Love and Hate - A NaYam FF *Discontinued* Note - page 6 - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: AMAR_LOVE

nice update...plz cont soon

pm me


😃 Thank you! :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
Awesome!
You wrote it very well!
I'm glad that you included navya- mukti , dhruv-aaliya! ^_^
Waiting for you to update!
And please pm me too!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
Awesome but short
plz try to give naYam part more
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
Why so short? Continue soon but a longer one please. Nice update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
Tomorrow is my last exam.. 😃
I assure you next Update is gonna be a longer one.

Forgot to add Precap :-
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Maddy intentionally pushed her forward.
"Oh sorry.. didn't see uh..."
Nandini was about to gave him a reply
"Calm down nandini.." she muttered to herself.
Without sayin anything she walked away.
Maddy started going towards music room.
"Parson nandini ka b'day hai..."
He smirked and walked away from there, Whistling.

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#IgnoranceKills
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Edited by hobbit - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
Of course we want you to continue! There should be no doubt about that!
This FF to me is more about accepting season two and keeping the manan spirit alive in me and trust me that takes a lot of convincing to my heart and brain. I love the way you write, please continue 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: Cooldude101

Of course we want you to continue! There should be no doubt about that!
This FF to me is more about accepting season two and keeping the manan spirit alive in me and trust me that takes a lot of convincing to my heart and brain. I love the way you write, please continue 😃


Thank you so much dear!
It means a lot!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
Interesting promo
waiting for the update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
I was kind of sad when i heard Parth was coming back in Kyy2 .I prefer Maddy over Manik. it seems , to me atleast, Parth is not coming back.
Here you go! Sorry for being late.

CHAPTER - 4
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Recap :- Maddy hurts nandini whereas Navya saw mukti shouting on abeer,

Nandini's Chacha came to pay a visit to her . On the very first day he lost him.
He told him to stay with him. But when he turned round rishabh was nowhere to found. He started panicking . he called nandini several times but it seems she was busy somewhere. she didn't pick up the call. Her Chacha was getting tensed. He took out a photograph of rishabh and started asking people if any one of them had seen rishabh.
When Nandini checked her phone, there were 5 missed calls .
she immediately called him and asked him if he's alright.
He told her everything. nandini quickly hailed a taxi and went to look out for rishabh. she couldn't afford to lose him. He was her only family as her mother lives in delhi and doesn't have time for them both. Her mother used to send them both a lot of money.
She dashed into Maddy's house , fuming in anger .
"Where is rishabh?" asked nandini, in a angry tone , ready to punch him if he did annoy her.
"Ask politely. "
"I'm asking for the last time or else.. " she warned him and clenched her fists.
"Or else..??? what? you're warning me? " maddy asked and give a mocking smile. "what will do then?" he added.
"I might call police if you didn't handover rishabh to me."
"Oh that's quite scary. " He made fun of her.
Nandini suddenly started breathing fast as if having asthma attack.
"Are you acting?" asked maddy, unsure about what he had just said.
She took out inhaler from her bag and used it.
she calmed herself down.
Maddy didn't feel good. He decided to apologise for whatever he had done.
before he could even speak..
"Di..? "they both heard rishabh say.
"You spoke?" She smiled and hugged him.
"If this melodrama is over, you may go . "
"You didn't kidnap him . did you?" asked nandini .
"I am not answerable to you" said as He turned around to go.
"weird guy. "

As soon as she was back home. Rishabh wanted to listen that song. she didn't know which song.
She texted maddy.
"Wo, i wanted to know ki.. Tumne rishabh ko Konsa song SunNe Ko Diya Tha.. 😊 Please tell me na.. It'll be very useful for him. "

Maddy smirked and didn't text back.
after 15 minutes.
She again texted.
"You're so cruel . 😕😡"

This time , seeing the text, a smile plastered on his face.

Next day.

Nandini was walking after maddy.

"Hey! stop.. "
Nandini held Maddy's wrist.
He gave her a angry glare. " I texted you last night.. you didn't reply me.. may i ask you why?"
"You're not worth it. " replied maddy.
"Stop being so rude , for god's sake."
"You were the one who was ignoring me yesterday. now it's my turn. " Maddy said .


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A/N - I didn't include Navya-mukti , dhruv- aaliya in this part.. sorry about that




Edited by hobbit - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
Now that manan is back I don't think Nayam is gonna be there anymore but I do like this story and would love to read more of it! You have changed the relations in this and well maddy is a guy with a good heart which I will never understand but yes the update was very nice! 😃

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