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Posted: 9 years ago
Ty for d pm...
awesome update...
loved d update to d core...
I so love d bond manik n Mukti share...its beautiful..
Loved manan moments to d core...
So can't wait to see d execution of d plan...
awww dinning table part was so cute...loved it...
plz continue soon...
'll b waiting for d update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
great update... its a progressive story.. i like the way the entire family is part of the ff alongwith Manan
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow that was super duper awesome
It was mind blasting cute
Continue soon
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U were so regular yarr...then how come you so slow??
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CHAPTER 53

The next morning everyone were busy in preparation for the party of abhi and mukti's reception. while everyone were busy working and running from here to there manik was not allowed to do a single work except watch everyone passing from this side to that side.

m=this is not done.. main bore horaha hu

manik came to the kitchen were alya nandini and navya were baking desserts

n=manik tum kyu couch se uthe?? tumhe kaha tha na aram karnekeliye

m=nandini main itna aram karunga toa ulta bimar hojaunga. i mean guys seriously um absolutely fine aur tumlog mujhe ek patient ki tarah treat karraheho

ny=cause tum abhibi patient ho

nyonika comes from behind ruffling maniks hair

m=mom not u too... ap jante ho mujhe adat nahi ha ese bina kuch kam kiye bethe rehneme

ny=janti hu but u need rest beta and tumhe hospital se ghar laneke time we had given u the condition ke jaisa hum kahenge u will have to do it

three of the girls were giggling watching mummy scolding son. manik glared at them

m=ese has kyu raheho??

a=kuch nahi... girls talk any problem??

m=whatever... jarahahu main upar..

he glares at nandini and goes to his room

n=lagta ha gussa hogaya

na=toa usme kya bari baat ha? tum manik ko manalena

ny=exactly beta and u dont worry, he is feeling bored thats why he is sad.

manik was going upstairs when he saw raj sitting in the living room alone.

m=dad, you're sitting alone kyu??

manik sits beside his dad

raj=kuch nahi beta bass esehi

m=dad.. you're trying to hide things from me?? come on kya bat ha? why do u look so pale? business ka pressure ha?

raj=nahi.. actually um worried

m=worried about what?

raj=about my family..about you all.. manik peechle kuch dinome itne happy times pass kiya ha humne sab ke ab achanak se yeh sab jo horaha ha im worried, scared. you know beta, yeh itna bara business empire, wealth, power , position ... sirf ek maksaad ha mera to keep my family happy and together all the time, tum sabki happiness aur aj dekho, tumhare sath itna bara incident hogaya and now all this.. pata nahi

m=dad... just answer me one thing, apko mujhpe trust ha na?

raj=ofcourse son... you know i trust u most.

m=so bass, yeh sab mat sochiye dad, hum sab eksath hain aur humesha rahenge to face each and every circumstances together .. and you know na? i wont let anyone happen anything.. trust me

raj pats on maniks shoulder pulling him in a side hug. suddenly both of them feel two hands encircling around their shoulders

mu=and i love u both

it was a complete son-father-daughter trio moment witnessed by nyonika and nandini

...

manik was standing infront of the cupboard looking for outfits to wear on the party when suddenly he was taken aback when nandini hugged him from back. he smirked and kissed her hands

m=so, mrs malhotra finally apko time mil gaya apne husband ke pass aneka??

nandini comes in front and holds her ear

n=solly... subhah se itna kaam tha ke tumhe time nahi de payi

manik pulls her by waist and pecks her nose

m=agar esehi cute way me sorry kahogi i dont know kab tumhe kha jaunga

nandini hits him on his chest and snakes her hand around his neck

n=i love you

manik smiles and tucks her bangs behind her ear

m=dad aur meri bate suni ha na??

n=tumhe kaisa pata???

he pulls her even more closer

m=tumhari iss emotional chehrese

n=manik.. thank u

m=thanks for what??

n=for giving me your family, my family. Manik shadi ke bad ladkika sirf apne husband ke sath new relation nahi banta ha balki she has to maintain so many relations with other members of the family also. humari shadi ke baad mujhe yeh ek minute keliye bhi feel nahi hua ke main iss gharme shadi karke nahi ayi hu, i feel yeh mera maiyka hi hain, meri sari friends pehle mujhse kehte the ke shadi ke bad we have to leave our home and go to a new family, which will always be stranger in some way.. but yahapar itna pyar care aur respect mila sabse.. i couldnt ask anything better and yeh sab sirf tumhari wajase.. tumse dilka rishta jura sath sath in sabke sath bhi.. thanks.

in response to her sweetest thank you manik pulled her into a bone crushing hug and swirled her around the room in his arms. the room filled with nandini's giggles and cute yelling at him to put her down and finally both landed on the bed panting heavily.. manik began to cough and nandini became tensed

n=manik ur alright??? tum theek hona? rukoo.. main pani lati hu

she was about to get up but he holded her hand and pulled her on himself.

n=manik tumhe dard horaha ha main..

m=sshhh...

he put his finger on lips and caressed her cheeks

m=my medicine is something which i already have with me right now..

she blushed knowing he meant her. manik pulled her a bit more closer and brushed his lips against her making it difficult for both of them. nandini clutched his tshirt tightly.

m=jaan

she just hummed a hmm closing her eyes and feeling him.

m=i want my medicine , the one i love most.

she blushed hard opening her eyes and saw him pointing towards his heart.

m=dard horaha ha..

her crimson cheeks were not hidden from him. she bent down and planted kisses on his chest , heart while maniks hands travelled to her back caressing fingers around her spine and there was a knock on the door

m=perfect timing

manik gritted his teeth and nandini giggled.

n=main dekhti hu

nandini opened the door and saw cabir and abhi standing

ab=sorry tum donoko disturb kiya woh actually nandini aunty tumhe neeche bularahiha and

c=and we need to talk to manik... dont worry its nothing serious

n=sure.. carry on.

she turned back to manik who gave her a flying kiss and she happily went downstairs.

m=all set?

ab=yes dude... party me mukti ke upar hum sabki nazar rahegi. koi naa koi uske sath humesha rahega

c=and i have talked to commissioner uncle as well, unhone apne best guards ko bheja ha on duty today so all is cool

m=theek ha, now lets wait for the jerk to come

...

Mukti's outfit
Alya's outfit
nandini's outfit
three of them got ready together in mukti's room. actually it was alya nandini's idea to be with mukti even when they were getting ready. alya and nandini wore red beautiful gowns and chose a pink one for mukti. on the other hand boys decided to put on tuxedos with different borders on their coats.
a=nandini aj toa manik ke hosh urne wale ha..
n=kyu??
mu=kyu matlab?? come on nandu.. you are looking breathtaking beautiful and that too in red
a=yaa..red is his favourite colour na
nandini blushed to herself thinking what will be his reaction when he would see her in this dress and moreover he would have a tuff time controlling himself. at that moment manik and druv came inside the room after knocking. as soon as manik stepped inside his eyes fell on nandini who was wearing one of her earings. for him time had stopped, nandini blushed watching his expressions. manik just couldnt take his eyes off her .
mu=ahem ahem..bhai..
dr=buddy tu theek hana?
manik didnt pay heed to their questions and took steps forward towards her. nandini was blushing thinking what if he may kiss her in front them and they were giggling already..
n=manik..tum..
he didnt even listen to her and took off the bobby pins which helped nandinis hair tied up in a curly side bun
a=manik..yeh kya kiya?? it took me one hour to make her bun aur tumne
manik came dangerously close to nandini and whispered in her ear
m=you are making me loose already..shayed party khatam honeke baad main khudko rokh nahi paunga and dont dare stop me saying um sick. its ur punishment for looking breathtaking hot and beautiful
nandini's cheeks flushed hearing his words and she knew he meant each and every of them.
a=manik
alya yelled a bit making angry glares
m=what?? i dont like it when she ties her hair up. mujhe uske open hair zyada pasand ha and so, dont tie her hair, actually dont even think to do something with them okay??? and mukti. come downstairs, woh cake cutting ka time hogaya ha
n=hum abhi ate hain tum log jaw
before going druv looked at alya
dr=alya tum bohot zyada pretty lagrahiho
mu & n=awwweee
a=thanks druv
m=chalen????
...
everybody clapped when mukti and abhi cut the cake.
Both of them fed each other and everybody cheered for them
na=cake kitna khubsurat hain..
a=nandini ka idea hain.. its beautiful
ab=um impressed nandini.. the cake is really beautiful
n=thanks.
manik smiled to the widest hearing everyone appreciating his jaan. while everyone were busy feeding cake to the couple he snaked his hands around her waist and pulled her close to him.
n=manik kya karraheho?? choro sab ha yahapar
m=as if i care...
n=manik..yahapar nahi..not now
m=okay then ao mere sath
he holded her hand and pulled her behind the stairs and pinned her to the wall
n=manik tum..
m=ssshhh.. i love u so much
he uttered against her lips. The smell of his colon was making her go crazy and manik smirked watching its effect on her. he pulled her even more close to himself and nandini clinged to him
m=mera bass chale toa tumhe abhi yahase uthake bedroom me leke jaw, only i know how i am controlling myself.
n=accha??? aur apko pata ha ke main khudko kaise sambhal rahihu???
manik raised his eyebrow watching her flirtatious expressions. nandini encircled her hands around his neck and caressed the border of his tuxedo from the collar.
n=you also dont have the right to look so handsome mr malhotra. Party me har ladkiki nazar ap ke upar fixed hain, every girl is looking at you with wrong intentions
manik smirked and cupped her face with one hand and other one was around her waist
m=someone seems to be jealous...
n=jealous nahi..possessive. mere ilawa tumhe ese aur koi nahi dekh sakta. mera bass chale toa sabki akhen noch lu jo mere pati par dore dal rahiha.
he was enjoying her possessiveness to the crore
m=it seems like aj main sachme kuch zyadahi handsome lagraha hu right??? my love is being so much possessive
n=humesha ki tarah
saying she brushed his lips against his and kissed his chin. manik clutched her back tightly and was about to kiss her back when he heard his dad calling. he looked at nandini who was smiling
n=koi baat nahi, we'll wait for our moment till everything gets fine theek ha?? ab chalen?
manik pecked her lips which were covered with his favourite crimson lipstick and both headed back towards the party
...
Everyone were taking group pictures with mukti and abhi. though mukti didnt share it with anyone but she started to feel that he was here. a couple of times she looked here and there but didnt saw anyone. but deep inside her heart was thumping and she was trying to gather courage to herself how to face him.
ab=mukti tum theek ho??
mu=yaa um fine..
manik cabir druv were walking and talking to the guests. but there eyes were searching for one person. they were keeping an eye on everybody. The lights went dim and everybody were asked to come on the dance floor. nandini was always beside mukti when a waiter came and said
waiter=mam, apko sir bularaheha.. kitchen mein
n=sir?? kaun sir???
waiter=manik sir..
n=accha theek ha
nandini blushed to herself thinking he is impossible. she excused mukti saying will be back in a minute and went to the kitchen. abhi asked mukti for a dance but she said later on. he was about to say something when some guests of his came to him to talk. mukti was feeling restless and looking for nandini. she thought of calling alya but watching alya spending some time with druv she didnt disturb her. she needed to freshen up and so she went to her room to freshen up.
nandini came to the kitchen and saw there was no one. the kitchen was empty only the chefs were there.one of the servant asked her
servant=nandini didi kuch chahiye apko??
n=nahi kaka... woh manik kaha ha??
servant=manik baba toa yaha nahi aye the.. hum sab toa kabse yehi par ha
nandini found it strange. she was confused thinking why did the waiter lied to her. then something cracked her mind
...
raj=manik all okay???
m=yaa dad sab theek ha
raj=mukti kaha ha??
m=woh yahi ha..nandini ke sath..
suddenly the lights goes off. everyone starts to panic and shout. everyone were saying "mukti kaha ha, " they were calling out her name. maniks heart skipped a beat and he angrilly yelled at the servants to fix the lights immediately. after a moment the lights were back. everyone looked at eachother if they were okay or not. manik was searching for nandini and mukti.
m=cabir... mukti kaha ha?? alya nandini kaha ha???
a=nandini mukti ke sath hi thi...
ab=kaha ha dono..
mukti came out of her room fixing her dress. she looked at everyone who were stunned to see her. manik pulled her in an embrace.
m=tu theek ha na?? kaha chali gayi thi tu
mu=bhai main toa washroom me gayi thi. to freshen up kyu kya hua???
a=mukti nandini kaha ha???
mu=nandu?? woh toa bhai ke sath thi na..
m=what mere sath??
c=manik mere sath tha..
mu=but nandini ne bola ke bhai usse bula raheha kitchen me and she'll be back in a moment... isiliye main washroom me.
while others were confused and trying to connect all the dots together, manik understood everything ..his eyes turned into blood red and hands into fist
m=harshad !

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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey hey..I'm first Olney to comment..
Lovely update..
I hope nandini will b fine..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for the pm and loved it like really all the things including the dresses and cake also and of course Manan :D
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Posted: 9 years ago
Keep her safe...
Plz don't let us wait...for update..
I loved their dresses
Edited by epicangel - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing
Superb
Awesome
Fantastic
Mindblowing update
U nailed it dear...beautifully written...harshad mukti ki jgah nandu ko le gea...jb wo dekhega tb kya hoga...ab manik nhi chodega ab toh uski jaan ki jaan hai danger mein...sb kch jldi hi theek ho jaye aur harshad ki band bjaa dena tum sb log...lovd it...continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
U nailed it yaar... Its awesome...

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