Manan ff- eternity Chapter-25 updated Page 144/ Thread-2 on pg 1 - Page 79

Girl...as I told you before as well, you are an amazing writer, so please don't take anythign to heart..

Baaki sab ko tik tha with THE MANIK MALHOTRA attitude.. But he is using it to nandu..all ordering and.. And the most imp.thing is he havn't confessed his feelings yet and kind of dominating type..

hey don't wrap up so soon.. its too gd... plz dear

u r saying right agreed with u but pls dont end it soon plz plz

I don't mind the moving in aspect cause it will be something different.
Secondly we've seen Nandini's hesitation & she is someone who thinks properly before going to conclusions. And about Manik's character yeah he is dominating cause this is the first time he is in a relationship.
Lastly when you write bold you don't make it sound vulgar or cheap. And continue the story as planned don't rush the ending
Update soon! Hopefully the weekend ;)

Thanks for clearing confusion..

We completely happy wid ur writing skills...
I hve no doubts...
Nd m der to lyk comment always...

Tnx for PM...nd do wt ever u want to do we will always der for u..waiting for nxt part

awesome updet dear.
plz next part updet soon.
stey blessed keep smiling.

Originally posted by: Tweetie1005

Note-

Okay guys many of you are not liking the moving in concept much and think it's too fast.. But guys, I want to clear some things regarding the update..

I don't want to make story a cliche.. What we usually read in other stories about taking things slow and a perfect ideal couple is actually not how the things are in real life (no offence to any of the writers here).. In real life, things are always unplanned.. And when you actually get into a relationship, things never happen in a planned manner..you always tend to give in to your desires and your heart's wishes.. There is no slow or fast..things happen at their own pace and you have no control over it..

Second thing is that Nandini would not take any decision in haste.. She will think through the consequences.. I have already shown her hesitations and there still would be more..

Third, Manik is dominating because that's how his character is.. He always has things his way.. And being in a relationship and all the package that comes along is something very new for a Casanova like him..so I just can't show him reformed all at once.. It will take time but mind it, he won't change much..for he has his own sort of a unique personality and that is what is gonna define their relationship differently.. Both of them have to cope up with each other's flaws as they are two very different people..

Then there is this confession thing.. It will happen soon.. But guys please don't expect something grand.. It's going to be very much normal like it happens in real life.. In real life, none of us would arrange extraordinary things to say those three words.. All we need is true feelings.. So its going to be very simple.. And I think it has its own beauty..

I might right bold updates for I wanna potray every phase of a relationship..

And last, I will wrap up this story asap because the reception of the last few updates has not been that well..and guys I really extract time from my daily schedule to write this.. And then such kind of response is disheartening.. So I will take things quick..