Manan Horror ss : Khwaishein (to be continue on wattpad) - Page 4

Originally posted by: bluelake99

<font color="#FF0000">yaar !!! u r 2oo 4ast ...

u said sumdays b4r ,, u r thnkng 2 write a horror saga ... nd u already posted it ...

nice title ... bt cant find d cnnctn btwn title nd d prologue/story ...

hope u will mention it n first few chapters ...
bczz all of ur storys resolves around d title ...

good beginning ... paheli hi bhoot ne entry marli ... ab toh vagbaan ko ana parega ...

picture ws suitable nd prfct 1 ... 1920 ka gahera asar hai tumpar ... lol !!!!!!!!!

nd add more pictures whn evil scenes come ...

RAAJ nd all haan !!!!!!!!!! kahi yeh aatma mare hue NYONIKA yaa phir SOHA ki toh nahi hai ... it mi8 be "SOHA'S PSYCHOTIC AATMA" !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOL !!!!!!!!!!! 😃😉😆

bichaari nandu ... nd manik's word nd feelings express his pain ... its sooo painful ...

enjoyd it 2oo much ... plzz regularly update it wd ur odr storys ...</font>

BINGO! You hit the right string dear..as my every story's title has a deep connection with the story line..then how can this will be different..KHWAISHEN.. has a big role in this story..you will find it soon..

omg mummmaaa

Omg 1920 ka sequel banane ka koi plan hain kya tujhe ???? Kya tha woh ??? Am just tryinG to imagine our sweet sa bholi bhali nandu in this devil avtar... I love horror movies like crazy fan ... Very very nice concept meri jaan ... Mujhe toh lagta haIn wo spirit jaroor churail soha ka or nyonika ka hoga bilkul perfect combination hain bhatak tu huyi aatma aur soha/nyonika they go perfectly with each other...omg humari nandu ko kya avatar dia hain yaar ???? Superb story line ... Waiting for the update meri jaan ...mujhe laga tha tu vampire diaries ki Hindi version likhne wali hain as hoeror muvi ...pictures were awesome...love u iTnaaa saraaa..:::kya teaser tha ...::waiting but u first get well soon ..: with lots of love and hugs

Ohh my god...that was really a horror...shit It scared me to the core...

This is really freaky, especially the pix... but I am still interested, great job on thinking of such a different FF, looking forward to it..

OMG buhat khatarnak hai specially pics but interesting bhi hai.
Continue soon dear

Omg!!... Omg!!!!... Mummaaa... Kajuuu... Bhooottt..,

Originally posted by: angel2015

Am not saying to believe in ghost..its just a story..take it like that only..If you don't wanna read..then don't read it..and am also not saying not to believe in god..just a story dear..

sry to comment here bt I can't stop myself commenting here reading ur comment... I also believe in God yes I do . and there is nothing like ghost .. Bt u must have heard evil nd pure... Yes in each nd every thing of this universe there are some good nd bad which go hands in hands... If there r pure soul ... There r evils too... Bt its universal truth .. Good always win over bad. Nd this ff is just a stories like others. .. Stay blessed.. Keep smiling

Holy cow ... That was scary gal
Nd those pics ... I just scrolled down quickly avoiding them hahaga
U knw I'm typical one of those who watch horror movies keeping her hands her face lol but I just love them ...
Wishing you all the best for new ff... Let me know when u update next
Cheers