#4 MANAN SS~ YOU BECOME MY STORY Thread5-146 CHAPTER 23-148

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urvxshi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

😊 congratulations on new thread👏

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AAVANI

@vani86

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

congrats kavya...👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

wow...thread 4...its really awesome...this journey with u and manan is really beautiful...and magical...!!!

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shubhshash

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Congrats dear...fr yur new thread...

U really deaserve it...

Aftr all u hve put soo many efforts fr writing the story...n thats y we people love yur stories soo much..

Keep writing...stay blessed. ...!!😊

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kunjal1005

@kunjal1005

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

First of all a big big wala congratulations for ur 4th thread. U r amazing man. 4th thread is like rely unbelievable. Long way to go my friend.

M sorry fr replying this late. I jus now saw ur pm.

Well coming bk to d story. Kaise like kaise kar leti ho tum. Itna kaise aur kahase soch leti ho. I loved the update. It ws so natural manik getting angry. But srsly she expected him to hug her n make her understand pyaar se? how innocent she is.

Y do I have this feeling k manik k uncle may b nandu k neighbor Hi honge. N door bell baji toh door pe manik Hi hoga. *fingers crossed* I hope aise Hi ho.

Nice update. Thanks for d pm.

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Anu

@RomComFan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Congrats on your new thread... loved that last update... her different reaction, his thoughts , the flshback, the reason for his hiding and ofcourse the bolloywood style chapter ending was wonderful... but my favorite was the part about the caterpillar, just beautiful...looking forward to what happens next, great job here!

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Mishal Aziz

@mishalaziz2

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Congratulations on starting a new thread... The update was super awesome, each bit was full of entertainment... But my favourite quote was Mukti's definition of friendship... Such a cute bond you have created between them... Love it... I guess it might be Manik but I might be wrong because you bring twist from anywhere...
Can't wait to read more...
Update whenever you can (but Plzzz a bit fast )
With lots of love

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rt27

@rt27

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Amazing update...:) Finally beginning of a new story...:)Eagerly waiting for the update...:)

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Standingstill

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Hey,, congrats dear 👏 👏
Ua last update was very lovely
U hv dis very normal way f describing life it's very soothing
Keep up d good work
Update soon n pm me