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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: anjanbapidas

it was awesome update. And please say happy birthday to you niece from by side also may gods bless you. Yeah about the note i think you are right you should change the name of your story it will look great. Continue soon.

Thanks for understanding
Dear😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update dea. ...
Continue soonnn
Tnx fr d pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey guys as I already said am going to change its name ...so for now it's hidden love bcz both love each other but hide it ...do I guess it's perfect ...Here is ur update ...hope you guys like it...ENJOY😛
Part-5

Manan reached malhotra mansion ...manik quickly got down from the car ...and opened the door for Nandani and smiles but she gave a angry glare and started moving ...manik too followed her ...and servants open the door for both of them ...nandani came inside and shocked to see the huge picture of manan (it's fission concert picture)... .after looking the pic nandani looked towards manik who was smilingly looking at her ...Once she smiled but again the thought he left her all alone came in her mind...a lone tear came from her eyes ...manik who was silently looking at her ...by seeing her tears ...once again he felt guilty

Manik pov

God meri ek galat decision ki vajhse maine nandani ko kitni taklif di ...vo kitni hurt ha ...par ab aur nahi Nandani ...now no more cry ...I knew those wounds I give you ...was very deep but I will heal them ...I will never hurt you ...not anymore


Mr. Malhotra (manik's dad ) came and said

Rohit : welcome home beta

Nandani looked at him confusingly and said

Nandani : aap

Rohit smiled and said: Am Rohit manik's dad

Nandani : Manik's dad

Rohit : yes am manik's dad ...I must say manik ur choice is very good ...u r very beautiful beta ... am very happy manik that u choose nandani as ur life partner

Manik smiled and looked at nandani

Nandani angrily said : Am sorry uncle but am not happy ...aapke bete ne dokhe se mujhse shaadi ki ...aur ab yaha jabardasti laya ha ...bcz he just wants to see me hurt and look what he did

Rohit : beta esa nahi ha ... he loves u a lot ...he just wanted to be with u ...I knew the way he choosed was wrong but he truly loves u ...please trust him and trust ur relationship


Nandani sarcastically said: Trust ...haa...uncle trust kispe karu jisne mujhe hamesha dokhe ke alava kuch nahi diya ...u knew I just want divorce aur issiliye main sirf 6 mahino ke liye yaha hu ...aap mujhe mera room bata dijiye

Rohit : sure beta

He called his servant and ask him to show manik's room but nandani cur off him in mid and said

Nandani said in a cold tone : main manik ke room main nahi rehne waali...just show me guest room bcz am a guest who is going after 6 months

Manik and Rohit both were shocked by listening this ...nandani went towards the guest room ...manik's dad patted his shoulder

Rohit : don't worry son everything is gonna be fine

Manik : dad I knew it's going to be very difficult but that I never expect that

Rohit : Toh matlab abhi se haar maanli

Manik : No dad not this time ...iss baar nandani ko main apni life se nahi jaane de sakta ...ek baar galati kar chuka hu ab aur nahi ...I will make her again fall for me

Rohit smilingly said : That's the spirit son ...tum jo bhi karoge...am with you

Manik smilingly said : Thanks dad


Manik come towards the guest room and saw nandani who was moving here and there ...manik smiled and said

Manik : so how are u wiffy?

Nandani angrily said : what the...tum yaha kya kar rahe ho ...ye mera room ha ...niklo ...niklo bahar

Manik smirkingly said: calm down...calm down... wiffy itna gussa sehat ke liye Accha nahi hota ...aur rahi baat meri yaha aane ki ... toh tumne toh suna hoga pati ka ghar hi patni ka asli ghar hota ha ...par meri story kuch alag ha ...ab dekho jaha meri wiffy hogi vahi toh main hoonga naa ...ab chahe mera kamra ho ya tumhara ...mujhe toh matlab bas tumhare saath rehne se he


Nandani was so angry and frustrated and said


Nandani : pati ...pati ...pati...bahot shok ha naa ...pati banane ka ab dekho main kya karti hu


She throws pillow's on him one by one

Manik : arre arre yaar ye kya kar rahi ho ...

Nandani : kyu kya hua

She again throws a pillow

Manik : Nandani dekho lag jaayegi

Nandani smirks : kyu dar gaye

Manik : dekho

Before he completed She throws bed sheets ...flowers on him...and about to throw vaas on him ...

Manik horrifiedly said : arre nandani ye kya kar rahi ho ...agar mujhe lag gaya ...toh main mar jaaunga ...aur phir tum vidhva ho jaogi ...

Nandani : vidhva haa ...arre voh toh aur bhi Accha ha mujhe divorce nahi lena padega

Manik : arre kaisi biwi ho jo apne hi pati ko maarna chahti ho

Nandani : Accha biwi ruko abhi batati hu

She is about to throw vaas on him but manik holds both her hands and pinned her near by wall

Manik : kaha tha maine ...mat karo

Nandani was struggling for free herself from his grip ...but his grip became very tight

Nandani : chodo mujhe

Manik smirks : Naa aise kaise chod doon ...ab now u have to pay for this

Nandani : what do u mean?

Manik smirks : ab galti ki ha toh punishment toh milegi naa

Nandani shouted : what punishment

Manik smirks and moves more closer to her and placed his lips on her ...nandani who was fully shocked by this ...she hitted manik's chest but manik just sucking her lips ...he bited her lower lip and entered her mouth ...soon Nandani to flow with the passion ...she started responding him ...manik dig his nails on her waist ...she moaned in his mouth that makes manik more crazy ...he kissed her madly ...nandani too kissed him with same passion ...she dig her nails on manik's hair ...to make the kiss more dipper ...they were sucking each other lips ...there tongues were fighting with each other ...manik exposed each and every corner of her mouth...after sometime when he found that she was breathless ...he broke the kiss ...and looked at nandani whose eyes were still closed ...he smiled to see her so close ...nandani opened her eyes and saw manik smilingly ...reality hits her ...she pushed him but manik still smiling

Manik smilingly said : u love me ...u still loves me

Nandani was shocked by listening this she didn't knew how to react



So how's it Guys
Toh mazza aaya
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Till then Keep loving
Keep smiling😊
And
Keep shining For Ur loved ones❤️
Love
Diya😛
Edited by diyaNarwal - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
it was amazing update. Thanks for the pm. Continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Read all parts in ago
It is superb duperb chappies
Loved it to the core of my heart
This latest was Toh really amazing
Thanks for all those pms
Continue soon

Love you
Ekta
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice story ..

its intresting ..
cont .
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow update...
Manik's dad is also with him...
Nandu can't control her anger now...
She can kill even her pati...and become vidhva😆
Kiss was wow...
Luved it...
Thnx for pm..
Update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
it was amazing update. Thanks for the pm. Continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Yeah,loved it.. Its just OOOWWSAMM!!! And m with nandini.. 😉 😆 😃 kya karu i love her.. You are updating continiously so do take care of your health yaar..bimaar padjaogi .. Thanq for pm
Edited by Kavyashree22 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

awesome update...

loved it so much...

nandu is a bit stubborn but I'm sure that manik will be able to calm her down...

they are still passionate about each other...

can't wait to see what happens next...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

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