Manan ff- eternity Chapter-25 updated Page 144/ Thread-2 on pg 1

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Manya

@manya_189

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Posted: 9 years ago

#701

Well this was beautiful ^_^
Hot and sexy but beautiful :D

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Suprabha

@shaanmaan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#702

Super hott manan makeout
Outstanding update
Too good

Continue soon

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debanjali93

@debanjali93

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Posted: 9 years ago

#703

Superb update
So hot manan
Thanks for quick update
Waiting for next update

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shivkush

@shivkush

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#704

That was the hottest and longest love making chapter I've ever read!! Damn!! I'm still wondering how did you manage to pen it down!! Because you completely nailed it!!

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rajirock123

@rajirock123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#705

Hey dear first of all sorry for commenting late

There romance u penned so much with intensity

Too hat

Thanks for pm

Update soon next part

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Aamikrish

@Aamikrish

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Posted: 9 years ago

#706

Superb update.

Manik and his comments about the movie 😲

Manan wer too hot.

But I liked bold nandini.

I hope Manik will also confess dat three magical words, we know that he loves her.

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priyanair04

@priyanair04

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#707

Wohaaa tat was Tooo hot...hope manik mAkes his feelings clear and confess it to nandu after all she had confessed and given herself to him completely..

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Radha Sahdev

@MaNaN_trS

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#708

This was really hot...too muchh

But I praise u for that coz u knw exactly how to handle such scenes.

Not everybody has the audacity to write like this n even if they write, sometimes it turns out to be completely a mess.

( I'm not talking in someone particular's reference or context. No offense plzz. This is solely my thought.)

But u did a gr8 job...

Will be waiting.

Update soon!!!

<3 <3

N plzz pm me if possible!!

Thanks

Edited by MaNaN_trS - 9 years ago

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Claire_D

@Claire_D

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Posted: 9 years ago

#709

Manik & Nandini finally take their relationship to the next level! You've written this update really well! In no way was it weird or anything! And very few writers can achieve that!
Update was Hot & Amazing! Want to see now how their relationship goes!