Manan ff [BRUTAL LOVE][LINK TO THREAD 2 PAGE 1] - Page 39

Originally posted by: suji_suji

Hey akanksha,

That was an awesome update..

Manik crazy guy..

Really unbelievable he stole the chocolate and give it to that baby but get caught by ria..

Really funny..

But nandini poor girl.. She having a very tough life..

Eagerly waiting for next update..
Tanq for pm..

Love
Suji :-)

hey !!!

thanks dear ...

glad uh liked it ...

will update soonish ..

loads of love

akanksha!!

Originally posted by: kimnana

nandani is hurt ...no doubt hope manan will clear this soon

manik might surprise him this time

ty for pm

thanks dear :)

Originally posted by: manan_eku

So so sorry for the delay di my exams were going on

But at last I finally read it

It was awesome vas usual

Let see what is going to happen in next

Overall loved it

Love you

Ekta

its OK baby ..
how was your exams ??
hope they went awsm ...
chalo ..u r back ..

love uh
akanksha

Originally posted by: manan_eku

So so so sorry for the delay di

As my exams are going on

But finally read it

It was awesome as usual

Let's see what is going to happen next

Overall loved it

Love you

Ekta

thanks baby ..
n no need 2 say sorry !!

Originally posted by: anjanbapidas

it was amazing update. Please post the next part soon. Thanks for the pm. Tack care of yourself.

thanks dear :)

Originally posted by: kyy_manan

Woww !! Really excited to know what will happen nxt

plz upgate soon !!

Waiting eagerly ^*^

thanks dear :)

PART 10

NANDINIS POV -:

I was trying to play my guitar but then I listened a knock on the door ...I looked at the door ...and what I saw ..made me shocked ...

Was that manik ???

What is he doing here ???

Is he actually manik or ??

Oh common nandini ...height bi wahi h ...

Oh god !! ye qutub minar yahan kya kar rha h ???

"hii" he said cheekily coming towards me ...while I gave him a weird look ...

He came and said beside me ...

" hey !!! why you ran like that from canteen ?? and why are you crying ?? he asked me completely ignoring my what-are-u-doing-here-looks???

I ignored his question and asked him angrily " what the hell are you doing here ??? "

His face expressions changed in furious ones as I shouted at him angrily but he controlled his anger by taking a deep sigh ...

He didn't answered me and I was hell annoyed !!

Ayiappa !!!!! I had enough for the day

Now I want peace !!

After somewhat five minutes of silence he again asked me " why you ran like that ?? and why were you crying ??"

"that's none of your business manik " I replied him calmly ...

I seriously didn't have the energy to fight with him ...

And he didn't said anything after that ...he took out his phone and started playing angry birds ...

Is he crazy ???

He is insane dude !!!! pagal h yeh !!!!

And after winning the levels he was was literally shouting at my ears ..."yay !!! yippee!!! " just to annoy me ..

I was hell annoyed at that time !!!

He again cleared a level and shouted at my ears again " yayyy!!!" and I snatched his phone in anger ...

I got up from there and shouted " tell me ...what the hell are you doing here ??? ...no forget it ...i don't want to know ...whatever you are doing here ?? but for now just get lost ..."

I was seriously angry ...

Mtlb ...hadd h !!! I just wanted peace ...

And maybe that was it for manik manhotra ...he also got up from there and grabbed my shoulders and pinned me to the wall ..and placed his fingers on my lips ...

" ssshhh!!!!! Chup ..ekdum chup !!!! I told you before too...never ever shout at manik manhotra ..." he said ..anger was clearly visible in his eyes...but then his eyes turned in soft ones and he asked softly placing his one hand on my cheek ... " why were you crying ..."

And his one mere touch created havoc in my body ...it was just like that as some one passed an electric current inside me ...

I shivered as he placed his hand on my cheek ...

I looked in his eyes ...and I was lost ...

I should have done it !!! his eyes always make me loose myself ...

He was looking at me intensely ..and with a hope that maybe I will tell him !!!

But I cant tell him ...

I don't know him completely... .how can I share the deepest secret of my life with him ...

What if he also judged me ...

What if he also said that I was wrong ..

No !! I cant tell him ...

" manik !!!!! I cant tell you.. .its something very personal ..." I confessed him genuinely ...

He didn't seem angry now ...he just nodded and left me ...but again he pinned me to the wall ...and yeah !!!! that smirk was there on his face ...

Now what I have done !!!!

Ayiappa ...now what is the loop hole ??

He leaned on me ...i tried to lean backward but cant ...as the wall didn't allowed me to do so ...

He came dangerously closed to me and whispered huskily in ear " I told you ..before too . ...to not shout at me ...but you did !!! and I told you the punishment too ...before remember ...!!!"

The proximity in his voice was enough to send electric jolts in my body !!

No !!! he cant kiss me ...

I cant let him kiss me again ...

I gulped my saliva in fear ...and I quickly placed my palm on my lips ...and closed my eyes tightly ...

Yeah !! qutub minar !!! I won ...

I wont let you kiss me ...

Almost till two minutes.. .i didn't felt any movement or anything ...so I opened my eyes ..ahista ahista ..to find him laughing hysterically holding his stomach ..standing quiet far from me ...

At first I became annoyed seeing him laughing ...

But then a smile crept on my lips seeing his laughter ...

He really looks good when he laughs ...

His laugh is really beautiful ...

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Zindagi ki yehi h khas baat !!!

Ki roz panapte hn naye zazbat !!!

Pta bhi nhi chalta ki kab kuch log humari zindagi ban jate hn !!

Or kab ho jati ek naye pyar ki shuruat !!!!!

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" stop laughing !! " I shouted irritatedly ...

He stopped laughing and took a glance of me while I turned my face in embarassement and ...he again started laughing like hell !!!!

I gave him an angry glare and finally he stopeed laughing ...no actually not stopped... but was trying his best to control his laughter ...

I was distracted by riyas cute voice ...I saw riya standing at the door holding his doll ...

And I smiled seeing her ...and manik too finally stopped his laughing session ...

" areee !!! di ap yahan pal ho ...meine tou in bhaiya ko btaya tha ..ki u were in youl room " riya informed me biting her lips ...

Maik move towards her and picked her up in his arms and said " no !! problem princess ...see I searched her ..." manik informed riya and she smiled ...

What the hell is going on here ???

Riya told manik that I was here !!!

matlab this qutub minar can do anything to make it in his way...

My thoughts were broken by riyas voice " didu ...mera teddy wahan upal h ...cupboard ke upar ...ap utar do plzzz " she requested me cutely ..making a pout and pointed on the cupboard ...

I smiled and moved towards the cupboard ...

But guess what !!! it was very high !!! I cant reach till cupboard ...

I noticed manik again trying to control his laugh ...twicthing his lips in a side smirk ...

While riya was giving me furious ...and irritated expressions ...

Finally after five minutes of continous trying bi I cant pull it down ...i was literally jumping like a frog in pulling it ...

Riya patted her head by her hand and said " didu !!!! apse tou ni ho rha "

And I gave her an embarrassed smile ...

" haan princcess ...hoga bi kaise apki didi hn jo itni ...c..h..o..tt...ii s...ii ..."manik said and deliberately stretched the word cotttii sii to annoy me ...

I gave him a deadly glare ...

But he being he completely ignored it ...and said to riya " wait mein utarta hoon " ..

He putted riya down ...and moved towards the cupboard ...and I moved backward .

"haan !!! tum tou nikal hi loge ...qutub minar jo ho !!!!" I murmured under my breathe but maybe he listened to me ...

" what ???? ...what did you just said ??" he asked me curiously .

I gulped my saliva and said ." what .nothing ...kuch bi tou ni ...ab just pull it down na ..." is said distracting him ...

" hmmm !!! " he said but gave me an angly glare ...

Ayiappa ..he listened it !!!

Manik pulled it down very easily and riya clapped her hands in excitement happily ...

He passd the teddy to riya and she ran out from there ...

Mank turned towards me .. ..." Han ..tou what did you said nandu ??" he asked me smirking

I ran out of there quickly and made my way downstairs before he can catch me and made me do another stupid thing ...

Phewww !!!!!!!! so here our update of brutal love ...

Cute naaa !!!! I loved writing it ...hope you guyz will like it too ...

Again thanks for your appreaciation ..but I noticed ..many old readers didn't commented ...why so ???

Anyways !! now shower your love as your valuable likes and comments ...

Will be waiting ...

Silent readers plz comment ...

Ps -: for pm buddy me 😆

Now bye

Love❤️

Akanksha !!

PS-: I HAVE STARTED A NEW FF ...NAJDIKIYAN

DO HAVE A LOOK !!😳

AHH itna cute update. ...

Fabulous update!!!

Awesome
Amazing
Superb update
Nandu ko manik aur manik ko srf nandu hi sambhal skte hai...donno ek dusre ka pain ka reason jaan na chahte hai...riya u r so cuteee...
Hahahaha qutb minar nyc name nandu pr manik ne sun liya tha...manik ne apna anger control kiya...lovd it...continue soon