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Crazy8000

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Posted: 9 years ago

#781

Amazing update
N at d end little emotional too
Luvd it
Thnkx for pm
N plz continue soon

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Sonalmanan

@Sonalmanan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#782

Amazing!!!loved their small lovey dovey moment,.. 😳 Manik is actually very impulsive... I cn understand that he was hurt but he shud hv at least allowed her to explain... Now nandini is again hurt,ab kya krega buddhu 😡 last part was emotional... I thoroughly enjoyed the whole chapter,especially- "walk together forever,hmesha"... Pls continue soon... Thanks for the pm... 😊 😊

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daddysjaan

@daddysjaan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#783

its lovely... manik's insecureity is natural,but he should trust nandini..

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Ammu

@Entwined_Fates

Stunner

Posted: 9 years ago

#784

Hey Soulie I'm sorry sorry really sorry... Kaan pakar ke sorry...Sit-ups karke sorry...aur cliffs k end mein khare hoke zorrr se chillaake sorry... I know i know now you'll give me my own lectures on being formal and all 😆 😆
But yes I am admitting it on myself ki iss baar I'm really being formal... Coz i did mistake and I don't have any regrets in admitting my mistakes... You know what??... Actually I also don't know what...Hehehe... 😆 😆 accha sorry for my non stop Pj's which is only reserved for you... 😉 😉 wo kya hai naa.?? I toh totally forgotten about my poetry thingyy really we chat with each other on daily basis... And talk anything to everything... But still i didn't remembered about my commitment to you of replying to previous update with poetry.. Hehehe... My writing is bohut WAAHIYAAT aapko yeh jhel ne k liye BAPPA himmat aur taakat de 😆 😆 So...Sooo??? Sooo!!!! Come let's go on a night walk to your very own story... Night walk isliye kyun ki ye parne k baad aapko ninni aane waale hai ya behosh hone waale hai..so inform your flatmates before leaving with me...kyun ki after this night walk...I'm Choo Mantaring my self from here soo 😆 😉 😆...Uffo Sana just stop your chapar chapar...BAPPA aap hame chup karwaa dijiye jaldi varna ham aapke laar le ko pagal kardene hai apne chatterbox se...accha Soulie abi I'm going last mein Hame phir aane hai aapke sir khaane khaatir.. 😉

[COLOR= black] Ch- N&M

This update was too good...haayee... I read it again and again for nth times...
You know what?? You're the best...you portyay every character very well and their emotions it's beyond imaginations... Nandu's happiness after that indirect proposal... Her shyness... Her way of showing her feeling's... It's just mind blowing...Navya is all time support for nandu... Same goes with fab4 for Manik...
Wow!!! Manik's emotions flowing through his eye's rabba its so heart touching... Then Fab 4's expressions happy.. Shocked... Stunned...its awesome.. Than his urgency to wrap up his work asap...so that he can meet his lady love... Its all just wow!!!...than cabir's mockimgs..aliya's confusions...mukku's over time working mind... Dhruv's sudden answers were just too good...and cherry on the cake is Manik's blushy cheeks...haayee...just loved it... Then again Navya being great Manan shipper helped him once again to sneak him in without anyone's knowledge...than he came to her room as a license holder...no knock...no sound nothing... Velly bad...aise koi girls room mein jaate hai kya??haww!!! Velly velly bad...than here starts your jalwa of playing with words through nandu... Anki just loved your this piece of art.. Take a bow dear...and a longgg kissiie to your magical hands which penned it so nicely... And of course a salute to your thoughts...to think this so wisely... Here starts my piece of BAKWAAS 😆 pls jhel lenaa...hamaare rabb aapko hamaare iss jhulm se bachaaye...uff so here you goes...

Jab aankein khole toh aaghosh mein liye ek sundar se ek kavithaa rooh ko iss kadhar choo liye gaalo par kuch nami mehsoos huye palke jhapkaate choo ke dekhe toh inn nainon se ashk behne lage aur honthon pe muskaan rehne lage kya ye sach teh ya sirf hamaare kalpana kehnaa
hai laakhon ye lafzein par chore hai alfaaz ne raahein hai yeh ek sundar sa phasaana isse jaane yeh saara zamaana kya yeh sach teh ya sirf hamaare kalpana

Then Manan's point of view was superb...then his continuation of her line's... And last their signature... The way nandu's opening up in front of him it was all awesome...
Then manik's teasing... Nandu's blushing... The way he took a bite and recognized her taste it was like awww!!!...then manik said her about his 6 months without her... It's just touched my heart...the way he kept his head in her lap and sharing his life it just took me to the memory lane...where i never wanted to visit 😭 anyways chuck it...and yeah nandu's forehead kiss to manik was just magical to imagine...
And then comes the topic as a bomb to our hero.. Hehehe... aryan is never interested in Nandini coz he's engaged to her cousin Aditi... 😆 😆 trust me Soulie this jealous Malhotra was awesome till date...hehe..from now on I'm so gonna miss his this side...
Finally BAPPA's step two completed... 😛

PS- Soulie uff.. Jo throw karne hai feel free to throw like sade huye tomatoes... Other veggies... Trash...sab teek hai but not egg ok...I'm a pure vegetarian and i don't have patience to handle its raw smell...so egg ko chor ke jo mann mein aaye you can throw... 😆 😆
Mann mein jo bhakwaas aaye wo sab likh diye hai...so acche lage toh sweet dreams samaj lijiye buraa lage toh nightmare... Okk...and haan dare not to say lie hamaare dil rakhne k liye...remember na Cat's eye so i can easily catch your lies...abhi ham Choo Mantar hone waale hai...Bbyeee...next update review I'll give after receiving 21st Chapter... I'm becoming lazy day by day you see...continue soonish... 😆
Take care stay blessed

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@ps_angel

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Posted: 9 years ago

#785

O gosh di
Kya ch tha

My god

Phle to manik ki line
subh qali
Awesme

N den wo weird si silent ph convo

Lolzzz

Bt nandini ne itna bdaa step liyaaa

Manik is such a jerk!!!

Nandini has evry ryt to b angry...

Abb manao mr.manik malhotra

Bda gussa ataa h naa apko
Lolzzz

Glad u recovered...
Take gud care of urslf
Loads of love di... ;) :)

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aarohi arora

@aarohi_angel98

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Posted: 9 years ago

#786

Amazing update...
Very well written...
Loved it to the core...
Cont soon...

LOVE,
AAROHI...

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ruchi116

@ruchi116

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Posted: 9 years ago

#787

Awesome update their kisses was superb loved it how he kissed her n then maniks anger spoiled everything he is so impulsive ek bar sun lrta par nhi after all he is manik malhotra kisi aur ki baat kaise sun sakta hai. He has hurt her ab manik KO bahut mehnat karni padegi nandu KO manans k liye waiting to know manik kya karta hai

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etu

@etuu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#788

hey, how are you now????? tumhara hand kaisa hai????? update was as usual rocking... the reason of kisses are seriously beautifully written... ... uff impulsive manik is back... for his impulsiveness nandini was hurt... take your time for update... & take care your hand...

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AsthaVerma92

@AsthaVerma92

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#789

Ohhh god hw manan r wid each other...
Ohhh god hw hurt nandini is after manik's behaviour...,,,,,,,,,

Plzzz update new part soon...
Nd PM me i didnt rcv...

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ankita_t

@ankita_t

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#790

Originally posted by: AsthaVerma92
Ohhh god hw manan r wid each other...
Ohhh god hw hurt nandini is after manik's behaviour...,,,,,,,,,

Plzzz update new part soon...
Nd PM me i didnt rcv...

Hi Astha,

Thanks a lot for sharing your views... I am very sorry i guess by mistake it happened that you didn't receive the PM, sorry about it... I will be more cautious next time.

Take care.

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