#4MaNanSS:Dheere Dheere Link To Thread 5/PG1/11th-DEC - Page 71

got the update after a long time...do cont soon

Awww she was cute when she gt jelo
Hot intense romance of manan haye loved them so much
Soha ka toh poha bana deti nandu
Maniks dad ufff let him also come will have fun

Finally you are back!! missed u..your stories!

Finally u updated

hi mawara i had recently join and was reading ur stories they are amazing and magical ur writing skill are so magical and superb the way u xpress each and every relation whether its in sun sathiya,tum mile or dheere dheere or its love gosh girl ur jst outstanding and brillant god has bless u with his blessing may u get lots and lots of success in ur life and keep up the work AND may i call u di and pls bear wth me for some days if i won't comment on ur stories bcoz my board exams are gng on so pls dnt mind

God!! So atlast u update pata hai u won't believe me but every day I used to tell my friends that aaj shayad mawara update degi and I also used to tell them about urs stories though they don't read fanfictions... And this chapter it was amazing I mean it consisted all emotions be it love care fear to loose the other one anger guilt everything and the best part of ur stories is that u give equal space to all emotions and jab romance ki baari hoti hai toh poora atmosphere hot ho jata hai and when u want to make the story more interesting u bring up a big twist like in today's update (manik's dad) but u never let manan loose their essence Matlab anger ho chahe guilt or chahe fear they always manage to do romance and yes i forgot to mention that the funniest and the cuttest part in todays update was when nandini got horrified and worried thinking that the fishes saw them doing IT the whole ni8 hahah...

And u finally posted 😃
Love MaNan n der emotional tlks too...
MaNan r meant t b toghtr so v noe obstacles may cum bt no seperation...
Will wait fr sun saathiya its love n ur new os...

Loved it..!! OVER POSSESSIVE NANDINI..!! But what about manik's dad??? What is he upto..!! Manik is handling business na than why?? I don't wanna think much.. Thanq for pm

Wow
Amazing Update.
loved it very much.
Nandu ki gussa and possessiveness just superb.
Manik toh as always sooo sweet.
Waiting for manik's dad entry, Harshad aya toh shaadi ho gayi toh Manik ki dad aya ga toh kuch or interesting ho jayga.
Thanks for Updating.
Keep smiling
stay blessed

wowww NYC update... hope manik k dad zyada trouble na kre... unko... and I lyk there luvy duvy talk. keep it on...