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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: memoona.zahid

Heyyy! Don't worry you'll get more response as your story is being unfolded and I'm loving it ! Just keep up the good work. So you're elder than me! Should I call you di/didi? I would love too!
Hahaha I'm glad she's not like any normal serial beti. I don't know how to add songs here otherwise I would've helped too! Honestly I'm not into dramas now as I've my studies but few of my Indian friends used to update statuses about this very show so I started watching it this year in April and became a crazy fan of KYY. I'm proud to be a crazy fan of KYY. Its just cause of them otherwise I don't watch dramas cause they become very unrealistic at times!
Where's the update? I'm missing it! I really wanna know how Manik will handle Nandini now? This is gonna be seriously interesting to read and imagine! LOL ;)


Hi,

Well, i like your optimistic attitude...Yes, you can call me Didi, infact i'll like it :) I am really sorry just that my schedules at work are very bad for this week...I'll try to write something on my way back to home...London gives you one thing as bonus if you can make use of it, and that's your commute time in the underground train...my all updates have been the proper utilization of that 40-50 minutes run i have to make while going back to home...😆 So when you notice errors in spellings, sorry it's something that happens while travelling, at times i write on phone or at times on my laptop...

Coming to the next part, i don't know why all readers feel a girl can be broken only because of a guy only...yes, Aarav is a major reason, no doubts...but, we'll come to know how over the years she had transformed from being a delicate, protected, keeping that innocence alive she transformed into a girl who took decisions, was firm, even after something hurted her,she would get back to normal life and keep the pain inidsie her...

The next chapter would be a mix of author's naration and characters...but, moreover i will actually leave it open-eneded for readers to make sense out of it with a question and then we'll progress ahead in story for another mark in NANDINI and MANIK'S life...

Hopefully, I won't dissapoint you and other readers by the next 2 parts...

One confession, I took the eessence of Nandini's past from a person I actually know and i know the journey that girl went through...So, it's not fiction...


Edited by ankitathanvi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ankitathanvi


Hi,

Well, i like your optimistic attitude...Yes, you can call me Didi, infact i'll like it :) I am really sorry just that my schedules at work are very bad for this week...I'll try to write something on my way back to home...London gives you one thing as bonus if you can make use of it, and that's your commute time in the underground train...my all updates have been the proper utilization of that 40-50 minutes run i have to make while going back to home...😆 So when you notice errors in spellings, sorry it's something that happens while travelling, at times i write on phone or at times on my laptop...

Coming to the next part, i don't know why all readers feel a girl can be broken only because of a guy only...yes, Aarav is a major reason, no doubts...but, we'll come to know how over the years she had transformed from being a delicate, protected, keeping that innocence alive she transformed into a girl who took decisions, was firm, even after something hurted her,she would get back to normal life and keep the pain inidsie her...

The next chapter would be a mix of author's naration and characters...but, moreover i will actually leave it open-eneded for readers to make sense out of it with a question and then we'll progress ahead in story for another mark in NANDINI and MANIK'S life...

Hopefully, I won't dissapoint you and other readers by the next 2 parts...

One confession, I took the eessence of Nandini's past from a person I actually know and i know the journey that girl went through...So, it's not fiction...


Didii, its okayy. Take your time! I can imagine how hectic it would be! So you utilize the time when you're going back home, thanks to the underground trains! Who cares about the spelling errors, I hardly saw any. Its really great to know if you write during that time only, that's appreciating. 👏
This is because all the shows a girl broken only cause of a guy. This is what we see! But sometimes its not always that, it can betrayal from your family, relative, best friend anything.
But sometimes you have to take out your pain, let it all out. You need someone to share so this would be interesting how will she share her pain with Manik!
I'm sure, you won't disappoint any of us! 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: memoona.zahid

Didii, its okayy. Take your time! I can imagine how hectic it would be! So you utilize the time when you're going back home, thanks to the underground trains! Who cares about the spelling errors, I hardly saw any. Its really great to know if you write during that time only, that's appreciating. 👏
This is because all the shows a girl broken only cause of a guy. This is what we see! But sometimes its not always that, it can betrayal from your family, relative, best friend anything.
But sometimes you have to take out your pain, let it all out. You need someone to share so this would be interesting how will she share her pain with Manik!
I'm sure, you won't disappoint any of us! 😊


Hi,

Good to see you have an understanding of the situations that can happen...OK, well Nandini's past is inspired by someone i really know...Nandini will let her pain out and that too forever...How Manik will handle things will be a part of CHAPTER 9 (D)...
Just a small teaser for you, Nandini after her breakdown, would be in Manik's home the next morning... 😊

You mentioned, you were studying and have exams, so what are you studying and where are you from?


Edited by ankita_t - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Hi,

I will try and write the chapter 9 (c) today after i finish work...it's 5:30 p.m. in London and i am still in office...So, once i am out and on the underground train, i'll start...So, hopefully maybe tonight i might be able to do chapter 9 (c)...

Hope you can give me that much time 😊 It feels great to know you are waiting for the update...

Thanks...
Edited by ankita_t - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow.. Pls start soon..
N yea eagerly waiting..
I really love ur stry
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ankitathanvi


Hi,

Good to see you have an understanding of the situations that can happen...OK, well Nandini's past is inspired by someone i really know...Nandini will let her pain out and that too forever...How Manik will handle things will be a part of CHAPTER 9 (D)...
Just a small teaser for you, Nandini after her breakdown, would be in Manik's home the next morning... 😊

You mentioned, you were studying and have exams, so what are you studying and where are you from?


Heyyy! Ohh so your story is inspired by someone you know personally? I'm so eager to know.
Thank you for the teaser! :)
Yes, I'm studying! I'm doing MBBS! 3rd year final exams are near then 4th year insha'Allah and yes I'm from Pakistan! =D
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: memoona.zahid

Heyyy! Ohh so your story is inspired by someone you know personally? I'm so eager to know.
Thank you for the teaser! :)
Yes, I'm studying! I'm doing MBBS! 3rd year final exams are near then 4th year insha'Allah and yes I'm from Pakistan! =D

Hi,

Well it is not correct...the story is my brain child completely thought...i just took a few elements for Nandini's past from a person i know, so that the past looks more convincing...It's not inspired by anyone...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ankitathanvi


Hi,

Well it is not correct...the story is my brain child completely thought...i just took a few elements for Nandini's past from a person i know, so that the past looks more convincing...It's not inspired by anyone...



Looking forward to it ! =)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow awesome update...
Sorry for commenting late...
Now who is this aarav??
Jst don't bring him b/w Manan pls...
Jst hope Nandu share her past with manik...
Luved it..
Update soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very nice.Eagerly waiting for next update

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