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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Kavyashree22

So!!! Jaldi jaldi female servent rakhlo nahi to manik male servent ko 'i will kill you agar nazar utake dekha toh' look de de k rehene layak nahi chodega.. Hehe.. I loved the update and quite emotional it was.. Manan k bich emotional scene na ho to chalega. Family k bich to we can adjust na thats why.. Hehe

...hehe ...😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Monstuholic4evr

Manik is scared that servants will have evil eye on Nandini:)

Murthy's are dead :((

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kishubedi

thanks for pm

loved it
shocked to know bout nandinis family
but only thing i didnt understand was how did nandu land in maniks shirt ahahah

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: epshitatabassum

Rofl

Manik abb ghar mai female servant rakhy ga🤣🤣🤣




Superb



fab




Nice




Awesome




Amazing👏👏👏



EMOTIONAL😭

Thanks dear😛
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: urvisaini

shocked to know about nandu's family

but manik is there for her now!

manik thinks ki ab ghar mein female servants hone chahiye!
lol


loved it

thanks for the pm

continue soon

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kimnana

she sufferd a lot ..but her hero is their to cheer her up

LAGTA HA AB GHAR MAIN FEMALE SERVANTS RAKHNE PADEGE ...🤣
hilarious ...nice update ...ty for pm

Thanks😛
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kewlgirl

Amazing update

But nandu's family is dead 😭

Last part was too good
Female servants 😆

Thanxx a lot for d pm

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: anu_khan

Awesome... Nandini family is dead it's sad... It was littel funny also in last manik said"LAGTA HA AB GHAR MAI FEMALE SERVANTS RAKHNE PADEGE"... By the way where is fab5 pls bring them...
Thanks for update 😊

Am glad you like it
And I will dear😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsm...loved ur story. ..👏👏...well done
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thank you SooO much Guys for ur lovely comments and likes ...and sorry for late update ...really sorry ...hehe ...here is ur update ...ENJOY😛

PART-11

Every morning brings something new for everyone ...manik who loves nandani a lot can't even imagine his life without her ...it has been two days in morning Manik wake up to see his lady love but to his dismay no one is there ...he looked at there room maybe to find her but no she was not there ...

Manik Pov :

It has been two days ...she is angry on me ...for no reason ...well yes there is a reason ...I want her to take care of herself ...I want her to take security bcz I don't want her to get hurt in any way...am scared of mathur ...if he did anything to her then I wouldn't be able to alive ...but she is not listening to me ...and just freak out ...but ab bahot hua ...ab naaraz kiya ha toh manana toh padega ...chal bhi manik shuru ho jaa ...

Manik got up from his bed and went to freshen up ...after sometime he came out of the washroom and dressed up to meet his wiffy ...

CONCERT AREA:

Nandani is shouting on everyone ...it's like she is death of everyone ...

Nandani shoutedly said : what the hell ...can't u just do one work ...like Scriously ...u knew what tum sab kissi kaam ke nahi ho ...just go away otherwise I will fire u right now ...

Poor designer went away from there ...

Karan : doll ...doll ...relax yaar ...why are u freaking out ...it's just a costume yaar ...from when u started shooting like this ...

Nandani frustratingly said : karan just shut ur bloody mouth am not in mood ...and just leave okay

Karan : I wouldn't ...do whatever you want ...

Nandani give a deadly glare: karan ...

Karan looked at her and chuckled

Nandani frustratingly said: fine am going ...

She walks towards the door but karan came in front of her and said

Karan : sorry doll I can't let u go ...jab tak bata nahi deti problem kya ha ...I wouldn't let u go ...

Nandani : kya jaanana chahte ho ha ...there is nothing to tell you...suna tumne ...

Just then manik enter in the cabin ...nandani saw him and looked away ...Karan walks towards him ...

Karan : paara bahot high ha dude ...aaj meri baby doll ...sherni ban gayi ha ...so be careful ...

Manik smiled bcz he knew this is going to be Happened ...he gave a assuring smile to karan and said

Manik : don't worry ...I'll take care of it ...

Karan left from there and manik walks towards nandani ...

Nandani angrily said : what the hell are u doing over here?

He sit on the chair and pulled her towards him ...to which she falls on her lap ...her hairs fall on her face ...he tucked her hairs and smirkingly said

Manik smirkingly said : is this a question to ask wiffy ...u r my wife...and I can come to meet u anytime don't u think ...

She tried to get up but to her dismay ...he holds her waist tightly ...to which she glare him

Nandani angrily said:Manik just shut up and leave...

Manik smiled and said : Am not going anywhere wiffy ...

She pinched his hand and get up from his lap and shoutedly said

Nandani shoutedly said : what the hell ...aaj sabko ho kya gaya ha ...sab mere piche kyo pade ho ...fine am leaving ...

Manik get up and hold her hand and said

Manik smirkingly said : Not so soon wiffy ...I need something

Nandani knew what he is talking about but she said in a stern voice

Nandani said in a stern voice : I don't have anything to give you.

Manik : u have but it depends on u ...u want to give or not ...

Nandani looked at him and said

Nandani : fine am not giving happy ...

Manik came and back hugged her and said

Manik saddy face and said: No not happy ...yaar am sorry naa ...please maaf kardo naa ...

She broke the hug and said

Nandani shoutedly said: Manik am not a kid okay ...and the way u r behaving ...I felt like am a kid ...like Scriously ...I can take care of myself but no u want bodyguards ...like Scriously ...manik am a rock star ...aur iss vajhse kya kam security hoti ha u want more ...

Manik knew she was right ...but he was not wrong too ...but he needs to be calm ...calm for her ...calm to make her understand his point of view ...he smiled and said

Manik smiled :okay baba ...I agree u r not kid ...but please naa wify ...ab gussa chodo ...and I said all this bcz I care for you ...I don't want anyone will harm u ...I have a lot of rivals ...and I Don't Want they will harm u ...u r my strength as well as my weakness ...if anyone wants to hurt me then they will target u ...bcz they knew I can't bear a small scratch on u ...that's why I said all this yaar ...am sholly please maaf kar do apne sweet se ...cute se... lovey se ...baby se...hubby se ... galati ho gayi ...am sholly ...my wiffy ...

Nandani looked at him and he made ever innocent face to which she smiled

Nandani smiled : I love you my cute hubby ...

Manik lovingly said : I love you too my MISHTI

Nandani broke the hug and raise her eye brows and said

Nandani confusingly said: MISHTI

Manik lovingly said : yes mishti ...my sweet si ...cute si mishti ...

Nandani irritatingly said: God manik ...tum kab se yeh romeo panti karne lage ...

Manik teasingly said:hmmm...nice question mishti ...hmm ...haa ...jabse tumse pyar kiya tabse...jabse tera hero bana tab se ...jabse hubby bana tabse ...aur jab papa banuga naa toh tab toh ...u knew😉

Nandani blushed and hit his shoulder and said

Nandani : shut up okay

Manik teasingly said : arre what shut up ...papa toh banuga naa main ...kyu tum nahi banogi mamma😉

Nandani blushed harder :Manik ...

Manik innocently said: what manik mishti ...

To avoid the topic ...nandani said

Nandani : tum mujhe kitne naam doge ...matlab pehle nandu ...then baby ...then wiffy ...and now mishty ...

Manik smiled and said: jab tak tumse pyar karunga tab tak deta rahunga ...accha now go and change warna concert ke liye late ho jayega ...

Nandani gave him I -don't -care-look- to which he give I -knew -look ...

Nandani smirkingly said : do u think I care about it ...

Manik : Naaa ...I don't think but bechare uss producer ka khayal kar loo ...bechara roh raha hoga

He acted like BECHARA PRODUCER...to which nandani smiled and said

Nandani : shut up okay ...jaa rahi hu ...

She is about to go but Manik pulled her towards him and she banged on his chest ...he came closer to her ear and makes her hairs on one side and kissed her shoulder to which she breathed heavily ...

Manik huskyly said : ese hi chali jaungi ...meri dose pending ha mishti ...

Nandani knew what he is talking about she blushed a little and turned ...placed her hands around his neck and said

Nandani smirkingly said : I knew but yeh tumhari punishment ha .. .

Manik confusingly said: what punishment ...

Nandani : for making me angry ...

He pulled her more closer by her waist and said

Manik smiled : but I apologies for that ...so now my dose please ...

Nandani smiled and manik pulled her more closer...there lips were inches apart ...on the very next second manik placed his lips on her ...manik sucking her lower lip and she was sucking his upper lip ...both were sucking each other lips ...manik bitted her lower lip and entered her mouth to which she moaned in his mouth ...he explore each and every corner of her mouth ...both were kissing each other so passionately ...no one wanted to break the kiss ...it's like this kiss is there oxygen ...manik broke the kiss when he felt she was breathless ...manik kissed her forehead and lovingly said

Manik : Now u can go ...I got my energy back ...

Nandani blushed bcz he knew what he really mean by this ...nandani kissed his cheek

Nandani : I love you my hubby

Manik : love you too my MISHTI


Chalo bhi ...batao kaisi lagi ...
I hope achi lagi ho ...
Guys I want long comments now
Chotu chotu comment nahi chahiye
Long long chahiye ...hehe ...
Next update jaldi milegi
Agar comments long long
Milenge ...
Love you all guys
Keep loving
Keep smiling
And
Keep shining For Ur loved ones
Love
Diya😛

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