yaaa

MANIK : babyyy tum kuch kaa kyu nahi rahi ho

Everyone immediately looks at nandu who was happily enjoying eating pasta

SOHA : kaari hoon baba

Mohan tries to say something but nandu holds his hand secretly and nods her head as a no

Mohan takes his cell and "ye sab kya hora hain"

Nandu smiles and replies "kuch nahi papa relax"

Mohan again texts her "ye soha ka kya chakkar hain"

Nandu replies "kuch nahi bas dono milke gf bf ka game kelre hain"

mohan smiles and replies "so you gonna handle everything like always"

Nandu smiles looking him and mohan blinks his eyes.

MANIK : baby tum ye lo na and serves roti

SOHA : bas na manik

MANIK : baby ek aur bas

SOHA : tum bi lona and serves him too

Everyone was silently watching nandu who was not at all paying any attention to manik.

MANIK POV : ye abi bi meri taraf nahi dekhri hain goddd ye aise nahi manegi

MANIK : baby wait tum na aise nahi manogi let me feed you

SOHA : manik nahi na please

MANIK : wait...kabir zara wo daal paas karna...

KABIR : haan ek minute and giving bowl sun ye garam hain tho sambalke

Manik holds bowl and at the same time nandu pushes the bowl making the hot daal fall on manik's hand.

MANIK : ouchhh and looks nandu

Nandu takes her hand back and without looking him once again happily gets busy eating her pasta.

Everyone turn there faces controlling there laugh.

MANIK : aaooochhh aaa

SOHA : manik you are ok is it hurting more

Manik was just looking nandu while she was silently eating pretending to be completely engrossed in looking her plate.

SOHA : manik show me zyada jala kya and tries to hold his hand

KABIR : ehem ehem manik daal abi bi garam hain

Except nandini everyone keep their hands on their mouths to suppress there laughter.

Nandu gets up and walks into kitchen taking her plate while manik too without saying anything immediately gets up and follows her.

Phewww so done updating now jaldi se start commenting and let me know how is it

Edited by anu22sweety - 9 years ago