MaNan FF//The Ex's At War//Link for Thread 2 on pg 150

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love_manan

@love_manan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#911

oh my.god...maza aa gaya...u know u have an amazing talent of writimg..t.here are lots of ppl here who writes but u r different.

hahahah...i loved the way manini asked her mother to kiss hher father at the wound...ans that cabir's one liner "apni patni se ma kha liya"...ahhah..i loved that..

all in over i loved the whole update...thanks for the pm.waiting for the nxt update..

lots of love

manan

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khadupam

@khadupam

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Posted: 9 years ago

#912

OMG Tht was Hilarious
I was laughing like anything
It's fun story
I m enjoying it fully
I love manini
Well ab MANIK kaa action dekhna hay Ki woh rewa Kay saath Kya karayga
Continue soon

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Kavyashree pradhan

@Kavyashree22

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Posted: 9 years ago

#913

YES PLEASE,MAI HU YAHA..BUT TRUST ME, I WAS DOSING OFF WHILE READING..!! 😃 from next time i won't waste time yelling and making faces thinking that its a sequal these and that,blah blah.. 😉 i was just giggling and laughing during whole update and trust me its not boring. And m loving manini, it was like as if manan are her children and she is sole guardian of them.. Loved it..its just babal update.. Thanq for pm

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Cutebaby9889

@Cutebaby9889

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Posted: 9 years ago

#914

awsm update

hehe manik afraid of cockroach

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Lily

@lily18

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Posted: 9 years ago

#915

Hey sorry for the late reply was very ill..

But the update is awsome..

Rewa's condition made by nandini was hilarious😉

manik was hurt but it definately led to better good..

Nandini's action and manini's prank totaly made my day..😆

Manini is super cute and sharp.

continue soon thanks for the pm

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simkapoor

@simkapoor

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Posted: 9 years ago

#916

hey di... finally finally finally i gt to knw abt ur this story...i ws searchng fr it since vry long...
thn i found ur index thn gt to knw abt this...
really srryyy ... i m vry late...
nw abt the story...
i hv read implsive soulmate bt ws nvr abl to cmmnt on it srry fr tht as i didnt knw abt hw to cmmnt...
bt ur tht story ws awsm...n it ws becz of ur story that i cme on if...n nw i m a memb ...jst to read ur story...it ws awsm that hw two individl becme 1 inspite of so so so mny diffrnces n still thy hv sme eq..heheh...it ws vry beautifl story...

n nw ur ths story...its amazingly amazing...marvelous ..fab...suprb...aur kya bolu...frm the frst chap to the frth...wow...manini is so so so cute...i knw manini wiill brng thm togthr...

thy still fit the sme...
in frst chap...the bnding love btw fathr daughtr is awsm...
n thn party ...grt...rivalsss ...the one who wre
once lvrs ( still they r though they will nt accept it...still they r impulsive...) r nw rivals...wohooo..

thn that rewa she is still mrs malhotra so beware of it...
thn the healing prt...
n thn manini n manans lift scene...heheh ...cockroach...hahah...maza aagai usme to sachi ...that ws hilarious...

cntinue soonnn diii...n pls pm me too...i will send u bddy req...
bye tc...

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..paarsaa..

@..paarsaa..

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Posted: 9 years ago

#917

wow mera happy birthday as gaya!!
happy birthday to me!!
loved the update but I have a question how u know about my childhood that u r writing the character if manini? 🤣
I mean she is do cute like me...
manan seen was awesome
n nandini ko rewa ko zot ja jhapad dena chahiyr thaa