MaNan FF//The Ex's At War//Link for Thread 2 on pg 150

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Yashu

@yashu_varshney

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Posted: 9 years ago

#381

Lovely update..

Best part was...Oh hello Mrs. Malhotra..;);)

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Tishyy

@Tishyy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#382

Wohoo gal if u planning to give me updates like these...U have my full attention ...
U will find me totally hooked and booked on this one..
I have to be honest ... When u started this ff... I was lil skeptical..like the separation track ... How will she take this forward ...
But gal ... Hats off to u ... U are doing a Brillant job here
ex's at war ahaan but with a twist ... No ordinary separation track... One will see the Sparks the fights the jealousy the love ... Ya may be lil tears here and there too
I am so ready to join this ride with and enjoy each and every update
Kudos to u gal ... Take a bow
Loads of love

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Zoha Sadaqat

@zohasad2.0

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Posted: 9 years ago

#383

ohk...so I found another ff of yours. It's amazing. After impulsive soulmates I love the feels man. <3

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Kavyashree pradhan

@Kavyashree22

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#384

After happie ending... There is no emotional thing.. And its sounding interesting.. So wanna read more.. And yeah,waiting for 'lips do lie..' thanq for pm

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Rochee1803

@Rochee1803

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Posted: 9 years ago

#385

Omg it was amazing i loved ittt bechari navya manini k sath time nh spent kr payyii but kya hua manini daddy k sath to reh payi ooppsss mr nd mrs malhotra infront of each other nw battle hehhe nxt soon sujal

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SNEHA

@snow_manan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#386

super awesome update

you always amaze me dear

just waaooowww👏👏👏

the way the story develops ufff...you have that magic in you

the way to express your thoughts in words...those words become paragraphs

and paragraphs become a beautiful story👏👏👏 ...superb

daddy and his princess attachment was beautiful

the way you have penned their relationship was amazing...v.touching

manan don't live together ...but...

still both are attracted to each other...and nandini's saari does it all😳😳

and manik's smirk is always been his trademark...so nothing goes wrong there

lets see how the party goes with the trio😉

now waiting for more...eagerly

superb girl

keep up the great work

amazing👏👏👏

update soon

thanks for the pm😊

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erujaslam

@erujaslam

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#387

Oh. My. God.

Amazing as always. Waiting for the next one.

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manan_0711

@manan_0711

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#388

Ty for d pm...

awesome update...

loved d update to d core...

awww loved manik n manini moments to d core...

God yaar am so excited to read further coz manini baby is going to bring her mom n dad back...

plz continue soon...if possible give us manan dance...

'll b waiting for d update...

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51083alishashah

@51083alishashah

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Posted: 9 years ago

#389

Awww manini is so cutteee...i really liked manik n manini bond...i guess party is gonna rock...i hope we will get some manan moments in further chapter n thanks for pm