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Tishyy

@Tishyy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#491

Wow... Simply waaooowww
U rock gal ... Once again a fab update here ...
Take a bow now :)))))
I had the same question ... Shit what is this guy upto ???
I'm loving the mystery around him ...
The way he held her hand to the way he locked themselves
And holy cow what was that ... He was angry like hell hearing the word criminal ...
Poor gal is confused like hell...at one end she wants to run away from him and the other she wants him to come after her and explain his innocence ... Silence is bothering her
Hahahah cherry on the cake ... Our ever always Dhruv lol
Kudos to u gal
Lovely update here
But please don't make us wait for another update ... I'm sure like me others are totally hooked to this one ...
Loads of love dear

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Tadibaaaz

@Tadibaaaz

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Posted: 9 years ago

#492

Roking update

Awesome

I have to tell you this is the best story i have read in the forum

I just love it

U are a awesome writer

Wating for the next part

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pnlove

@pnlove

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Posted: 9 years ago

#493

It was awesome as always

But way too much suspence

And about the last thing nandu was thinking i think that manik was also admiring his soon to be lady love thats why she affected him so much

Cant wait to read the next chapter

And the jealousy spice was also nice looking forward to it

Update soon

Keep up the good work

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Cooldude101

@Cooldude101

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Posted: 9 years ago

#494

Thank you so much for the PM! I love this update so much!

Right now I don't know what to say, it's so mysterious with Manik and Nandu!

Please fontinue soon.

I don't know whether I have commented on the other FF which I love a lot too, but if not I just want to tell you I love it so much!

Please update both soon and I'll be waiting to read it!

Happy Durga puja!

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dhillon90

@dhillon90

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Posted: 9 years ago

#495

Awesome...amazingg update
Manik nandini se affct ho rha hai...
Hahahaha washroom ke bina manan ko aur koi plce nhi milti...toh dhruv bhi iss trip mein hai...ab toh manik ek mystery bn gea hai...lovd it
Continue soon

Edited by dhillon90 - 9 years ago

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firefly09angel

@firefly09angel

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Posted: 9 years ago

#496

Awesome update...
Jealousy track always works 😉
Continue soon 😊

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ArSha_ManNan

@ArSha_ManNan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#497

Baap re manik kya starekari jaa raha tha nandu ko...
Inke saare scenes washroom mei kyun hote hai...heheheheheeh
Itna affect karti hai nandu manik ko... Ki uske criminal khene pe voh gussa hogya ...
Dhruv n nandu ko dekh kar jealous hogya manik...
Superb update
Thnkz 4 the pm

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manandeeplove

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Posted: 9 years ago

#498

amazing update...
nandini's inner turmoil...
loved it...
her one word turned him off compltly. ...
i guess manik also likes nandini a lott...
d way he behaves with her around...it seems like that...
bt he was so upset n possessive...
spcly when dhruv held nandu...haahh
hai kon manik actual me?
reveal it asap
waiting

PS happy Durga puja

Edited by manandeeplove - 9 years ago