Manan OS-Do I know you?? Introd-1 UPDATED -7 - Page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
#81
And i wont tell u to make this OS, FF coz its better to keep few things like they were thought to be...
Well, idm if u cont. kidding😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#82
Wow...it was too good dear...
I really loved it to the core...it was simple but vry sweet love story...aww...manan r soo adorable...
Really loved the way he didnt care abt the world n was staring at her gf...n that mukti's comment...epic...hahaha...!!
I must sae u really r a vry good writer...I such a simple way u depict soo pure love...! Hats off...!!
Bye...tc...stay blessed. ...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: LoveIsMusic

OMG!! This was amazing!! And r u mad! Kisko bore ho sakta hai itni amazing OS mein!! in fact I didn't wanted it to end only...
I love the whole idea behind it, hehe rivals in front of the whole world but made in love each other! U carried it out amazingly:)
Loved nandini ke cloths <3
Nandini raat ko do baje, soyi! Itni late tak kya kar rahi thi aur kiske saath thi :p
U know when the starting mein bumped into each other... I actually thought that nandini means what she said(do I know u) but Last mein toh<33
I loved it, when ever time these two we're addressed as queen and king of their college! No one could ever think after seeing them ki ke love each other... Even there bff don't know abt this :o
but seriously when ever they had a face off no one could ever think that they r madly in love! Like wow, u wrote it so flawlessly... Damn I have become a fan of ur's!!
Manik ia actually shameless khulam khula pyaar to his biggest rival
But seriously these girls we're giving nandini dead glares just coz Manik was flirting with her! But agar sab ko pata chala ki they r in love with each other toh pata nahi un sab ka kya hogaa!! Seriously I literally cannot imagine what will happen when every one comes to know abt them!
Mukti's comment to trease him, haha loool!!!
and then cabir ka romeo juliet comment! Hahaha;p.bechara Manik;)
And then Manik asking her question to her only! DO I KNOW YOU? well yes, u do... And If u even dare to forget her she wilp kill u! Gf's r dangerous: p
Nandini is smart! She so surely knew that he will come:)
Ahem ahem now someone was blushing haha !
Manik sitting behind her, and she asking him that now she will have to drive for his bf was very cuteee...
And of course the concluding line is LOVE!
P.S. I love that Fu song which nandino had as her ring tone for muk!
& u love mukti na? She plays an imp role in all ur stories:) well even I love mukti/charlie!
Take care...

And your comments simply make me smile every time even if I'm sitting with a stupid running nose hehe..so tysm for liking it as it is my first Os so wasn't sure..hmm nandu styling na actually the secret is we have Western wear shop soo I'm good in it ;)
Yez I love mukti..Charlie...and Arymaan..Karan!! like I really look up to them on their personal front!!
Yes sometimes planned things are better..If I can continue than I'll else I write some more Os hehe..
Thank you once again!!

PS-You have given me a habit of quoting ^*^
Love you ^-^
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Posted: 9 years ago
#84
Oh my god...itni achi navratri gift...wowiee.e...just love it...
Bt me na tumse gussa hu...itni achi story koi one shot rakhta hai...are ff banao iska... Bahut achha hai...u know na i cam never get tired of reading your work...

Starting me to laga ki kya hoga...kya hoga...inke bich me...kahi nandu manik ko punch to nai kar degi...vo utna gur raha tha use...

But then the secret was disclosed...and what a wonderful secret...and that scene in the room...do i need to tell u thay it was awsm...and after all of that mukti ka manik ko one liner...aankhein nikal ke gotiya khelungi...hahahah...that was totally hillarious...maza aagya...

Aise aur gifts dete rehna...aur agar possible ho to ise two shot bana do...jisme mukti aur cabir ko inke relation ke bare me pata chal jaye...and thoda manan romance teasing and of course ruthna manana...

After all its ur decision only...bt ek aur part likh dena...


Lots of love
Manan
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Posted: 9 years ago
#85

Oh! U have got cold, take care...

U always make us smile with ur wonderful stories, so u too deserve to smile na!😊

Glad that u made this first attempt to write an OS and u indeed very super successful!

U have a western wear shop!! You r so lucky, every day new clothes, hehe( U KNOW WHAT I NEVER USED TO USE "HEHE" BUT NOW I USE IT QUITE OFTEN;P)

Yes, so I fond someone like me! Even il ove these two<3 I was following them from way before than Ky2 had started!

YOU SHOULD WRITE MORE OS's!!!
NO NEED TO THANK... ONCE AGAIN

And abt ur habit of quoting... then let me tell u, I'll never let u loose it too, hehe!😆

Love u too❤️



Originally posted by: star_struck

And your comments simply make me smile every time even if I'm sitting with a stupid running nose hehe..so tysm for liking it as it is my first Os so wasn't sure..hmm nandu styling na actually the secret is we have Western wear shop soo I'm good in it ;)
Yez I love mukti..Charlie...and Arymaan..Karan!! like I really look up to them on their personal front!!
Yes sometimes planned things are better..If I can continue than I'll else I write some more Os hehe..
Thank you once again!!

PS-You have given me a habit of quoting ^*^
Love you ^-^

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Posted: 9 years ago
#86
awww
its awesome
loved it
nd yes i really witnessed these kind of luv strys
loved it really
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Posted: 9 years ago
#87
mast chappy..
keep writing...
keep smiling.. 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#88
Awww that was very cute...
Loved it...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#89
It ws fab..
So they r in a relatnshp frm.bfr...I didn't see it cmng...so ws surprised...
But rivalry n all ws fun...
N mukti's dilogue ws hillarious ...hihi..
I hope u could gv us sm more chptrs of dis n turn it into a ss if nt a ff...
I mean u could jst gv us chptrs about hw they fell in lv inspite of being rivals...
N dn evry1 knowng about them n dn hw they tackle d situatn n all...

Plz think about it...it wl b grt if u dcid to xtnd it...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#90
Omg! Wht a beautiful twist, loved it, manan together, cnt wait fr next update

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