Manan FF Tumhe wapas paakar rahonga...

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Tumhe wapas paakar rahoonga...

Hello lovelies, I know.. I know you all must be thinking yeh apna current ff's toh update karti nai par aagayi ek aur leke. Lekin kya kare jab manan ki baat aati hai toh dil aur dimakh apni kaaboo mein nahi hote. Bas bas ha hogaya bohot cheesy hogaya I know...

Old episodes dekhrahi thi toh yeh idea dimakh mein aaya...

Okay now coming to the story...

Enjoy reading...

This story also starts after the talent hunt but there is no bomb blast.

After the talent hunt aryamann arranges for a party rejoicing there success and new bonding. They enjoy a lot and make some new memories but Fab5 was not the same anymore. They used to jam together, spend time together, but there was no spark at all. There was no strong bonding anymore. The five friends who used to know the other one more than themselves started behaving like strangers. Aliya and dhruv were still not in talking terms. Aliya's health was getting better day by day. They both still blamed Manik for every thing that's happening. Though not verbally but through their behaviour towards him. Cabir and mukti tried their best to convince them but was of no use.

Manik tried finding solace in his star but that was also not helping him. Nandini also tried her best to comfort him by telling him that every thing will fall in place, that it's just a matter of time. He started feeling suffocated around his loved ones only. He took a drastic step which changed every one's life. He left Fab5 , he left his star, he just left by giving a piece a paper in which it was written why and where...

Nandini,

Jab tum yeh letter padhogi tab taq mein jaa chukka hoga. Kabhi nahi socha ki life mein yeh phase bhi dekhni padegi. Tum ne mujhe har waqt har situation mein support kiya, par kya karoon ab aur ladne ki himmat nahi hai. Kal dad ka phone aaya tha , he wants me come and stay with him. Pehle I always used to say no, kyunki I had Fab5 with me par ab woh wajah bhi nahi rahi. Tum meri lifeline ho nandu, my shining star. Par ab mujhe dar lag raha hai nandu ki kayi tum mujhe andhere se nikalte nikalte khud is mein na gir jaao. I want to go far away from this. I want to start afresh par ha tab bhi tum mere zindagi ki sabse zarrori aur kimti hissa rahogi. In the mean while I also want you to find yourself and make an identity. Rona bikul bhi mat , tum jaanti ho na mujhe tumhar aason bilkul pasand nahi. Mein jaa raha hoon , mujhe maaf karna Par laut ke zaroor aunga , kab yeh mein nahi jaanta , par zaroor aunga. Hosake toh mere liye intezaar karna, Karogi na...???

Tumhara aur sirf tumhara,

Monster Manik.

Iss letter ko padne ke baad kya hogi nandini ki reaction?? Inki lives kitna change hojayenge?? Nandu aage bad payengi uski intezaar karte karte, ya wahi uski zindagi ruk jaayengi?? Manik ki jaane ke baad Fab5 ka kya hoga?? Who Fab4 banke continue karenge ya time has stored something else for them..?? And the most important question... Manik ka kya hua aur wok ah ahi...???

You will get the first chapter of this story till morning. And regarding my other stories I will give u guys a lamba ubdate of Will we ever meet again..?? And manik's pov of Love is never planned... It just happens...

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Sanskruti164 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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SEEMS VERY INTERESTING
UPDATE SOON
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Interesting
How can Manik be selfish once again?
Waiting for the update
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Interesting>
Continue soon.

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Nice prologue
pls pm me when you update
cont soon
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Thank you for the appreciation guys...!!
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Chapter 1

After 5 years

A young boy was sleeping on his king sized bed. His not so peaceful sleep was disturbed by a phone call...

Hello...!!

Karan : Manik neeche aao hame nikalna hai..!!

Manik : yeah..!! will be there in 10 min..!!

Manik got ready and went down to join karan and Mr.Malhotra on the breakfast table.

Karan Malhotra : Manik's cousin . Close to manik after Fab5 and nandini. You will come to know about his role in the upcoming chapters.

They did their breakfast quietly. Manik and karan started their journey to the office. In the car as well Manik was quite and his face was expressionless. As usual when they stepped into the car, the driver switched on the radio. The sound pissed off karan who was seriously engrossed in the the file and was preparing for the meeting. Manik was also engrossed in his laptop but there was an unusual calmness on his face after listening to the voice...

Voice : Good morning listeners... here is ur favourite rj bira to wish u a very good morning and play some romantic songs to lighten up the atmosphere... Oh no, mera boss mujhe bularaha hai , mai abhi aya... tab taq sunte rahiye yeh suhana sa gaana only on Radio O2...

Mute...

Karan : Urrrgh... yaar manik teri problem kya hai..?? Car mein baite hi tu radio on karwata hai par jab gaana aata hai mute kardeta hai... Teri dimag mein wiring ki problem hai kya...?? Uski aawaj itni bhi kya sundar hai ki subha subha sunne keliye taras jaata hai...manik kuch toh bol... Agar aisa raha na toh pagal ho jayenga...mein bhi kisse baat karraha hoon... jab mujhe pata hai ki tu kuch bolega hi nahi toh mein chilla chillake apna gala kyun kharab karu...

They reached the office and Manik silently stepped out of the car and went inside. As soon as the people inside saw there boss in front of them, every one started wishing him good morning but manik just replied with a nod and his face as usual was expressionless. Though Malhotra industries was a huge empire, in the last three years it showed a tremendous growth.

All thanks to our very own Manik Malhotra. Manik reached near his cabin and pushed open the door on which was engraved MM.

Yes Manik Malhotra was known as MM. He never came infront of the media. World recognize him as MM. All the meetings regarding the project were handled by Karan. Though he was the mastermind behind every thing, he used to never come infront. Not even his employees know his real name. No one know why he is such an introvert and no one even dares to question him because he is no less than a don. If our Manik has become like this then what about our sweet little Nandini Murty..?? Let's see...

There was hustle bustle all around in the Altizon (company). A cute girl dressed in the black formal skirt and white shirt was seriously engrossed in the work. She gets disturbed by the knock on the door.

Come in..!!

Mam..!! every thing is ready. Mr. verma will reach here in 10 min...

Every one is waiting for you in the conference room...!!

Nandini Murthy , marketing head in Altizon. A very talented and hard working employee. Bubbly , cheerful and full of life. She stays in pune with her collegue cum friend Shreya in a three bedroom flat.

Nandini and Manik both stay in the same city but still unaware of each others whereabouts. Will destiny bring them together..??

So here is the first chapter guys..!! I know it was not up to the mark but will try to give you a wonderful update. Haaa..nandini and marketing head ..?? yeh kaise ho gaya.?? aur wo pune me kya karrahi hai..?? aur hamare manik baba ko kya hogaya..?? phirse monster bangaya , par kyun..???and one more thing here karan will be a positive character and loves manik so much..!!!

Guys who want pm please buddy me...!!

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nyc start
Manik firse monster
Lovd it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice start.
It's interesting!!! Make manan meet soon !! Can't bear distance yk!!
Loved it!
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Will be waiting for d update:)

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