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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: gtilwani45

Wow.. finally. .. that was a emotional. .. manik took lots of efforts... that's just amazing. ... n finally nandu gave him chance... n their hug n kiss.. that was just awesome. .. that's amazing. . wT a story u write...that's fab... keep updating waiting for next update eagerly. . update soon. .. thanksss for this beautiful update.. Thanks for pm too. :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-):-) :-) Love Geet

Thanks Geet😛
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Kavyashree22

Heee!! How can nandini forgive him so easily..!! Anyways,manan moments are all about for me.. Love the update.. Thanq for pm

Not so easy
U will see😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sakshi_maheta

Emotional Update😭
Both hurt a lot
But both need eachother
manan kiss...😳😳
Ab jaldi se ye sab khatam ho jaye
and manan will be together...😊
Love it very much
Eagerly waiting for the update
Take care dear😊

Thanks dear😛
And about that u will see😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sharon.babu

awesome update...

loved it so much...

glad that they gave into their feelings...

the kiss was amazing...it depicts the love and the care that they both have for each other...that they missed out on all these years...

can't wait to see what happens next...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

Thanks😛
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: arshuaar

Awesome

nandu is soo hurt...😭
Both needs each other soo much...
Manan Kiss...
hope all sorted our soon N Manan will be together...
Manan... Forever... Hamesha....😊

True😛
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: heemasomani

Awesome update

finally she is ready to give chance

Thanks And
About chance
you will see in next update😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: farhana12

Read all part in one go
Loved the story

Thanks😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Manansamkhan

amazing ...

heart touching ...

cont soon
thnks for the pm. .

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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey...!
I read all parts at once n its awesome
Manik ka chaly jana ...
Nandani ka gussa ...
Phir shadiii...
N now in same home ..
R UN ka hug wowww
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey guys thank you SooO much for your likes and Comments ...am happy with the response ...I guess now u guys liking it ...so yeah here is ur update ...hope you guys like it ...ENJOY😛
Part-6 (B)


Manan were rested there forehead with each other ...manik said

Manik : Am sorry nandani ...am really sorry

After listening this Nandani opened her eyes and looked at him ...she saw there closeness ...she immediately get up ...and said

Nandani : just leave manik ...just go from here

Manik get up and looked at her in shocked ...but didn't move a bit...nandani saw this and

Nandani shoutedly said : chale jao yaha se ...chale jao ...just get out from my life ...just leave

Manik helplessly said : I wouldn't ...I wouldn't leave u...nandani ...not this time ...I ...I am tired Nandani ...am tired ...tired of r hateness ...I can't see u like this ...please Nandani ...please give a chance ...lets take a break Nandani ...break from everything ...please...please lets talk

Nandani looked at him his eyes were pleading her ...nandani said

Nandani : okay ...

Manan were sitting on the floor ...there is silence in the room ...no one is speaking ...but the pain that they are going through ...there eyes said everything

Manik : u knew nandani after talent hunt ...I was so happy ...so happy Nandani ...bcz now I have u ...now I know that you will never leave me ...never ...the night was the beautiful night nandani ...it's the best moment of my life ...we became one ...u knew when u left ...I was about to leave for party ...but I listened something that makes me frozen on my place ...tum jaanti ho maine kya suna ...Nyonika ...my so called mother ...she was behind all this ...she created problems between me and fab5 ...she wants to destroy me ...and she knows that now u r my life ...so she makes a plan to kill u ...but unfortunately I listened everything ...u all think ...that am died in the bomb blast but I was alive ...I was alive

Nandani : I knew u were alive ...when I got to knew that u r died ...I couldn't believe on my ears ...but everyone said u were died ...even fab5 too ...u knew am going to surprise u im the party ...I was going to give ur family back to you ...but u just left ...I saw u in pune after one month ... u knew when I saw u I soo wanted to hug you ...but just then a girl came and hugged u tightly and said I love you and missed u ...to my surprise u also hugged her back...

Manik looked at nandani in shock and said

Manik : so u were there ...matlab I was right ...I have a feeling that u r around ...and u were there ...but nandani jaisa tum soch rahi ho vaisa kuch nahi ha ...the girl that u saw with me was REWA
She is my childhood friend ... she is the one who helped me to expose nyonika ...yes ... u knew nandani rewa helped me ... she found some proofs against her ...after that nyonika sending into the jail ...u knew nandani I came back after three months ...Mumbai ...and the first thing I did I went ur home ...but u were not there ...no one was there ... .ur home were locked ...I asked neighbors but they also don't knew about anything ...then I went cabir house ...and navya told me she didn't meet u from last two months ...I was scared ...I don't knew what to do ? ...there is a lot of questions in my mind ...but then I thought u must be in manglore but to my surprised u were not there to ...I tried a lot to find u ...but I couldn't find u ...nandani believe me ...I want to come to u ...but I was scared ...scared of nyonika ...if she did something to u ...I wouldn't be able to alive ...I wouldn't be able to alive ...

After listening all this Nandani eyes were filled with tears

Nandani cryingly said : when I saw u with that girl ...I don't knew what am I going to do ...then I received a call from chacha ji ...she said amms was very critical ...so I just rushed to manglore ...but I was late ...u...knew my amms were died ...I couldn't do anything ...I couldn't ...after that I got amms letter...she told me about appas properties that was in London and told me to take care of them ...then we all shifted ...after that I became N.M ...where everyone wants to reach her place ...but I didn't give them a damn ...aur uske baad tumse mili ...

Manik hugged Nandani tightly and said

Manik : Am sorry nandani ...meri vajhse tumhe bahot kuch sahna pada ...

Nandani broke the hug and wipes his tears and Said

Nandani : Tumne bhi toh bahot kuch saha ha ...so now stop crying u r not at all in fault ...in fact am sorry too ...I should even asked u when I saw u there ...

Manik cupped her face and said : No nandani tumhara koi fault nahi ha ...ab please stop crying ...ur tears breaks me ...break me like anything

Nandani smiled and hugged him tightly and said

Nandani : I love you Manik

After listening those words whom he wants to listen from last five years ...he couldn't hold himself ...he hugged her more tightly and said

Manik : I love you too Nandani ...u don't have any idea how much I love you ...how I missed this warmth of urs ...I love Nandani ...I love sooO much ...

Nandani was crying ...manik wipes her tears and playfully Said

Manik : AB TOH SMILE KARDE TERA HERO AA GAYA HA





Misunderstandings create rifts...we should talk to the person and try to solve them otherwise it hurts ...not even u ... ur partner too...





Nandani smiled and hugged him...Both were hugging each other and tears were flowing from there eyes but this time these tears were... happiness ...love ...that they had for each other ...after sometime manik broke the hug and said

Manik lovingly said : chale Mrs. Malhotra apne room main😉

Now nandani reminds how he married her ...through she was happy now but she was angry with him how can he marry her like that...she looked at manik and be

Nandani : I will come with u but Firstly give a answer of my question

Manik looked at her confusingly and said :

Manik :What question?

Nandani : Yeh bataiye Mr. Malhotra ki wife's apne pati ko kis cheez se maarti ha

Manik was shocked by listening this question but composed himself and said

Manik : well tumne mujhe pillow ...bedsheets ...flowers ...and almost vaas se maara ha ...par generally mane Suna ha ...ki wife apne pati ko jhadu ...I mean broomstick se maarti ha

Nandani smirks : arre waah Mr. Malhotra aap toh bade smart ho

Manik smiled : haina I knew

Nandani goes somewhere and come with a broomstick manik looked at nandani with horrifiedly said

Manik : Na..n..da..ni ...yeh ...tum kya kar rahi ho

Nandani smirks and said : Manik abhi toh tumne kaha biwi apne pati ki broomstick se pitai karti ha ...itni jaldi bhul gaye

Manik : arre par meri kyu?

Nandani beats manik through broomstick and manik was running around into the room ...

Nandani : kyu manik bahot shok haina shaadi karne kaa ...how dare you ...haaa ...how dare you marry me like that ...

Manik stops and said : so u don't have any problem to marry me ...u have a problem like how I married u

Manik smirks and come towards nandani Nandani takes some steps back...now nandani back hits the wall and manik came and holds her waist tightly and said

Manik : bolo nandu

Nandani looked at him and said:haa I mean how can you marry me like this ...u should ask me naa ...but what u did

Nandani looked other side manik come close to her and kissed her neck softly ...nandani was starting breathing heavily ...manik smirks seeing his effects on her and said

Manik : Am sorry...

He kissed her cheeks and said : sorry for doing our marriage like that

He kissed her eyes and said : sorry for making u crying a lot

He kissed her nose and said : sorry for leaving you

He kissed her forehead and lovingly said : sorry for everything jaan ...I love u ...I always do ...

Nandani was just looking at him ...he held her waist more tightly and there lips were inches apart ...but nandani stops him and said

Nandani : Not here ...we Are in leaving room

Manik smiled and picked her up in his arms and went towards his room ...sorry there room




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Edited by diyaNarwal - 9 years ago

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