#3MaNanSS:Dheere Dheere Link To Thread 4/PG1/17th-OCT - Page 96

Diii awesome update

Guys someone puts so much efforts to write stories and we are sitting and complaining.
Not Fair ppl.
Lets respect writer's work .
Even while writing a comment on a story lets use words Wisely.
No Offence But i am a Huge Marwara story fan.

ITS NOTHING LIKE KI WE DON'T LIKE YOUR FF...

Dear ...Mawara,

Superb

haww shadii !!!!


loved it

Updt soon

Dear
plz dnt take them srsly
ur stories aren't annoying bt these 2 are surely
n Mawara u dnt need 2 clarify anythng
jst be u n write wat u want
jisko na pasnd ho na pdhe
1 story to likhkr bta de pta chalega kitne papad belne pdte h
aye bde criticise krne

It was just awesome manan ki shaadi expect nahi kiya tha par jo bhi tha best tha

Originally posted by: falah5

<font size="4">I saw your name in hall of fame and happen to read all your ffs in one go within 2days...u r an incredible writer and your dedication is remarkable. kudos to you girl.👍🏼
But in all your ffs "tum mile" "love" and also this dheere dheere. the female lead character is highly annoying. You always portray your female lead as somebody weak and who was harassed in the past and in present is highly dependent physically and mentally on male lead . Either they behave very much annoyingly childish or highly immature for their age.
I hope you take this as constructive criticism and in your future FFs you portray nandini's character as shown in the show where she is mentally strong and not a cry baby. </font>

I disagree with you, because yes Nandini's is shown as quite sensitive but she's not weak when it comes to manik and other situation she does fight back. And I think the stories that a written are mostly based on what would happen in a real situation not everyone is strong to fight back. The thing I like about Dheere Dheere is that we know that Manik is older n Nandini is young so it's obvious that she is slightly immature however when it comes to the situation she does fight back.

If the characters were too childish then I doubt so many people would love it this much. Sharing options is not a problem but plz try to b sensible n not hurt anyone

Di u r the best writer...all ur stories r equally awsome literally i m obsessed with all of them...

Harshad !! No no no..that bloody Jerkshad !!!