MaNan FF//The Ex's At War//Link for Thread 2 on pg 150

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Pari_mananholic

@Pari_mananholic

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#581

Wow update...

Manini is soo cute...

Washroom scene was soo cute...

A cute sa family bath kinda scene...

Poor rewa...

Manik still can handle someone ogling at his wife...

I jst luv impulsive manik...

Car little convo was emotional...

They luv their daughter soo much...

Where do now manik live???

Last line was wow...

They still love each other...no matter what...

Luved it...

Can't wait for next chappie...

Thnx for pm...

Update soon..

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Soha

@sohalee

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Posted: 9 years ago

#582

LOVING THIS

they love each other but situations are making them to hate each other

hope they clear out their diffrences soon

manik can never hear anything against nandnai

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A.N

@monsoon_lover

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Posted: 9 years ago

#583

I love the chotu choco pie manini...
That was a nice update...
Rewa ko Antarctica bhej do..pleaseee...
Manan as always rocked...

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AvantikaRoy

@AvantikaRoy

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#584

Wow such a lovely update. It was short and lovely. Manini wetting nandini in the washroom was cute along with Manik.
It was good to know that even when they r not together Manik still couldn't stand anyone question Nandini's integrity.
It showed that they were on good terms or say courteous terms with each other. They still love each other the same way even when they r away.

Now I am even more intrigued to see the reasons why they parted ways in the first place. I am sure you'll pen them down beautifully and also practically.

Keep going and try to update more often. Love ur work.

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stunning555

@stunning555

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Posted: 9 years ago

#585

Wow!!! Superb update...!!

Manini is sho cute :)

M wondering family is complete & that too in washroom...!!! Soo adorable...manini's cute antics jxt awesome...!!!

They r connected to the hearts..!!

They dont show this but surely they care alot about each other..!!

HAhaha Rewa's part was hilarious...!!! :p but worried k wo nandini k sth kch kre na :/

HAHaha in one day mother daughter ripped him off his clothes...!! Hahaha seriously thats why i love ur writings...!!

Cox there is always spice in ur each chap...!!

Keep it up..!! :)

Stay blessed..!

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richa20298

@richa20298

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#586

Amazing update...loveddd it thanks for pm...😊

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prasanna77

@prasanna77

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#587

loved the chapter...

they both love each other...but they are not together...it is really difficult thing to do...

hope they get their senses back and realize their mistakes...

I felt very sad when manik had to leave his own house after dropping nandini and manani..

u described the entire washroom sequence perfectly...i enjoyed it...

thanks for the pm..😊.

waiting for next chapter...

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angelsweta

@angelsweta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#588

nych update...
update soon...
jaldi jaldi wala update ...
loads f luv n care

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Arunima

@abhutani0311

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Posted: 9 years ago

#589

Hey i love the way you write...a beautifully penned chapter once again i must say! Manik is still so protective about nandini, and of course still attracted to her, and so is she, in fact possessive too! Then whats the problem? I wonder what happened between the two love doves that led to their separation...please continue soon! And thanks a lot for this unexptected chapter in the middle of the week :P thanks for the PM!
Love,
Arunima