MANAN TS::YOU AND ME FOREVER

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Posted: 9 years ago
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YOU AND ME FOREVER

Time is unstoppable..it s d mightiest of d mightiest...no one till nw evr hs dared to rule the time...we all are d slaves of the time..it is the time which keeps on rotating throwing sometimes happiness n sometimes sadness in our laps..some complain even in thier happy period n some even try to find happiness in thier hardships...such a girl ws our NANDINI MURTHY...

With an optimistic character she searched happiness n positivity in even the saddest of time..her millon dollar smile😃😃 is enough to convince anyone and her voice what to say about that???Shakespeare said that music is the best invention of God bcuz it has the power to calm even d wildest of horses n turn der gaze into modest one and nandini she completely justified it..

who expected that she would love someone completely opposite to her...I analysed this topic wid many...some say opposite attracts but I would say its nothin but destiny..oderwise Nandini Murthy and Manik Malhotra..impossible...lyk me who saw dem in the 1st day who can say that they would someday write thier name in the history of lovers??the relation which started with throwing of an egg who expected that they will be found doing ANDE WALA ROMANCE????😉😉😉

Who thought that Manik will use thhe same object to propose her???i think you should agree with me that its destiny oderwise the girl whom Manik made his spot instructing her to follow him everywere now that Manik Malhotra is following Nandini like a shadow..everywere..everytime..protecting her..loving her..but they are just too different from each other..if we put a line in the middle keeping Manik on the right and Nandini on the left I don't know how many pages I would be drawing the line in middle because their differences would never end..were Manik ws arrogant,rude,impulsive our Nandu was sweet,bubbly,loving,caring and what not..she embedded every of good quality in her..but if I would jot down the similarities the point in highlight would be that both had a very good heart..Nandini flaunted it whle Manik kept it till himslf only...

Any way the both souls gifted each other their hearts..their were immencely in love with each oder..they could do any thing for each other..they were imperfect but wen dey wer togthr dey wer perfct!!!oviusly evry couple commits follies n so did our MaNan..i thnk in luv d small small mistakes can b avoided..cuz if we hold on d silly follies committed by lovrs den cupid wld hmslf blush...

Manik being impulsive wld sumtym turn angry bt hw cld he resist d swtnes of hs star..hr smile ws enough 2 calm hm...Nandini lovd hr monster lyk hell...c alwys used 2 say"manik tum na jab gussa ho jate ho tum bahot cute lagte ho kyunki tumhara nak laal ho jaata he"listenin dis Manik's hrt strts jumpin bt he wld nt shw it in hs fce cuz he lovd wen Nandini calmed hm down..bt Nandini Murthy she nvr bcks off...1 mre attempt n manik wld be huggin hr...n dat attempt ws Manik's favorite..wld u al lyk 2 knw dat???

Nandini wld go clse 2 manik n slwly whisper in hs ear"aji sunte ho??"manik slwly luks 2wrds hr n nandini continues"tum mujhe bahut ache lag ho"bas done!!!mission manao Manik accomplished...n in seconds Manik wld b hugginNandu's petite body in hs arms..Manik lovd dis accnt of Nandini..sumtyms he wld evn knowingly gt angry so dat Nandini cld strt her mission manao Manik...whoevr wld c dis couple cld utter only 1 wrd n dats "wow!!!"bt jus as d lyrics say"milte rahe jo aase hi dono lag na jaye ishq ki n ajar"ys dat only hppnd..sum1 spiked der relation..hindi mein bole to "kisiki najr lag gayi"nw Manik n Nandini r no mre togthr

3 yrs hs already passd..mny thngs chngd..Manik n Nandini hd prtd der ways 3yrs bck..dey ve no information bout each oder...dey say dat dey ve movd on..bt really ve dey movd on????cme ltz fnd it...

Manik Malhotra hs been a popular nme since he ws in colz..n nw dat nme hs bcum mre popular..d famous playback singer..d owner of Malhotra industries..success had kissed hs feet since colz dys n its stil contninuein..hs profession ensures dat gals alwys surround hm..bt he s nt intrstd in n e..prsently he s in London to deal with d NM music company..d largest music company of london

In London

Karan(secretary)-mam 2dy u r havin a meetin wid a company comin 4m india n mam aftr dat u r free 4 d whle day..no appointments..bt mam as u r nt wel if u wnt I l cancel d meeting

Voice-no need..i l attend it n aftr dat I m free so I dnt thnk dis meetin l bother me so mch..i l attend it..u say a ys 2 dem

Karan-ok mam..u gt ready d driver is waitin 4 u

In office

Manik(over phone)-Cabir u dnt wrry..aaj tak malhotra music industries ko kisne mana kiya he...I m sure dey wld b glad 2 deal wid us..hmm bye...

Karan-sir u r Manik Malhotra ri8???4m Malhotra industries???

Manik-yaa..

Karan-sir u plz wait in d conference room mam l b arriving in sum tym..sir I mst say u r vry lucky dat mam didn't cancel d meeting..2dy c did nt feel well bt wen c hrd c s havin a meetin wid a company 4m india she quietly agreed..

-----------Manik POV------------

I wryly smiled listenin 2 dis...I headed 2wrds d conference room..on d way I hrd mny employees talkin bout der new CEO wid whum I ws goin 2 ve a meetin...I hrd d employees praisin hr..dey said dat c ws sum beauty wid brain types..c ws just 22..i ws shockd listenin dis..she ws jus 22 dat 2oo a year youngr dan me n achieved so mch..i ws gettin xited 2 meet hr listenin 2 dis..i waited in d conference room 4 a whle..den sum1 cme 4m behnd n said 2 gt redy as der mam ws comin..d door half opened..sum1 opened it 4 hr..i tried 2 see hr bt sum employees wer surroundin hr..i tilted my head 4m lft 2 ri8 2 ve a luk of hr bt I cld nt...hr secretary pulld d chair 4 hr n askd hr 2 sit...

I dnt kno y bt my hrt strtd beatin fast..oviusly I ws nt nervous 4 d meeting..den y dis feeling..she tuk d papers in hr hand n turned 2 face 2wrds me..i ws shocked..my eyes widened..i stud up..it flt as if d wrld stppd 4 me..my hrt whch ws beatin fst few seconds ago stppd beatin..i ws shiverin..it flt as if sum1 ws stratchin my hrt badly..it ws achin badly...it flt as if I ws a patient of myocardial infarction...I cld nt believe my eyes..s dis really hapennin or m I imagining???a thousand questions erupted in my mnd..bt c c stil ws holdin d papers in hr hnd wid d d ray ban glases stil on hr eyes..c den kept d paper down n lowered hr new branded ray ban shades n lukd on2 me..our eyes met..i ws stil in shock..



i just gave a try...lemme kno if you liked it..as mentioned it is a TS..if i get 4 5 pages coomments lamba walaa i wld continue..or it s d end..hit lyk n plss commnt..n yya mithaiyan banto yaar my jaan is back..but padhna jaroor..

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ruchi116 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Pls continue I loved ur story it was damn amazing everything was perfect I hope unki misunderstanding due ho Jaye n nandu manao session was awesome the dialogue aji sunte ho was a treat. Pata nhi kya hua Jo wo alag ho Gaye manik is shocked, shock to hona hi tha usne kabhi expect nhi kia hoga nandu is a successful name in London
Pls update the second part I'm dying to read aide cliffhanger pe chod diya waiting to know nandus reaction n unka patch up kaise hoga pls update soon jaldi pls
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Posted: 9 years ago
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do continu really wanna knw why thy got sprate... n i think nandu didnt care if manik was thier... is this true... really wanna knwww
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow
Superb...
Loved how u introduced manik n Nandu's story..,..
Their beginning and then their togetherness
Bt y are they seperated??
3 yrs...long tym
Manik's rxn on seeing her ... Very well written
Thnkz 4 the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing update...
That was mind blowing story...
Cont soon..
Waiting for nxt part..

LOVE,
AAROHI...
Sanskruti164 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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OMG!!!
Awsm
cont soon
tysm 4 pm
luved it so much
sharon.babu thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update...
loved it so much...
manan meeting after 3 yrs...cant wait for them to talk to each other...
keep up the good work and continue soon...
vani86 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome
nice story line
continue soon
loved the way u penned manan
thanks a lot for the pm
stay blessed
parthadmirer thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#9
Wow yaar i have become ur fan of your stories...
amazing start...👏
beautifully penned down...
charactersketch awesomely explained...
nandini a sweet bubbly always smiling...
manik rude impulsive...
but both had a golden heart but nandini showing it and manik hiding it...
nd manaofying i loved it...
nandini saying aji sunte ho.. bade ache lag rahe ho...
and manik going aww and llalallal on th8is and hugging her..\
but they are seperated..😭
but they meet again after 3 years...
wow waiting to read what will happen...😊

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