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puzzz

@puzzz

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Posted: 9 years ago

#941

Very nice... dear...finally... they are husband and wife...yeh harshad ki toh 😡 😡 ...sacchie...I will break his face... but...thik hi hae... because of him...they both got married...and I just love the bonding between nandini and Fab 5 ...continue soon...just loving ur update...and thank you so much for the pm dear...eagerly waiting for the sun satthiya update...plsss... update...missing manvi ...very much... I read all parts twice yaar...can't wait any more.
Love puzzz 😳 😳 😳

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Inaya

@Cute_Inaya

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#942

Hello dear...

Sorry for my late reply...

I read ur two update in one go...

Itni jaldi do update thank you so much...

Coming to update 13

Update was superb...

Finally manik ki misunderstanding clear ho gyi or fab 5 phir se ek sath ho gaye...

mr manhotra wo apne bete ke sath aisa kaise kr sakte h

Manan convo aur romance was soo good...

Coming to update 14

update was superb full damaka

harshad cheap uski evil plan...

when manik say i truest u nandini aur manik usse console krta h awesome...

Fab 4 aur nandini ki bonding too good..

Aur jab manik chala jata hai fab 4 nandini ka itni care krte h ...amazing scene..

Harshad kidnap nandini aur manik ke khilaf bharkta h aur jab manik usse bachane aata h aur nandini wo question krti h... To emotional..

Wowww manik ne nandini se shadi kr li i don't expect this but u always surprise us ...

Regarding ur note ur plz maine phele bhi kha tha characters m kuch change mat karo ...i like this characters the way u describe... plz don't change...

Thank you soo much for the double update...

Keep smiling...

Keep it up...

See u soon...

Lots of love...

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navla

@navla

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Posted: 9 years ago

#943

Outstanding update...read chapter 13 n 14 ongo...

Chap 13.

Its outstanding update...

Manik punched tiger ...manik was so much in pain...

Cabir also know ther secret...

How one father go to such extend...manik father try to kill him...poor manik...

Manik cried like baby...tht was emotional part...

Nandu was cutie pie...

Fab5 is back ...manan scene was nice...

Wht tht jerkshad doing there?...

Chap 14.

Beautiful update...

Manik trusted nandu...

Tiger punched tht jerkshad...gud harshad need tht punch...

Fab4 supported manan...amazing...love it...

I feel sad for nandu...she has to go in so much pain...fab5 supported her ...

Manik going to dubai...interesting...

Loved manan room scene when fab 4 comes n discuss abt dubai meeting...

Jack is no.1 flirt...he was flirtg with nandu whn her BF is with her...best love his part...

When manik going that scene was emotional she is cryg like baby... N Fab 4 n nandini bonding showed beautifully...she is really cutie pie... N tom n jerry fight was too gud...

Tht jerkshad again came...OMG he kidnapped nandu...fab5 scread wht will nandu going through...

Harshad manipulated nandu...

Manick saved her thank god...

Manan got married...too gud...😊

All scenes was best...

Update next part soon...waiting...

Just chill dear...ur writing is amazing...

I loved nandu character...she cutie pie...

If tht person don't like thn no need to read...

Plz cont. ur all stories...its amazing, outstanding...

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Tiara115

@Tiara115

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#944

Yr mawara ...plz don't pay heed to such comments ..

You are a beautiful writer and a person as it clearly depicts in ur writing ... so some people should have to be ignored. ...

All ur stories are perfect ...

They are depicting what a women goes through when that incident happens with them ...

If nanandu in ur all stories was weak than she should have been either dead or suffering from depression... but this is not happening ..

U portray that inspite of suffering so much still they are acting maturely and trying to move forward ...

So plz stop giving importance to such people ...

It's ur story ...u have the right to do whatever with it ...

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BriNi

@BriNi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#945

Originally posted by: Mawara_Ejaz

Hmm..! i am disappointed from your comment..! CRY BABY and all? Yaar i can't understand you all readers sab ki demands ko put in kar kar kay i am tired kise ko kuch pasand hai tou kise ko kuch..! jis ko nahi pasand na plz don't read..! i am hell annoyed and tired by all this criticism..! First you are praising me and second you are objecting on my female lead character.. Chuck it girl..! just chuck it please..! Pasand nahi hai don't read..! Main justifications day day kar thak gai hoon..! like seriously.!

isiliye tumhare story pr commnt krne se darr lagta hai.. tumhe criticise ya suggest kiya toh tum "kindly check" notice krke sbko invite krke khudko innocent n @falah5 jaise readers ko wrong prove krti ho..

waise main @falah5 ke comment se full agree krti hu..

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lovePANI

@lovePANI

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#946

Hey..nina here..

Am a silent reader of this forum...i liked ur every post but never passed a comment...So, u can say.. it is my first comment...m a very big fan of u...how u write...its just awesome...i don't know how u manage to write 3 ss...hats off to u...👏👍🏼 Jab tak mai aapki story na par loon.. i cannot concentrate on any thing... wat magic u hve created on me u hve no idea...

OK... about your story now... i loved each character... how u expresses them... i really wish to have a friend like nandu... she is so cute...both are so adorable.. How fab4 try to make nandu smile it's cute.. Sorry i am very bad at expressing.. So can't write more..😭 Sorry for my bad hindi and english n thanx for bearing...

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Sutapa Sarbabhom

@sutapasarbabhom

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#947

Seriosly yaar i dispointed with this readdr comnt

I most lovly part of ur stories r nandini character

I love her innocense n childness

Pl dont change it

Loving ur story n very much enjying

Pl keep it up

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Zoya Muhammad Asif

@ZoyaMAsif

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#948

Mawara U don't worry about ppl u're goin good in ur way... No objections & haan kiskinae parhna hai story na parhe... Bas!
Tum logon ki tension na lo... U're best

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Mawara_Ejaz

@Mawara_Ejaz

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Posted: 9 years ago

#949

Originally posted by: BriNi

isiliye tumhare story pr commnt krne se darr lagta hai.. tumhe criticise ya suggest kiya toh tum "kindly check" notice krke sbko invite krke khudko innocent n @falah5 jaise readers ko wrong prove krti ho..
waise main @falah5 ke comment se full agree krti hu..

aray tou myny kab bola dear k ap comment karo? Oh God..! iam done..agr pasand ni tou mat prho...mj say ziada achy writers hain is forum pay un ki stories prho myny kise ko bhi force nahi kiya k meri story read karo yaar agr you agree with her its your choice..me sachi kuch nahi kar skti such a humiliation it is..too much disappointed i am...main apny ap ko innocent prove nahi kar rahi mjy koi zarorat bhi ni hai apny app ko innocent prove krny ki smj i? mera dimag nahi khrb k pagloon ki trha sara sara din type karoon aur baad main khud ko "innocent" prove karoon got it? now stay away from my stories i will write the way I WANT..! I DON'T Want readers like you ziada social worker ban'nay ki zarorat nahi hai..!

Meri female lead say problem hai na? let me explain..!

In Tum Mile: Losing parents in such a young age u think it's easy? haan? even my father died 8 months ago only I know how I am living without him...tou naturally banda weak ho jata hai..!

In It's Love:Nandini was RAPED..! She lived her life for 1 long year without family..! You think it's also very easy? haan? and jab usy koi mila jo us ka khyl rakhta hai tou ab wo usy bhi tantrums na dikhye? that's what u want?

And yeah Dheere Dheere:Nandini is just 20 years old yaar come on ab usy dadi ama bana doon?

aur tum acha comment ni kr skti na meri jaan aur tmy dar lagta hai k me "kindly check" ka sign board laga kay khud ko "innocent" prove karoon ki tou STAY AWAY FROM MY STORIES..!

GET THAT YA AUR BHI KUCH SAMJHOAN?