MaNan FF//The Ex's At War//Link for Thread 2 on pg 150 - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
hey dear...
prologue is just fab...😃😃😃 (manan style hehehe...)

waiting for

manik's AURA and
nandini's PANACHE...
and obviously their clash...👏

update soon...

LOVE
SANJANA


P:S i would really be upset if rose becomes his GIRLFRIEND...
UPDATE LIPS DO LIE TOOO
Edited by Cutesanjana1008 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
Ah Han.. NEw stry.. Awesome..
Nice prologue..
I won't mind rose.. If u keep her the way she ws in kyy
PS it would be hilarious


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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
Yaayyy ur back ... thanku for starting another story .. do continue soon. . Sounds interesting. . Btw what about lips do lie ??
Ps .. please no rose ... please please
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
yess yesss yesss !!
start na...
what about lips do lie ???
tho i would love to have a sort-of-sequel for impulsive soulmates :) :) :)
i am fully interested :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
This seems interesting
I will definitely luv to kill u if u will make rose his gf 😆
Coz for me her character was so damn irritating

Well eager for reading ahead
Continue soon
Edited by sanviM - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36

oyeee

wow
sequel sequel😃😃
seems interesting
nooo 😡 nooo ways nvrrr
manik ki koi gf chahiye
rose toh bikul naiii😡😡
I will surely kil if roseis his gf if its so imp then sm1ese
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Sounds interesting! Keep me updated!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: Snehasn53

Hey suman dii
Post lips do lie part2 na pretty please
Coming to this... Concept seems interesting
I'm desperate to know why they hate each other
Will manini be there in this story??

PS: I'll be the firs one to kill you if you make rose as his girlfriend... Friends tak teek hai

Oh even I wanted to knw about Manini..will she be there?
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39

Here you go guys


Enjoy😛😛



PROLOGUE

A beautiful room of baby pink shade on the walls, stuffed with all kinds of toys from the world, teddies and barbie's scattered on the floor and we see a little girl on her micro mini study table scribbling on a note book. Her legs are dangling above the floor and her full concentration is on the notebook. She has her chubby cheeks, rosy lips and long tresses from her Mom and dark brown eyes and sharp features of her Dad. With a closer view it is seen that she is actually trying to draw something like 3 sticks of different size with big round heads. A proper look suggests that the middle one is her and on either sides holding her pencil thin hands are her parents. She looks at the drawing carefully about something missing and quickly adds a small curve down their noses that is how she wants them to be smiling.

Achi nahi hai na sholly...mujhe aaisa hi banana aata hai, she looks at her own drawing and apologizes in her toddler tone. On the very next moment she remembers that she needs to introduce herself to the readers.

Hello all

I am M3 short for Manini Multhy Malhotla, long na I know my little hands start paining when the teachel asks me to wlite my full name in school. I am 4 years old and I study in Bombay Scottish, my Dad's sthool. My dad is Manik Malhotla, he is the owner of AULA and my mommy is Nandini Multhy (Malhotla) and she wolks for Panache. They are like the bestest couple in the whole wide world but sadly they aren't togethel now. Dadi shays they are mad, first they loved each other madly and now they hate each other madly. I don't know why and I was never told but Dadi says it is me who can make them love again. But how can I?? I am shoo small. Who will listen to me??

Mommy and Daddy are not yet di..diholsed sorry I don't know how to plonounce it collect and Mommy also doesn't teach me too. She says I am too young to know these things but it somewhat means that I don't get to see Dad every day, I don't get to eat with him, I dont get to play with him or holiday with him and I don't get to give goodnight kisses to him. I stay with Mommy and she loves me a lot but I miss Dad too.

Though Dad often comes to school to meet me and blings me lots of toys and chocolates. He takes me fol rides and loves me a lot too. Sometimes he comes with anothel aunty. She tries to be sweet to me but I don't like her because Mom doesn't like her. She pulls my cheeks everytime we meet and I don't like it. My fliends in sthool shay that she is my Dad's GF. Now please don't ask what does that mean because as Mommy says I am too young to know these things. I think even Daddy doesn't like her may be because she is very annoying.

I just want Daddy to come back to us and I will do that. When the black coat uncle asks me I will say I want Mommy and Daddy both.

Manini pulls out a picture from her book and kisses it tenderly.

"Kadduu...Kadduu baby come fast you have your favorite pasta for dinner", she hears a voice from outside.

And that is Mommy. I hate the name Kaddu. It is shooo shamy shamy, all my fliends alsho tease me but she calls me that only, I know why because Daddy doesn't like it, she cringes her eyebrow in irritation and hops down the chair to run to her Mommy.

Mommy I am not a vegebelle...I am Manini Multhy Malhotla, she crosses her arms against her tiny frame like a grown up.

"Fine my pumpkin I won't call you that", Nandini pulls the little baby into her lap and presses her cheek for long affectionate kiss.

At times she is amazed to see certain similarities between her daughter and her erratic, idiotic, insensitive and estranged husband. No matter how much she tries to not think of him but that cute little being in her life never lets her forget about the monster in her life. Nandini brushes off her thoughts with a smile and helps her Kaddu to eat. It is unlike other days when she had to run around the whole house to feed her, today it is her favorite dish so she wouldn't need to toil much. The mother daughter duo was having their lovely dinner time together when Nandini gets a call.

"Kad..sorry baby finish your food I will just come back in two okay", Nandini made her sit on the chair and went inside to take the call.

My Mommy is sweet isn't she?? She is only a little bigger than me. Dad used to lift her as easily as he would pick me up. I miss to see them togethel, it was so much fun..please Aiyappa get Dad back to us. I plomise I will not waste food, not tlouble Mommy, be good to everyone please God let us be togethel again.

The little angle closed her eyes, folded her hands and prayed to the almighty to let her have her family back. She opened her eyes and turned to get back to the readers.

Okay it is time for me to do sleepy sleepy now and don't worry it is not me, my Mommy will be nallating you our stoly as always because I am still too young to be talking about these things na. If you don't understand my language please talk to the authol, she made me do this.

Behno likh diya maine prologue now do tell me how is it. Again a lots of question might have raised which would be dealt eventually. New readers I am hoping you shouldn't have a problem in understanding because even though it is a continuation it is after a break so more like a fresh story in itself. Let me have your feedback please.

About the language I hope u understood but if not I am not at fault coz that's how toddlers talk. Okies now please can any one of u be sweet and diligent enough to make me a banner for this. I really suck at these things but I see other having banners for their stories and I feel jelo. So if anyone can help this poor soul you shall be blessed.

Edited by sujal1fan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
wow diii jst loved it
the cutest tsalks of the baby was simple super
u pineed very beatifully abt the little one
she want to make her family one
she is missing manik very badly
continue soon
love to read
early waiting for next update
stay blessed

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