!!MANAN SS!!Turn The Night Up(chapter 4/pg37) 25nov - Page 21

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Posted: 9 years ago
its completely different to me.. So here Manik is trying to woo her.. I thnk he and Cabir must be knowing her..how? Ab ye to aap h reveal karogi..so jaldi jaldi update do..dekho, i had told that i wd read after chap 3 updated.. Par main to jaldi par li. Nw ur turn
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Tysm for d pm mish...am so sorry am again late to lyk n comment...as am stuck somewhere...sorry...
cumin to d updates...
Woh Kya story hai mish...
it's a super awesome concept...
loved d update to d core...
Woh nandu ka style it's awesome...N manik toh bolne ki zarurat hi nai h...super hot...
haha jerkshad...so funny...
Woh I so can't wait for d further updates...
so luking forward for dis story...
plz continue soon...
'll b waiting for d update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thnqu thnqu thnqu
That's so sweet of u...
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Posted: 9 years ago
CHAPTER 3A- JERKSHAD,U ARE SUCH A PUSSY CAT

"So did my HARD WORK paid off" Manik smirked bending towards her curiously.

"Yes and no!" Said nandini as now it was her turn to smirk "Nice move darling! I must say but really bad timing" finished nandini but seeing manik's confused face she continued "the main show starts at 12 when main crowd arrives for filling in bucks but you are done by 11:30,sweetheart!" Which made manik shocked to the core.

As nandini was about to continue teasing session with manik, her face hardened as she saw her less than 12 hours ex boyfriend entering in the club with a bitchwhowaswearing the most provocative dress that left nothing for imagination. It was dangerously low cut and strapless that showed off her cleavage and the dress was so short that if she bent then she would flash her underwear. That's only if she was wearingany.Nandinismirked, rolling her eyes on her own thought making manik look in confusion. Harshad smiled evilly and walked towards nandini while manik was oblivious of all this as he was unknown to Harshad. He looked towards Harshad and then nandini trying to understand the equation between them.

"How come you're here? I thought the zoo is closed at night!" Said nandini with a smirk.

"Like someone left your cage open!" Said Harshad.

"Who's he?" Asked manik to nandini.

"Meet Harshad, He is living proof that man can live without a brain! He is the kind of a man that you would use as a blueprint to build an idiot."

"So you are faster than I expected you to be... A new catch and that to so early! Not bad... But not better than me atleast" said Harshad checking out manik from head to toe while manik gave him a deadly glare but before manik could smack his for uttering shit nandini stepped forward stopping him "Hot shot! I'd like to kick him in the teeth, but why should we improve his looks?" Said nandini with a smirk and turned towards Harshad and said "oh really! Have you ever seen yourself in the mirror... You so ugly when who were born the doctor threw you out the window and the window threw you back.You're so ugly, when your mom dropped you off at school she got a fine for littering." All the crowd rolled in laughter.

"Oh really! Then why were you in relation ship with me since so long" said Harshad" and even wanted to do hanky panky with me huh!" shocking manik to the core.

"Hanky panky! And that to with you!!! Your cock is so small you could use it to floss teeth. " said nandini In utter annoyance making manik's eyes drop out of socket he was like did she just said what I heard, not caring about anything around nandini continued" I wasn't born with enough middle fingers to let you know how I feel about you." Manik manik bit his inner cheek to hold his laugh looking at terrible expressions on harshad's face.

"You bitch"" started furious Harshad pointing index finger at nandini just when manik caught it and twisted it making him wink in pain.

"Mind you language Mr! Oh on second thoughts What language are you speaking? Cause it sounds like bullshit." Said manik making everyone roll in laughter and nandini shocked as she wasn't expecting some witty insult from him rather he would have showed off his manly skills by punching the day light out of him. She was impressed by that gesture but didn't admit it as her head wasn't in position to absorb other facts. Her concentration was only on how more and in how many way she can humiliate Harshad.

Harshad was highly embarrassed but he couldn't give up. He was annoyed seeing manik and nandini already gelling up so well and he had to show to the people around what Harshad saxena is capable of. He smirked as a plan strikes his gutter brain.

"Hmm! Nice bond I must say... So I thought crossed my mind" started Harshad making manik and nandini crook their eyebrows up with a smirk spread on nandini's lips.

"So, a thought crossed your mind? Must have been a long and lonely journey."said nandini sarcastically making crowd laugh and Harshad surprising Harshad smiled which irked nandini as she knew something idiotic is cooking n his gutter brain is she further instigated him to open his mouth " Shock me, say something intelligent." Said nandini folding her arms around her chest.

"Hmm! Say whatever you want but you won't be able to take up the challenge I am gonna put further so its better to keep my lonely thoughts to myself as I can't handle my ex-baby losing in front of me because only I know how coward and fake she is, even Barbies are jealous of you!" Said Harshad with evil smirk and faking sympathy. He slides his finger softly down her cheek but she pushed his hand brutally.

"You're IQ's lower than your shoe size. I don't know what your problem is, but I'll bet it's hard to pronounce and don't utter shit tagging it as your challenge." Snapped mukti coming for nandini's rescue.

"Hmm! Don't worry it won't!" Smirked Harshad testing manik's patience.

"Listen don't beat around the Bush and get straight to the point!" Said manik intently.

"Nandini! Make your new catch drink maximum number of vodka shots!" Said Harshad making nandini narrow her eyes because as much she knows him, he will for sure utter some shit after this to and not to her surprise he did.

"You will Make him have shots with out using your hands and his hands!" Said Harshad with a smirk. The challenge was so Tempting that crowd went mad with hooting and cheering.

"You sound reasonable. It must be time to up my medication!" Said annoyed nandini sarcastically and tried to walk away but Harshad had an advantage here he knew when to press the wrong nodes on right time.

"See guys your daring nandini murthy is running away from challenge! Huh coward bitch!" Said Harshad pressing the wrong nodes.

Nandini's blood shot up to her head making her get all mad.
"Iski maa ki!" Mummered nandini gritting her teeth and turned her face towards Harshad. She looked contently in his eyes while Harshad was trying to emphasis what is gonna be her next move.
On the other hand, standing between the crowd a bit away from the actual crime scene, Cabir was shocked to his wits seeing what his eyes showed him.

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Yo peepz! I know I am soo late but its not my fault... I had written it long back has I wasn't able to discover the folder where I saved it!!! Finally I got time to chunk the thing off and find the file...

Hheheheh! I was laughing reading ur comments as u all were expecting manik bajayega Harshad ki but yeha ulta ho gaya... Kya karu I am soo unpredictable like my stories! Lolz

Ooo! I was thinkning of changing it to as but only if I get best wala response!
So do tell u liking it or getting bored or what ever!
Do comment lamba lamba.. Silent reader I really fell happy seeing u guys coming up as it feels good to know that somany readers I have for story... So please do comment even a words means a lot!

Cya peepz!
Will try to come up with next part to it tomorrow!
But only if you give me best am best response!!!;)

Stay happy stay blessed
Mishshergill

Edited by mishshergill - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
So feisty they are!!
Haha! This was so much fun! Continue soon
Let the Jerkshad be shown his real place :p
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ur soo awesome darling...
luv this bold..ssexy..aand way too smart nandu soo mch...
harshad ki toh lag gyi...
manik was shocked to the core...
luved iit..
jst waiting for the challenge...
awesome update...
thnx for pm..
update soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
ulalala...super sexy wala update tha meri jaan...mishuuu meri pet e dard start hogaya hain update par ke ... yeh kya tha...nandu aur uski bold talks maza agaya parne mein...uss jerkshad ka mukh dekhne layak tha... kya dhasu style mein nandu harshad ka waatt lagaya wah bohot maza aya mishu...manik ne bhi achi sunayi...par wo loser karne kya wala hain ???? auke battein sun kar laga hain kuch toh garbar ghotala hain...par koi ni story aur bhi mazedar ho gayee hain...is jershad ka toh kheir nahi cause nandu aur humari mishu mil ke uski dhobi ghat jaise dhulai karne wali hain am sure...teri updates ka beshabri se wait kar rahi thi ... awesome update thi...

.mmmwwwaaahhh...main teri iss nandu ki fan ban gayee aur teri toh bari wali fan ban gayee...aaaggg laga di hain yyaarrr awesomeee...bohot maza aya...thanks for this enery booster...love u itnaaa saraaa... next wala update jaldi plz meri jaan...tc...with lots of love and hugs

Edited by kitkat5756 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
This is hilarious to the core.
Cant wait to have more fun in the next update.
Absolutely loving it.
Thanks for the pm.
😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hot and fiery awesome and marvellous update

Nandu did rounds of insults of harshad that too in a way which shocked manik but he seemed quite impressed with her and he challenges her big mistake now he will know what a tigress she can be

Continue soon and thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ur story is amazing
the way penned the boldess hotness in the story is just the commendable
Manan is just the best the way u penned them is just beautifully vth full of hotness
u really write very nice ...skills of writing such a high sarcasm boldness hotness each nd every dialogue of harsad nandini manik is best
1st interaction of manan is just the best interaction of any story attitude nandu vth manik is just amazing i relly loved it
vodka part which manik wanted to buy for nandini was just fab
challenge of harsad was wow full of hotness is going to cum really nd eagourly luking forward
plzz i was eagourly nd impatiently waiting for ur 3rd part when i read 2 parts in one go but u rake so time to update
plzzz now update next part soon nd in near time plzzz
Really exxcited for manan futher scenes nd challenge ...
update soon u really write nice
stay blessed nd update soon

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