Manan OS: Set Me Free... full updated + Note pg 3

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sourabhi

@katrina_petrova

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: jai18
Lol the endibt just cracked me up!
Awesome job, by the way

Though the rest of the story is not really a comedy i hope you enjoy it. and thank you

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sourabhi

@katrina_petrova

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: deekshagarg
Interesting.. very very fascinating story it is.. Thank You
Thinking out all the possibilities that what this story is actually about... Read out the story and share if you have any other interesting possibility
Please update next too.. Done!

Can't wait to read more of it.. Read it 😆

All the very best wishes for this os.. Thank You

Please if u could pm me.. Done!
Thnks Welcome

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sourabhi

@katrina_petrova

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: diyamanan
nice start
waiting for more
pm me nxt part

Thank u updated and pm'd please share your thoughts.

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RUBI

@bluelake99

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

u knw aftr rdng d os i jst thought wht 2 cmnt .. i mean hw 2 complimnt ur writing ..

i jst luv d way u end it openly .. though i believe it end prfctly ..

luvd their soul searing conversation ..

whn dy tried 2 realizing each odr i found wht r those picture means n ds os ..

luv d fact dat u don't utter any name .. instead use only him nd her ..

nd trust me in d whole story (yah it s indeed a story more dan os n ds forum) i nvr fnd manan n dm .. i fnd a normal guy nd girl ,, struggling wd their difficulties n lyf ,, fnd solace n each odr .. nd i think all ds credit goes 2 u .. u r a finest writer ..

nd n ds forum ds s totally a new thought ..

though i m phobic f drowning nd swimming .. bt i stick 2 ur story 2 d end .. nd i now i felt proud at my decision ..

unique d way hw "she nd her sister" hide dmslves 4rm d world ..

d secret game s sch heart touchng on ..

enjoy "his" fantasy nd "her" 4rndshp's abt each odr ..

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plzz cntinue wd ur writng ..

hope 2 get more new storys 4rm u ..

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suraiya77

@suraiya77

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Mindblowin'
awesome
amazin'
the way u portrayed the os is just spellbound
u are an excellent writer
loved this os to the core
hope u will be back with ur another masterpiece

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FairyGamer

@FairyGamer

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

did the os end??

plzz don't end it it sooo beautiful

if poss

plzz continue

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sourabhi

@katrina_petrova

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

NOTE:

To all those people who read and appreciated my story thank you but it is an OS, so no I wouldn't write anymore updates of this, the OS is anyways 4000+ words, so please don't ask me to continue this OS. It is an emotionally taxing one anyways and I have a love of open ending where your own mind can make out the rest to your liking. 😊

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sourabhi

@katrina_petrova

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: bluelake99
u knw aftr rdng d os i jst thought wht 2 cmnt .. i mean hw 2 complimnt ur writing .. OMG!! THank you so much

i jst luv d way u end it openly .. though i believe it end prfctly .. I don't believe that life is set in stone so sometimes an open ending seems like the perfect way to end a story

luvd their soul searing conversation .. Me too, those conversations are something so rare in real life we don't always meet people with whom we can converse like that

whn dy tried 2 realizing each odr i found wht r those picture means n ds os .. Glad you did 😳

luv d fact dat u don't utter any name .. instead use only him nd her .. Actually this piece was written for a competition, it was not actually a Manan story, but somehow i ended up imagining them in this story when I was writing 10 years Later.

nd trust me in d whole story (yah it s indeed a story more dan os n ds forum) i nvr fnd manan n dm .. i fnd a normal guy nd girl ,, struggling wd their difficulties n lyf ,, fnd solace n each odr .. nd i think all ds credit goes 2 u .. u r a finest writer .. Thank you so much for this comment! But I think my reason for writing it like that was to make it relatable to everybody.

nd n ds forum ds s totally a new thought .. ThanK you again

though i m phobic f drowning nd swimming .. bt i stick 2 ur story 2 d end .. nd i now i felt proud at my decision .. AWW I hope you someday come out of your trauma

unique d way hw "she nd her sister" hide dmslves 4rm d world .. Don't we all

d secret game s sch heart touchng on .. I love that game

enjoy "his" fantasy nd "her" 4rndshp's abt each odr .. More than love its about finding solace in company

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plzz cntinue wd ur writng .. I used to write here long ago, if you want to read more here is an OS from me back from 2011 😆 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kitani-mohabbat-hai-2/1731343/os-once-upon-a-time

hope 2 get more new storys 4rm u .. Would surely write more

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sourabhi

@katrina_petrova

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: suraiya77
Mindblowin'
awesome
amazin'
the way u portrayed the os is just spellbound
u are an excellent writer
loved this os to the core
hope u will be back with ur another masterpiece

Thank you, so many superlatives 😆

I also hope to come back with another story soon.

Just in case I have been writing a Manan FF, here is the link

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kaisi-yeh-yaariaan/4476025/new-manan-ff-10-years-later-note-updt-pg-7