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ankita_t

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Posted: 9 years ago

#831

Originally posted by: ps_angel

lolz
i cmpletly trust u di...

m sure

aap kuch dhaansu hi kroge
aftrall
he is THE MANIK MALHOTRA
n he is guin to woo her lady love :P ;)

eagelry waiting :) :)
jldi socho ... :P

Lil Angel,

Thanks for trusting me...But, sadly I am not Manik Malhotra who can do in your language 'dhansu' stuff...

HHmmm ek toh i am hopeless at writing a love story and upar se now I got this plot in the story ...😕

Sach mein its damm tuff...see, i have kept my story real all this while...and i wanna keep it like that...so now its getting more challenging creatively for me...Let's see... though i have a thought in my mind, let's see if that will work out 😉

Edited by ankitathanvi - 9 years ago

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@ps_angel

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Posted: 9 years ago

#832

Originally posted by: ankitathanvi

Lil Angel,

Thanks for trusting me...But, sadly I am not Manik Malhotra who can do in your language 'dhansu' stuff...

HHmmm ek toh i am hopeless at writing a love story and upar se now I got this plot in the story ...😕

Sach mein its damm tuff...see, i have kept my story real all this while...and i wanna keep it like that...so now its getting more challenging creatively for me...Let's see... though i have a thought in my mind, let's see if that will work out 😉

ohk ohk

dun stress too mch

i knw ul cm up wd smthn beyond expectation!!!

in my wrds-"dhansu" :P

hhhee

chlo abhi sone ka tym

bbye gunnyt sd

n take gud care of urslf

loads of love <3 :)

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AbeerFeroz

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Posted: 9 years ago

#833

Hi ankita,

Superb update

Could feel it the little small things that make a relation stong like manan convo, the way he told her, her importance in his life with kissing each part of her face was mesmerizing n u penned down it beautifully

The way nandini took a big steo just for her new life new begining with manik was commendable n now i wana see how manik will make it up for his mistake, for reacting before listening to her

Its awesome

Loved it

N take care of ur hand :-)

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pdiyar193

@pdiyar193

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Posted: 9 years ago

#834

Amazing update!! Loved the way you wrote it.. Awww nandini not going because of Manik... Too cute!!! I can't wait for the next part!! Update soon!!

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ankita_t

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Posted: 9 years ago

#835

Originally posted by: pdiyar193
Amazing update!! Loved the way you wrote it.. Awww nandini not going because of Manik... Too cute!!! I can't wait for the next part!! Update soon!!

Glad to know you liked it...thanks a lot 😊

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ankita_t

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Posted: 9 years ago

#836

Originally posted by: dhillon90
Awesomee
Amazingg
Superbb update
Mani ab mnaoo nandu ko use hurt kr diya...ek baar uski baat toh sunte...thnx for pm me...lovd it...continue soon

hi,

thanks a lot 😊... ya he needs to cajole her...let's see what he does...😊

take care

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ankita_t

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Posted: 9 years ago

#837

Originally posted by: DesaiK
Amazing...our own impulsive manik

thanks a lot...i guess most men are impulsive 😉...let's see what happensnext...

take care

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ankita_t

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Posted: 9 years ago

#838

Originally posted by: payal94
Awesome update

thanks a lot 😊

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archu_asok

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Posted: 9 years ago

#839

Awesome story. Read all chapters in one go.loved this story to the core. U r an amazing writer. The way u scripted thz story was commendable hatsoff.keep up the good work. Waiting for next update. Keep writing. Last update was fabulous.

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ankita_t

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Posted: 9 years ago

#840

Originally posted by: absnads
Awesome update...
How are u?I hope u r doing well and recovering faster. Take care...

Loved the update... The reasons Manik has given for the kisses are so cute..
manikz anger was justified but he shouldnot be so impulsive..he must have listened to her. .
Waiting to know how manik is going to make it up with her...
anyways waiting for next update..
Thanks for the pm...

Hi,

thank you so much... 😊 i am glad you liked the chapter, inspite of it having falts...thanks...it means a lot.

Yes, it would be interesting to watch Manik cajole Nandini, his lady 😉😆