Mananff -*Impossible says itslf i 'm possible*ch12(pg12)updt 1/11/15 - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome update , I love manik character in ur story ...waiting for next update dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome bt plz dont break maniks hrt
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PROMO OF NEXT CHAPTER...
Manik-akele akele choclate khaogi mujhe nh khilaogi..
Nandini breaks the choclate into two halves nd give it manik...
Manik-aise nh khani h mujhe choclate..
Nandini-to kaise..
Manik-wo aise ki..
Nd nest what nandini do make manik shocked as well as...
Guess kro kya hua hoga ek taraf sweet manik dusri taraf angry nandini because of her bed past..


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: karryd

PROMO OF NEXT CHAPTER...

Manik-akele akele choclate khaogi mujhe nh khilaogi..
Nandini breaks the choclate into two halves nd give it manik...
Manik-aise nh khani h mujhe choclate..
Nandini-to kaise..
Manik-wo aise ki..
Nd nest what nandini do make manik shocked as well as...
Guess kro kya hua hoga ek taraf sweet manik dusri taraf angry nandini because of her bed past..


Those who want pm buddy me..



I think she'll slap him or else her ever so famous nandu's punch to him
Poor majnu jii 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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CHAPTER-8
LOVE-SURPRISE AS WELL AS SHOCK

After finishing the snacks nd tasting each dishes,me nd manik were seeing each other...nd den he said here comes the desert nd i looked at the plate nd found cake above it browinee nd it is surrounded by choclate cream nd vanilla cream with choco chips nd cherry on top,
only in look it is looking so nice that i m very sure that it will be delicious too..nd i m fond of cherry nd choclate cream so instantly grab the plate starting eating without seeing manik's reaction but i can feel that manik is gazing me nd for once i look to him nd give him a spoon fool of choclate ctream to eat nd he took that frm my hands..nd i finished it...nd den turning towards table i said-
Nandini-manik dekhiye aapki wajh se kitna food ka barbadi ho rha h hmne to har dish se thoda hi khaya..kya jarurat thi itni saari dishes ki nd
Manik-sorryyy..par muje tmhari pasand nh pata thi to isliye maine...but ab mujhe pta h tumhe kis tarah ka food pasand h..
Nandini-acha to btao kis tarah ka food pasand h mujhe?
Manik-spicy,soury,masaaledhar...am i right babu or i m right..
Nandini-tm itne gor se mera khana dekh rhe the
Manik-nahi jb tum kisi chij ko taste kr rhi thi to tmhara facial expression dekh rha tha..jb tmhare pasand ka hota h to khatae khate tm smile krti ho aur agr thoda sa kam masaaledar ho to your eyes says the dissatisfaction..
Nandini-ok..
Manik-acha chlo
Nandini-kaha..?
Manik-are chlo v ab bahut kuch baki h nd manik take her to pool side..
Nandini-yaha..


Manik-ha tmhe pasand nh aya.
Nandini-nh nh i like it .
Manik-chlo baithate h..
Nandini-ha muje tmse bat v krni h kuch..agr tmhe yaad ho to..
Manik-ha ha yad h..
Nandini-aaa i want to say dat..
Manik-ssshhh..he kept his finger on her lips..
Nandini-ab kya..
Manik-pls close ur eyes for once..
Nandini-ek aur surprise h kya..?(nandini said in excitement)
Manik-ha now close...
Nandini-kholu ab..?
Manik-wait on count of three u can open ur eyes..
Nandini-ok..
Manik-one two three..
Nandini was shocked by the surprise...
Nandini-manik yeh?
Manik-ye tmhare liye choclates...i know u like choclate cream is liye maine ye choclates mangayi waise to maine ek special choclate mangayi thi phr v...
Nandini-bt iski jarurat nh thi..man
Manik-sshh..manik stopped nandini to complete his name nd said..
Manik-babu u deserve dis..u r the first girl for whom i m attracted so much..doing dat much ...i don't know its true love or not byt i will make it true love..i knw m smjhati hogi tm mera attraction ya inflactutiom but aisa nh h..i feel smthng else for u..nd i knw dis is love..bt..i know u kind of fear frm love i can say that by seeng u bt i don't knw the reason aur muje tmhare past se koi fark nh padta h agr tmhe btane ka mann ho to mujhe jarur btana..par me tmhe ek chij btana chahta hu ki ha muje jb me class 9 me tha to ek ladki pr crush ho gya tha maine use prpose kiya usne na kiya nd tbse i didn't hv any type of crush or love fr any1 else..but aftr seeing u pta nh muje kya hua but khud hi tmhari taraf khichta chala gya..thats all..or me itna keh sakta hu ya vishwas dila skta hu ki i will never ditch u..really..
Nandini-thanks manik..
Manik-for wht?
Nandini-for telling me truth...what u feel nd all
Manik-its ok its ur right..
Nandini started eating a choclated after unwrapping it..
Manik-akele akele choclate khaogi mujhe nh khilaogi
Nandini-sorry
Manik-pls don't say sorry babu..
Nandini breaks the chiclate into two halves nd give one half to manik-..
Manik-aise nh khani h mujhe choclate...
Nandini-to fir kaise...
Manik- first i hv some special choclate jo me tmhare sath khana chahta hu..
Aftr dat manik take a plate which was covered by a cloth nd opened it nd give it to nandini..
Manik-mujhe ye wali choclates khani h..
Nandini was astonished to see it .it was square shape choclate written i love u in each pieces like i in one square l in other,o in other...

Manik-ab khilao..
Nandini takes a piece in his finger nd stretch it towrads manik lips nd after taking it in its lips manik said
Manik- u don't want to have it..
Bd came close to nandini slowly nd places his hands on her shoulders nd started moving towrads her lips nd
When choclate touches nandini's lips he started to chewing it slowly slowly coming more closer to nandini nd after some seconds touches her lips with his hips slowly and started kissing it..it was a slow kiss..nandini didn't reaspond for a second or didn't stop which surprised him but nandini was so much in love with his gestures dat she was spell bounded..nd after some seconds she also started to kiss manik slowly nd her hands were went on manik's chest apruptly..nd this made manik shocked becoz he was nt expecting dat nandini will respond..but he was happy too..dat becoz he knws noemw dat nandini also loves him nd gently he started chewing her upper lip nd she started to chew his lower lip nd bith r fighting for dominance but gently suddenly manik chews her lips so quickly dat a miab escape frm her mouth...
Nandini-maa...aa ..nik..
Nd dis turned him more on nd he started kissing him passionately but a sound of crackers make them come to their senses..nd nandini realized what she was doing...nd she stand up nd turn...to leave..but manik stop him
Manik-tm kuch bhul rhi ho..
Nandini-nh manik
Manik-tm jiss chij k liye mujhse milna chahti thi yaad aya...
Nandini-nh manik mujhe kuch nh kahna mujhe jaana h..
Manik-nandini ab to kah do..babu pls say it na..
Nandini was thinking dat how can she break his heart he is so honest,caring etc..aur agr maine iska dil tod dia to dhayad wo kv pyar na kare...nd our first kiss..i feel only love in it nt lust..nd aftr our kiss maine use na bola to wo kya sochega...nd me use apna past..bhagwan ji i m so confused but i m sure me iska dil nh tod skti...o can't ya me nh chahti iska dil todna jo v ho...kya mujhe ek br love ko,manik ko ek chance dena chahiya..shayad ha..dena chahiye me ek br aur azmana chahti hu..apni pasand ko...but mujhe usse apna past btana hoga ...but aaj nh btaugi..
Manik-kuch bolo na babu...
Nandini-i love u manik ..but i need time...aur mujhe v tmhe apne past k baare me btana h..
Manik-i love u too babu...thank u for saying this..nd take ur time..jb tmhe lage ki i m worthy then just give me a hint...nd past btao kya btana h..
Nandini-aaj nh manik..aj nh
Manik-parr..
Nandini-sshhh(this time nandini sushed her nd said)
Manik u do so much for me i m glad thnx for making my evening beautiful as well as best evening of my life..
Nd i love u nd she kissed on cheek nd started to move towards door but...manik-i love babu...i love u...said it loudly..
Nandini started to run towrads him jump on him and manik goes back 2 3 steps to control...and avoid falling..nd some tears roll frm nandini eyes nd after wiping it said i love u too..bt manik saw her eyes nd said
Manik-babu bahut jald me in aansu ki jagah nh rhne duga tmhari life...after taking her hand reaches to lift nd pressed basement button nd came to parking lot nd open the passanger seat door nd nandini sit with a serene smile..manik took the driver seat nd started the journey towrads nandini's house..they were quiet...as manik knows nandini want time...nd halted his car near nandini's house nd open the passanger seat seat..she came down..nd started to walking towards the door..but..
Manik-nandini..
Nandini-haa..
Manik- i love u nd gave a forhead kiss..nd she smiles...
Nandini-gud nit manik..nd give him a kiss on his palm...
Manik-gud nit..nd hv swt drms of us..
Nandini-bye..
Nd nandini goes to her room nd saw manik's car going frm there..




So guys aaj k liye itna hi comments nh aa rhe h so me story soch rhi hu na likhu..as shayad logo ko pasand nh aa rhi h...isliye...
Agr is br jyada comments nh aaye to sorry to say but..me aagey nh likhugi kyuki ye story mere liye bahut khaas h..
Who want pm buddy me..
Bye take care love u all..

Edited by karryd - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Snehasn53



I think she'll slap him or else her ever so famous nandu's punch to him
Poor majnu jii 😆



Hey dear... Plss don't stop writing
Atleast for us, who all comment you regularly
But still decision is yours
Now coming to the update
I just loved it
Finally Manan confessed
So sweet... How manik got to know nandu's likes and dislikes in first date only... Such a caring guy any girl could have
Oh... Their first kiss it's really unexpected one
Its nice...
Continue soon I will be waiting
Take care stay blessed
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Posted: 10 years ago
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that was unexpected. ..

awesome. .

I toh loved it. .

keep updating like this

update soon


waiting for next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome update...
loved it so much...
that was a beautiful date...
,ani and his honesty was so commendable...it was heart touching...
all the food and chocolates just look too delicious...
hope nandu tells her past to manik...want to know more about it too...want their true love to succeed...
can't wait to see what happens next...
keep up the good work and continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey dear...read all the parts in one go...
Ur story was awesome n different concpt
Manik was so sweet...thnk god nandu ne manik ka dil nhi toda...
I luvd ur story
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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CHAPTER-9
NIGHT AND DAY,NEAR TO U


NANDINI'S P.O.V :-

I sat on my bed nd after relaxing myself i changed my self into my night suit..nd again sat on my bed taking the support of headboard of bed as There was no sleep in my eyes becoz of mr.khan and to make me feel more worse he sent me a msg written-"i love u more babu..gud nit...ya ya i know u r nt feeling sleepy but sleep for us babu to see sweet dreams of us nd one more thing i will come to pick u up at morning 11am as we r going to watch a movie nd will do the lunch outside nd don't give any excuses..take care love manik.."...
After reading it i was only thinking dat i hv to tell him my past...but how will i face him...so i think of giving him a letter writting everything in it...so i wrote a letter nd fold it nd msged him a small gud nit msg nd soon thinking about today i drifted to sleep..
MANIK'S P.O.V-
In my whole way back to my home,i was only thinking about her,i can see in his eyes that she don't believe in love very much nd then about her past...wht she wanted to talk me...kahi kuch bahut bada na ho...first time maine kisi ko itna pasand kiya h nd she is so cute like a kid..i don't want to lose her...ya allah meri bus ye dua qubool karle mujhe pta nh kyu par uske pas aram mila...nd soon thinking about all this i reached my home...as i live alone here nd my mom nd dad nt live with me so i decided to arrange something for her taki aaj jo baat adhuri rh gayi puri ho jaye...i called my p.a to know my meetings...nd i was happy that i didn't hv any important meetings so i said him to cancel all the meetings nd don't disturb me tomorrow as i will be busy somewhr...nd then msged her... "i love u more babu..gud nit...ya ya i know u r nt feeling sleepy but sleep for us babu to see sweet dreams of us nd one more thing i will come to pick u up at morning 11am as we r going to watch a movie nd will do the lunch outside nd don't give any excuses..take care love manik.."...
Nd soon drifted to sleep thinking about her...

As the sun rises,the birds starts chirping nd nd sunrays falling frm the curtains to two persons bedroom breaking their deep slumber ...first one was manik to wake up as he is very punctual about time nd work...
Soon he takes the shower nd wrapping a towel come to his bed nd started searching his phone nd after sometime he found it fully wrapped in duvet nd realises that he was thinking about her nd he didn't know when he drifted to sleep nd smiles nd calls nandini to wake her...

Nandini was fully in sleep as she loves to sleep..sleepin beauty...to break her beauty sleepoo manik calls her...first time she didn't pick up the cal but second time when her phone rings she started searching her phone without opening her eyes nd after some seconds she found her phone nd without seeing the caller id..she picked the call nd started to yell nonstop...

Nandini-saali kamini,sone to de aram se..tu maar dal mujhe,nandu shopping jaana tha tuje.. tu av tk so rh h me 11 bje aa jaugi taiyar ho ja hmesa leti hoti...wagerah wagerah but i don't want to listen navya aaj baksh de kal ki din bahut dramatic tha mere liye tu aa mujse tb me btati hu sb...


Ab bol v kuch v muh me dahi jam gaya h...ya tera kanha ji ko bulau upar se teri taraf se bolne k liye..
After some seconds..

Manik-ho gya..
After hearing the voice nandini opens her eyes almost jumping in bed nd den sees the caller id said-oh freak ye maine kya kya bak diya...
Nandini whispered it to herself but phone was near her mouth so manik heard it nd thought this girl r real crazy...muje yakin nh ho rha h muj jaisa punctual insan ek ladki k liye meeting ka timing bada rha h,date orfanise kra rha,nd now meetings cancel karke movie ja rha h aur to aur ise utha v rha h...ya allah me pagal ho jauga pakka..

Manik- babu...agr tmhara whisper karna khatam ho gya ho to pls utho taiyar ho jao as mujhe late hona ek dam pasand ek dam nh..i m coming at 11 am nd it is already 9:30...
Love u babu..
And manik cuts the call ...nd started to get ready wearing jean t-shirt nd blazer on it...nd making his hairs perfectly gelled he came downstairs to hv his breakfast..
It was around 10 am he started his car to his destination dat is nandini's house..MANIK'S DRESS UP
And at right 10:50 am,he was near her house nd calling her in her no. But she was not picking up nd manik was hell frustrated...
After almost 1 hr nandini picked his call nd he asked her-' whr r u?',is there any prblm etc...'nd after 2 mins of his blabberring she said that she was dressing up nd coming in 5mins...nd cut the call..
Here our very own manik khan was thinking that first in his life he is waiting for anyone,i nvr waited for my dad nd dis girl is making me do crazy things...

And after some 10 mins manik saw nandini coming near him wearing very cute red frock looking cute as always,devoid of any makeup except kajal nd lip balm...nd manik was ogling at her...
NANDINI'S DRESS UP

She came to him nd said-
Nandini-mr.khan chale..?
Manik didn't answered...first time he was numb..
Again
Nandini(by apping on his shoulder)-chale...?
Manik-hmmm
Nandini-to chalo..hmm kya.?
Manik-ha ha chalo..by the way u r looking cute as always...
Nandini smiled or u can say blushed .
Manik opens the passanger seat nd nandini sat on it nd said thnks...manik while sitting on driver's seat asked-
Manik-thanks for wht?
Nandini-for compliment...
Manik-oh that complement wo to ab roj milega to roj muje thanks bologi kya...
Nandini-hmmm
Manik-u r crazy...
Nandini-i know..
Manik-but...
Nandini-but?
Manik-innocent...
She blushed...nd manik said i love u nd ur blushing..keep blushing like this babu..

Love is a bimari u can say...ap isse jitna dur bhagoge ye utna pass aayegi...
Lets see kya nandini manik ko wo letter degi,kya manik ko puri sachai btayegi ya usse kahi or se pta chalege..
To know more stay tune...
Love u all who comments nd likes...
Nd silent reader pls comment nd like as it is my first ff...
Love u all nd btana jarur kaisi lag rhi h story in comments ya koi suggestion ho to wo v ya koi galti hui ho to wo v...
Love...
Karryd
Edited by karryd - 10 years ago

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