Manan ss : Hum aapke hain kaun.. ?? Discontd. Note pg 39 - Page 14

Originally posted by: puccha

Y.. ??

Uh didnt commented on mah ss... 😭

Originally posted by: _Samthanian_

Mujh jaisi lazy ladki se tu ek commemt ki nikalwale bahut badi baat h...
Or ek ek word wale commemt ki toh bahut door ki baat hai...
N main dheere dheere story ka wait karugj...
Tabhi toh maza ayega na...
Sab pehle se pta hoga toh interest nahi ayega story mei...

Par yaha to tu mjhse baat kar rahi h.. Wo bhi comment mein.. 🤣

Originally posted by: puccha

Par yaha to tu mjhse baat kar rahi h.. Wo bhi comment mein.. 🤣

Kya karu teri buri aadat lag lagi hai... aur chutne ka naam hi nahi le ri h...

Originally posted by: _Samthanian_

Kya karu teri buri aadat lag lagi hai... aur chutne ka naam hi nahi le ri h...

Wo to h.. 😉

wah wah kya story line h seriously...wooowww relationship ka fare h ye story love it intro dono family ka was awesome bas ek request h manan ko plz hum sath sath wale prem ya preeti wese mt bnana na plz vo log bht hi shy kind ke the but naughty manik n shy nandu is treat to watch looking ahead toward ur story eagerly...cont very soon plz...story line ki toh baat hi nhi hope ki bht jld manan se mulakat ho...

SHUBHI

Originally posted by: Shubhijaiswal

wah wah kya story line h seriously...wooowww relationship ka fare h ye story love it intro dono family ka was awesome bas ek request h manan ko plz hum sath sath wale prem ya preeti wese mt bnana na plz vo log bht hi shy kind ke the but naughty manik n shy nandu is treat to watch looking ahead toward ur story eagerly...cont very soon plz...story line ki toh baat hi nhi hope ki bht jld manan se mulakat ho...

SHUBHI

Hehe.. Thank you.. Don't worry aisa kuch nahi hoga.. Unki jagah already mukhbi ne le li h..

Chal apne laziness ko chod ke ayii hu main sirf commemt karne...
Chapter 1 was awesome...
Hota kaise nahi tune likhaa thaa...
Sabki entry ekdum filmi andaaz mein thii...
N mujhe starting mei hi lag raha thaa ki sugar nandini ho hogi...
And baad mein wohi nikli...
N yeh kyaa dhruv ka name nonu...
U r very bad...
Tune mereko meri niece ki yaad dila di...
Uska name bhii nonu hai...
N now I am missing her very much...
Ab mujhe phir se usse milne jaana padega... (I m happy)
Chalo ab aage badte hai...,
Mukti ke liye rishta aayaa hai...
Ab jaldi se shaadi bhii karado...
Vaise bhii uski side se haa toh ho hi gyi h...
Aur uska reaction bhii jaldi dikhana Abhi ki photo dekhne ke baad...
N uh showed Mukti blushing in your ff...
I was like agar aisa show mein hota toh mera kyaa hotaa...
N now waiting to know Nandini n Navya entry...(thora hind hi dede... thora reham khaa mujhpar)
Ab bass bahut ho gaya iss lazy ladki se aur bada commemt nahi ho payegaa...
Next comment next chapter ke liye baad mein dungi...
Wait karna...

Originally posted by: puccha

Wo to h.. 😉

Le kar diya maine comment... woh bhii lamba waala...

Originally posted by: puccha

Hehe.. Thank you.. Don't worry aisa kuch nahi hoga.. Unki jagah already mukhbi ne le li h..

thnkx god nhi thnkx to u wrna manik jab wapis aata toh sirf book ke piche apna face chupa ke rehta...wese i dont know u can i get ur intro plz...???

Originally posted by: _Samthanian_

Chal apne laziness ko chod ke ayii hu main sirf commemt karne...
Chapter 1 was awesome...
Hota kaise nahi tune likhaa thaa...
Sabki entry ekdum filmi andaaz mein thii...
N mujhe starting mei hi lag raha thaa ki sugar nandini ho hogi...
And baad mein wohi nikli...
N yeh kyaa dhruv ka name nonu...
U r very bad...
Tune mereko meri niece ki yaad dila di...
Uska name bhii nonu hai...
N now I am missing her very much...
Ab mujhe phir se usse milne jaana padega... (I m happy)
Chalo ab aage badte hai...,
Mukti ke liye rishta aayaa hai...
Ab jaldi se shaadi bhii karado...
Vaise bhii uski side se haa toh ho hi gyi h...
Aur uska reaction bhii jaldi dikhana Abhi ki photo dekhne ke baad...
N uh showed Mukti blushing in your ff...
I was like agar aisa show mein hota toh mera kyaa hotaa...
N now waiting to know Nandini n Navya entry...(thora hind hi dede... thora reham khaa mujhpar)
Ab bass bahut ho gaya iss lazy ladki se aur bada commemt nahi ho payegaa...
Next comment next chapter ke liye baad mein dungi...
Wait karna...

Thank u so much.. 😛
Maine mukti ko apne ff mein isliye blush karte hue dikhaya h Qki maine socha ki bechari ki kya galti thoda usse bhi ladki bana doo..
Nonu mere cousin ka naam bhi h.. Wo bhi bilkul dhruv ki tarah h isliye..
Ab to main logo ko next chapter tabhi hi doogi jab tu second chapter ka review degi.. 🤣
Dekh maine tjhse comment nikalwa liya aur wo bhi lambaa wala..