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Claire_D

@Claire_D

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Posted: 9 years ago

#221

After so long, almost a week, finally finally you updated! And the update was long enough & totally worth the wait.
Maa guesses the reason for Nandini's happiness & that is Manik! She wants to go to his house to have breakfast with him. Nandini for the first time must have seen Manik bare-chested! Nandini wanting to know what hurts him & also wanting to take away his pain! Manik was awake & must have enjoyed these small gestures of Nandini. How he tries to make her sleep, but humari Nandu bahut smart hai! Her blackmail did work & Manik was off for a Bath! Manik wants to fulfill all her wishes & so without her asking took her to a Garden similar to the one in the Movie! Their fights are so cute, it shows their care & concern for each other! I totally loved the Superman ke costume dialogue! It was damn funny 😛 Manik feeding her the Healthy Breakfast & then the walk in the Garden. Nandini & Manik on the Bench & Manik asking whether he can sleep in her lap! He is so concerned about her, can't think of hurting her. Manik wanting to hear his name & when he did hear it, he couldn't hold himself & kisses her with all his Love! He asking to marry him! Can't wait for the next part!
Soon Update & I'm glad your finally back with these updates.

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CutiePie_Me

@CutiePie_Me

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Posted: 9 years ago

#222

Obviously we missed u yr..

Update ws very sweet

Pictures were awesome

Song ws really very beautiful

I liked the song very much

Keep smiling

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aysha_rah

@aysha_rah

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Posted: 9 years ago

#223

I Missed u bht saaaraaa...itnaaa saraaa... m sooo happy dat finally nw u r freee..nd dis stry is going so perfectly dat i cnt express hw mch m loving ittt... amazinggg... loved d update to d coreee... i ws missing it vry badly... m glad nw u r bck n dat too a,b,c,d??? Sooo lambbbaaa...thnk u thnk u sooo mch ...love u fr dis...
Nandu n her maa bond is vry adorable...she knws nandu so well...she has her maa..so supportive n undrstng... loved dat money thing...
Nd here nandu cums to her khadus place..
Nd he was sleepinggg...awww so cuteee.. nandu strtd loving n caring fr himsooo mch... she wntd to share his pain n heal dem too... sch a pure soul.. nd manik he ws nt sleeping n so naughty... nd nandu tricked him by emotionl blackmailing...hahahaaa... so cuteee manik cares a lot fr her..
Nd dt choclates box ws so yummmyyy..evn i luv chocltes...she is so lyk meee..nd d way manik called her his tantarum queen...so shweett... n wen he came she ws wtchng cartoonn..hehee.. n hlf of d box ws finishd n he snatchd it frm her n scolded her...he is so mch concrnd fr her health... bt also treats as a princess...fabulous prt...
Nd d garden thing ws amazing n nandu calling him khadus is so cuteee heheee
Brkfst setup was amazing vry beatiful...nd d breakfst ws tooo yummm... bt nandu wants choley puri n chickn masala... bt monstr manik won't allow her to spoil her health na... aftrapl she is one...n going to b his frst priority nwww...so cutely he ws feeding her n she ws hving it fr him... love..
Nd i ws thinking nly wen will she tke his name n here u r...dt ws my fav prt... n d song i hv heard.. suits dm prfctly.. n d roses pic ws vry beautiful...nd manik layed in her chotu lap...so adorable...n der cute momnts.. n she countd gold fish..n ws so happy.. wid him she is so happy n xcited... n he jst keep adoring falling fr her... nd d kisses ws vry cute.. n she said man-manik... n monstr wants celebration... hahahaaa... n dey kissed again... she ws feeling d momnt nd her cums d most awaitd thing... PROPOSAL... 😳 awww... i sooo want thm to see tgthr happily n der lyf... bt not fair yrrr u again lft us on cliff hanger... wat will she say??? Ofcorse yes hi hona chahie cz she wnts him to b wid her frevr..isn't it?

Abto wait hi ni hta...tday u post dis stry nly... heheee...nooo bt baaki do ka kya dey r my favrt too... ohh... dis wait is gonna b vry hard... come up soon wid odr chptr...plzzz plzzz plzzz... eagrly waitinnnggg... n thnx fr d pm... luv yaaa tc... jldi se try krna post krne ki... m so xcitd...

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anum_6

@anum_6

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Posted: 9 years ago

#224

Awesome update
I missed your update so Much n u too
I know Eid all are very busy

Aww pics was awesome loved it
Aww all manan scenes awesome too cute
Woow manik propose her
Ofcourse she say yes
Update soon
Can't wait
Thnx for pm

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nubula

@nubula

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Posted: 9 years ago

#225

finally you updated.you have no idea how much i

missed this story.this story is one of my favorite

story.

about update... it was totally awesome

i loved every bit of it.nandini is soo innocent & so cute

just lyk manik i also like her childish things.manik is madly in love with her.their bonding is so cute.the pictures you added

just beautiful.manik proposed nandu.what will be her answer...plz yes bol dena.

can't wait for next update.plzzz update soon.

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Kavyashree pradhan

@Kavyashree22

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Posted: 9 years ago

#226

AWWW SO CUTE AND ROMANTIC UPDATE THAT WAS... But m not ghussa with you cuz even i hardly get time to read updates.. And wow garden and golden fish all together 15gold fish in that pond hehehe..like seriously NANDINI COUNTED.. And wow..MANIK PROPOSED HER.. What will be nandu's reaction!!! Aaah!excitement is touching clouds now..please don't give promo..but full update... DAR JAYE GI WO..BHAAG JAYEGI.. Aaah! Just remembered FUSION CONCERT..missing MANAN..

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Sutapa Sarbabhom

@sutapasarbabhom

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Posted: 9 years ago

#227

Its really cute love story

Love nandini antics

Who cannot fall for her

Manik also cant resist

Hww he proposed nandini

So sweet

Lovly story

Tanx for pm

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SSimra

@SSimra

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Posted: 9 years ago

#228

thank u sooo much for such a lovely update

hayee maa sab samajhti hain hahahaha

beautiful morning with monster

just loved the way he fulfilled her garden wish and everything was soo beautiful . every scene was decribed beautifully and the puctures were sooo amazing

everything was sooo blissful

just loved it to the core

and the kisss...blissfull

and now the jhatka which u gave at the end of the update

the million dollar question

hayeee manik itni bhi kiya jaldi thi.

chalo koi nhi aaj nahi to kal yes to nandini ko bolna hi hai

so no worries

need updates of ur other stories as welll

especially its love

now come on jaldi jaldi update karo so that we can give long long coments

update soon

will be waiting

---SIMRA

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sameeksha

@mini_manan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#229

<font size="6">MISSED U LIKE HELL...
PAR SAMAJH SAKTE HU KI GUEST KE BEECH TIME NIKALNA IS DIFFICULT..SO NO GUSSA..SACHI MUCHI..PAR HAAN MISS JALOOL BAHUT SALLA KIYA.. 😳

Yeh hui na koi mawara waale baat ek hi update me saara hisab chuka diya..
Complain karne ki kasar hi ni chodi.. 😡

Agar aise nandini mere saamne hoti ma to sachi me to usse kabka kha chuki hoti..
Ye to manvi ki pakki compititor he...

Aww.. 😲 manik ne seedhe marriage ke liya propose kar diya..
Par bina I love U bole..ye to galat baat hena..
Par I m sure tumne kuch acha hi socha hoga..

Hayee...picture to sachi bahut zyada beautiful the..

LOVED IT.
CONTINUE SOON

LOVE,
MINI</font>

Edited by mini_manan - 9 years ago