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lovePANI

@lovePANI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1001

Oh my Lord...
Whole update was beautifully hot..
JUICE...ICE WATER...CHOCOLATE ICE-CREAM..
All these scene was Amazingly WOW...
Nandu concentrate on ur study..not on him...hahaha...
Keep smiling...n take care

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shivi39

@shivi39

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1002

Super Awesome update
so hot scene 1st juice then ice, Chochlate, ice cream
poor aryaman
nd poor manik every one is disturbing him hehehe
1st dhruv nd mukti
now cabir came
manik's reaction will be watchble hehehe
i think now so much fun will heppen bcoz cabiraa is here
waiting for next
plz update soon... :)

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Cooki

@Cooki

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1003

Oh my god!!
It was freaking hot!!!!
Poor manik is not even getting single day alone with his nandini...
Aryaman would have been dead if he would have right in front of manik...
Mukti & dhruv r such a tease bro sis..
Cabir is also coming...
Now that will be fun to read...
Thnxx for the pm..
Continue soon...
Looking forward to read further parts...

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nandininiti

@nandininiti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1004

indeed beautiful as well as hot at the same time especially the ice-cream scene
lol sab kaise ek saath aake manan ka romance kar rahe h.
Thanks for pm.

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User123

@UserM123

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#1005

Heyy!

okay, so I have to tell you that i am in love, i am in love with your story!

i loved it! ❤️

And, to say that i am a fan of Fifty shades of grey, will be an understatement. I am a HUGE Fifty Shades BUFF!

i LOVE it.

and you started the story losely based on that and the way it is truning out is just AWESOME!

i love it so much!

i love how manik is in this, Story! the real life our own Mr. Grey! 😳

I love the story dear!it's just Perfection!

i am in love!

Continue soon!

i wish, you could add the one liners which are in the book, like, "We aim to please" or something like "Good point well made" 😆😳😳

I know i am crazy! 😳

But i LOve the FF.

Continue soon.

please Pm me!

love

MiNi😳

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priyanair04

@priyanair04

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1006

Just came through ur story ...just to b frank frst I thought it wld b usual story but wen I started reading it was lke more and more excited to read further...just loved it...manik and nandini character loved ter part of behaviour...u just penned it so well loved ter pov...and no doubtly ter romance...waiting for nxt update...love ur stories...

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smartgirls

@smartgirls

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1007

Amazing

Awesome

Mindblowing

Fabulous

N lots more...simply running out of words...

loved it simply...so hot and sesual update...

I mean frst juice, then ice...n atlast chocolate icecream...

Love the way manim take her permission for any thi h n tease her...n the way she sltrust her...

N filling pity for them as their sesual encounter got interupted but mukti n dhruv...

Oh loved the way nandu came down wearing maniks tee shirt...n the way he inteoduce her to his bro n sis...calling her his girl...mind blowing

N nw it will b fun as mukti n dhruv know abt them...n nw even our cupids entry...than it will b fun to read manik nandu n cabir's encounter...cant really wait for the next update...plz plz plz do continue asap...

Thanks a lot dear for the pm...

Edited by smartgirls - 9 years ago

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Konpal

@Konpal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1008

Such a passionate update.. Manan romance was hot and Manik is proudly flaunting Nandu.. eagerly waiting to read the next part to see how they will resume their romance :)

Edited by Konpal - 9 years ago