MaNan FF//The Ex's At War//Link for Thread 2 on pg 150 - Page 45

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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update
good one
suspense ???
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Liking it...i always enjoy reading ur ff...you wont believe but I have read impulsive soulmates more then twice...pls pls don't wrap it up soon its a different story pls continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow...awesome...
The tri malhotra so gud...
The way manini unintentionally
bringing manik together wow...
I hope the chudail rewa will
be soon out of manan's life...
The jealousy game will bring manan together hamesha...
Where is manini???is rewa done something???
Continue soon... 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi, Thks for the PM 😊
Gosh !! Sujal1 how do u manage to write all this ,
I mean Manik n Nandani can't stand anyone else around them,
But then to they r not together for months . 😭
Manini is so cute n smarty also, after all she the smartness genes from her parents . 👏
I'm the baby, and he is my Daddy, hehehe that was hilarious.
Manik being the possessive husband, was cool.
Amazing
Off course make things alright between them plz.
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Posted: 9 years ago
it is actually soo perfect yarr sach mai how u manage to give a grt update I was actually so shocked itna jaldi update hehhe that was grt n it was actually sooo awesome yarr muhhaaa yeh manini he in dono impulsive soul mate s ko saath lekar aage thnks for the pm pls ase hi update karti rahah karo yarr its awesome pls pm mw next tym jaldi jaldi se okk ps I m ur fan n u r grt
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Posted: 9 years ago
again superb update
waiting eagerly for next part...loved possessive manik..

manik and nandini they are really impulsive soulmates...they obviously love each other..

wondering what happened between both of them beacuse everything is perfect previously...manik changed a lot then

enjoyed rose comments

manani is too cute..

thanks for the update😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice story. Keep going

Edited by A.Tejaswi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
We comments and likes kam honi ki chintha math karna. We are loving ur story. Just the way we adored the impulsiv soulmates or any other work of yours. We are loving this one too.
And moreover don't worry about dragging and all too. You are not the type of writer who writes to fill the pages anyways. And moreover we would like to have more and more updates too

The story started off well. There is a certain amount of suspense in the story too.

The 1st chapter had a great start. We got the idea of whats all happening. The background and characters. Our cabira, manik and nandini and cute manini... situation ka andaza lag gaya, And despite being informative its not at all boring. It was very interesting to read...

Coming to the secong chapter tho... aww... its very cute.. and wht not? It had cuty pie manini in it. How manik was holding manini all the while.

And the Rewa and Rose characters. I'm sure they are going to be very useful for the story, huh? haha. loved them too. Very funny.

And the best part for me in chap 2 was the para where manini was pulling rewa's earrings. That whole para was written with such wit i tell you. I read that one again and again. I couldn't stop smiling.

And last but not the least manik's possesiveness. It was good to read all that...

Keep going dear. Pls continue and give us lots of updates soon. Dont worry about like comments and worry that u might drag it.

Just remember we love ur work.

Cheers.

When we expect the next update for this? Tomorrow Possible? Please let us know beforehand na. Spare us some waiting time.
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Posted: 9 years ago

"I am the baby.. this ish my Daddy", Manini held Manik tighter and cringed her brows in irritation to see her Daddy being addressed by an even more ridiculous pet name than hers.
Is rewa ko akal manini sikhayegi!!!

See I told you this little girl is enough for you...heaven help you if Nandini decides to take the charge against you", Rose once again remarked into Rewa's ears only to escalate her irritation my manifolds.
I am loving rose here!!

Daughter's are fond of their fathers", he said it purposely with a wide smile.
( hahahaha! Kamini harkato se manik kabhi baz nhi atta and I lovveee him for that)

Every time she did it Manik stopped her even while his full concentration was our talks. Manik held her hand to stop her from messing my hair and disturbing me.
( awww I can imagin that...u know di...thises little moments make ur story more powerful and effective I told u this earlier too)

Just look Rewa..when Manini was bothering you he didn't even care to look at you but see with Nandini around he is so much in control of his daughter", Rose again poked Rewa
( hey! Sexy Scarlett is getting brainszzz)

Manik was by my side and he quiet conveniently slid his hand behind my bare back before Steve could put his hand on me. I could sense he not very pleased by my backless blouse more so because he had never seen me dress that bold for a party and also the over excited cuddly cozy Steve was contributing every bit in screwing his mood. He zoned me in completely in his embrace. Manik's behavior in public was mostly embarrassing but I couldn't let the fake smile fade due to the continuous clicks
( besttt part... Jelo manik possesive manik and smirking nandini hehehehe sounds super cool)

Urrrggghhh! I will kill u for she suspense per chod diya... Sumana di apni mishu par taras kaho and please save me from pressurizing my niku sa brain to imagine what is gonna happen...
And besharam di...pm me please(mishu wala pleases with a pout if that melts u) verse hi I saw ur msg so late nhi toh I wanted to comment first:( koi nhu agli bar sahi...I am loving everyone sply Cabir my jaan...mukti;) and rose and George bhi as he unknowingly played cupid BTW manan...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow... awesome update!
N please dont try to wrap up d story so soon as its totally interesting like d previous one..
dont dare to...its a req!
Pls update soon

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