manan os:like father like son2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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so here i am again. With the sequel of this os. Iam not able to write on that thread as the topic is closed idk why. So im here. I dnt knw what got into me today to write part2 for thi.
I knw very few people knw dis os. So u can search the part one and then continue with this one.
:)


pin drop scilence it was after that.. Ahaan's little sleepy questiong eyes,and nandini's glare.. Manik was mum..
Bitting his inner cheeks he managed to frame some words in his mind and first answered his carbon copy,not literally!
''sshh ahu...''was all he could think of and uttered at that moment.
'what are you both talking about,please tell me na..'nandini said partly cribbing and showing fake anger,which was running away from her,after watching the ah-dow-rable site infront of her..


''vo..voo..n..nothing.. He was saying that he wants to have chole bhaure today, not dosa, haina ahi??'' manik said while guesturing ahaan to agree with him.

Making a little pout,the most smallest one present there said.. ''noi mumma meto to dolacakes khane hai ajh. Dolaemon jashe.!!''
shocked to the core. Manik stared at his son and then looked at nandini,who was ready to swallow him,played with his fingers a bit and pouted, just like the smaller one..
Now both of them were pouting..the little one with confusion,and the bigger one with embarrasment..

Only nandini knew how she was controlling her laughter and awww-ish ness, after watching the duo.. Ditto copy of each other,she thought.

''hmm..okay my cotton ball today we'll eat doracake okae? First you go and brush your teeth and take a bath with your pa okae?'' nandini ordered her cotton ball, the smallest monster, as her mr.monster didnt listened to her.

''otae..'' said ahaan,showing his two bunny teeth.

Still in the same-i-am-angry mode,nandini came towards the father-son duo..
And pecked on both of their cheeks..
''awww mele do do monsters..'' she said pulling their cheeks,winking at manik..
He understood that her fake anger is gone now,,so biding adeiu to his fake embarrasment,he hugged his little monster family...


''now go and do what i said'' nandini again said sternly..
''otae mama''ahaan frowned and dragged his father with him to the bathroom..


both of them came to the dining area after freshing up..walking exatly like each other..wearing white cotton t-shirts and blue half pants... Monster Manik along with the exact small chotu copy of the bada sa monster manik..but in a softest way possible..


Sorry i knw im not up to the mark.
Btw thank you all for liking part1 of this story. :)
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suraiya77 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazin'
it was too cute
loved it
ArchRM thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Short N Sweet... Cute OS...


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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update...
loved it so much...
manik and his cute family...they are just adorable...
keep up the good work...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome family
Loved it
Cute ahaan
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Can I get the link of part 1
Plzz..i really wanna go through it 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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that's nicee...

I toh likeee it..

itsss interesting. ..

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ArchanaRM

Short N Sweet... Cute OS...




thanku :) ur dp too is very cute
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sharon.babu

awesome update...

loved it so much...
manik and his cute family...they are just adorable...
keep up the good work...


thanks a lot.. :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: unnatishukla241

Awesome family

Loved it
Cute ahaan
Continue soon


hey.. Im glad that u liked it.. Thanks..
But this was an impulsive idea which popped in my mind when i saw one post of father-son duo on fb..2nd part likhne ki tak ni sochi thi maine.. But den one day i thought of giving a sequel,as one of the member requested..so this os ends here only.. Sorry..

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