Manan ff~Manik,nandini & their complicated love story EPILOGUE - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
plz...try to be least heartbreaking
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
Ok,i will try my best
here is the next chapter,m trying to update as many chapters as possible since i might be able to do so for the next few days,not sure anyways
the story is going to get a bit emotional now for nandini,but soon its gonna be fun so m requesting all the readers not leave this ff,plz do continue with it coz after 3-4 chapters its going to get really interesting

CHAPTER 4

NEXT MORNING
nandini and soha got ready for their first day at college,where soha was really excited about the first day and about meeting nandinis frnds,nandini on the other hand was equally scared and horrified about introducing soha to her frnds
NANDINIS POV
oh god,meri dosti ki raksha karna plz,bahut saalon baad mujhe dost milein hain jinhe ab main khona nai chahti hoon,plz god plz,keep soha away from my frnds especially manik,aap jo bologe main karoongi,plz plz plz
s:nano if u r done with ur pooja paath then can we leave?
n:yeah just one min,with this she ran towards her minions and kissed their photograph,lets leave
all the way to college nandini was having some kind of a negative feeling,as if something wrong is going to happen which she ignored thinking that probably she is overthinking
AT COLLEGE
mu:yaar yeh nano kahan reh gai hai,abhi tak aai nai
c:shant mukti shant,aa jayegi
m:waise its for the first time that nandu is late,i hope everything is fine
mu:hawww,agar uska accident ho gaya hoga toh?kahin uski tabiyat toh kharab nai?NANO WHERE R U?
n:m right behind u mukti
mu:nano ur here,with this she ran and hugged her
m:thank god ur safe
al:waise nandini,first day of college aur tumne yeh pehna hua ha?said aliya luking at nandini who was wearing a black capri,pinl sandals and pink top with awesome written on it
n:haan toh,aliya u know na i dont like dressing up,aaj toh fir yeh pehn liya otherwise i was gonna wear a pajayma
c:and thats the reason y we luv u
n:thanks cabir,waise for a change aaj insaan lagrre ho,naha kar aaye ho kya?cabir faked a crying face while everyone laughed on his tactics
s:OMG,i cant believe yeh tumhare frnds hai nano,i mean i didnt expect u to make such cool luking frnds
sohas comment dropped nandini's face while the rest of the fab4 and abhi burned with anger,among such emotions there was one emotion unknown to others,and it was an emotion of shock
MANIK'S POV
OMG,yeh hai nano ki sis,she is so beautiful,i have never seen such a beautiful girl in my life,if only i knew nandini had such hot beautiful sis,oh god,whats happening to me,waise baat toh galat thi,i mean if compared nandini does luk cool like us
what?manik have gone mad?yeh kya bolra hai
mu:what do u mean by that sentence
s:i meant that...ki ...ki ..
c:waise usne galat toh nai bola,i mean nandini making frnds like us is a bit strange
NANDINIS POV
i knew this,i knew that soha will cast such magic on my frnds,i knew once again she will take away all my frnds,but out of everyone i didnt expect cabir to say that
al:cabir wth r u saying
abhi:yeah cabir kya bolra
d:buddy r u out of ur mind
c:arre mujhe complete toh karne do,i meant an awesome girl like nandini being frnds with crazy mad ppl like us,does not make sense,plus,nano ke frnds toh minion hone chahiye thhey na,haina my cute little minion,said cabir pulling nandini's cheek while her face lit up with joy
mu:waise yeh toh sahi hai
m:waise nandu u never told us u had such a beautiful sis
mniks comment broke nandinis heart into pieces,she understood what that feeling meant which she hadduring morning
soha on the other hand was on cloud9,recieving such a comment from a greek god like manik was something she could die for
while the rest of the members were busy staring at manik with disbelief a pair of eyes caught hold of the changing hurt to normal expressions of nandini,and those eyes were of no one else but cabir
CABIRS POV
voila!!!!!finally pata chal hi gaye nandini ke feelings,first stage achieved
s:and she is never told me she had such a hot frnd
MANIKS POV
hot!she called me hot,she finds me hot,yuhooo!!!!!!
soha's comment gave another shock to the already shocked fab4 and abhi
s:umm,by the way m soha,and then nandini intro soha to everyone
m:lets go and check the time table na
c:umm tu ja soha ke saath ham yahin hain
before anyne could protest soha dragged manik out of the scene
n:umm guys woh mujhe ek call karna hai main do min mein aati hoon
mu:wth cabir,whats wrong with u,tune uss soha ko manik ke saath kyu bheja,nandini ko bhejna thana
c:isiliye bheja ,pointing towards nandini who had a completely flushed face
al:mtlb?
c:mtlb yeh ki nano ka chehra dekho,it completely shows how hurt she is seeing manik with soha which means
abhi:that she do have feelings for manik
d:mtlb stage 1 complete
c:yeah
with this they had a grp hug

precap:navya's entery,jealous hurt nandini,fab4&abhi to her rescue

{guys in my story navya is a modern girl who lives in delhi but belongs to patna and cabir is not gay}
Edited by deepanksha - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
awesome...
awesomeee...
awesommmeee...
story... awesome concept... loved it .plzzz update next part...waiting egarly 🥺
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
Awesome
Love your story
Pls pls keep that soha away from manik
Will b waiting for your next update
Take care and keep smiling :-)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
awesome update...
hate soha for always underestimating nandu...
manik is out of his mind thinking soha is hot...
hopefully manan get together soon...
keep up the god work and continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
i lyk ur story...
emotional n jealousy n everything is awesome
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
plz cont soon...and pm me also
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
pls
upate fast naa
it one of the best story
and pls manik and soha like seriously
jaldi se manik ko bhi pata chale na abt his feelings fo our innocent nano
cute nickname
muhhhaaa
yar pls send pm to me
plls
and update sooonnn
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thanq so much for liking my ff,this is my first ff and i was not very sure if it could please u all,but m glad to see my efforts being appretiated
i just wanted to inform u all that day after tmrw is my psychology test and i have done absolutely nothing in it and m probably going to fail,so there is a possiblity that i wont update the further chapters for 2 days,though the possibility is really rare but i thought its my responsibility to inform u all

here is the next chapter
CHAPTER 5
nandini was aimlessly walking and was requesting god to make this all a dream but to her horror even after turning her hand red after pinching it for millions time nandini realized it wasnt a dream
NANDINI POV
god,why,y do u this to me hamesha,y,y do u always give what i wanted in life to soha,y,dont u lov,no u dont,i know,abhi toh sirf manik,aur fir sab soha ke fan ho jayenge,i know,i have seen this all my life,i hate my life,i hate myself,cudnt have u made me a bit beautiful,kya ho jata haan,oh yeah,meri saari wishes puri jo ho jati,u toh just to see me happy
what nandini failed to realize was that she was already so beautiful,not just from the outside but from the inside too,and this beauty would be the reason of many of her wishes coming true in the near future.she was lost in her thoughts when she bumped into a girl and all the books in her hand fell down
navya:sorry sorry sorry,mujhe maaf kardo plz,actually i m in a hurry,m late for my class
n:its ok and dont worry class ko abhi time hai
nav:thank god,mujhe toh lagra tha ki pehle din hi late ho jaongi,oh btw m navya,navya joshi
n:hi m nandini vashishth,nice to meet u
nav:same here,waise tum bhi nai ho?
n:yes
nav:aaj pakka mere din achha hai,ghuste hi frnd ban gai,warna i was really worried ki kya hoga,waise tumhare subjects kya hai?
nandini told her subjects which very much were like hers,only 1 subject was diff which luckily fab4&navya had
fab5&abhi had same subjects with only nandini's and manik's subjects being diff
n:come i'll intro u to my frnds,unke bhi same subjects hai,tum akele nai rehogi
nav:thanks
NANO,FAB4&ABHI
n:guys meet navya,she is also a fresher and has the exactly same sub as u all so be with her ok
nav:hey everyone
fab3&abhi:hi
n:cabir,where r ur manners dude,greet her
cabir who was busy in his mobile luked up to greet navya but soon found his eyes glued to her,his jaw dropped and he was shamelessly starring her
CABIRS POV
yeh kya horra hai bhagwan,main toh apne manan ki kahani set karne ki sochra tha aur ab toh aisa lagra hai ki meri hi kahani set ho jayegi
best day of my life
where fab3&abhi were busy deciphering the reason behind cabirs weird behaviour nandini noticed his shameless eyes which were just not ready to leave navya
NANDINIS POV
hey bhagwan yeh kya hua,ek shock kaafi nai tha jo ab yeh,but m happy,abhi tak at least yeh to achha hua,hmmm...my dear cabir,ab teri kahani toh main set karke hi rahoongi
n:cabir,said nandini shaking him,kya hua???
c:kkkya kya hua,huh,kuchh bhi toh nnai
n:haan woh toh dikhra hai whispered nandini
c:kya kuchh bola tune
n:haan woh main yeh bolri thi manik aur soha abhi pahuche nai
if only nandini knew that her statement woke up the teasing cabir who was now in all mood to trouble her,he gestured the rest of the grp and said
c:haan waise aaye nai abhi tak,aisa bhi kya karre hai dono
mu:waise jab soha aai toh manik ka chehra dekha,kaise chamak utha tha,i think they will make a grt pair
al:yeah even i believe this
abhi:lets get them together na
d:haan buddy bhi kab tak single rahega
with this the grp enjoyed nandinis red face and her hand which had curved into a fist,but what they thought of to be jealousy was rather hurt,they failed to see the tears welling up in her eyes which she was trying hard to control from falling down
c:haan,tera kya kehna hai nano
n:cabirs question fell like thunder on nandini,she didnt know how to respond coz she knew one word from her mouth and the tears will make their way through her eyes
nav:nano,wow what a cool name
navya's comment brought cabir back to his romeo mood and nandini was saved from answering anything,till then manik&soha returned
m:umm guys soha aur mere sub same hain toh hamara abhi toh koi class nai hai,rahi tumhari baat toh tum logo ki abhi class hai so bbye,with this manik turned to leave when mukti called him
mu:aur tum dono kahan jarre ho?
m:woh hamari class nai hai toh ham college explore karne jarre hain,btw yeh kaun hain
maniks words"ham college explore karne jarre hain"didnt only hurt nandini but the whole of the gang,since skultimes they hav been doing things together and today manik didnt even bother about them,it hit them so hard that they completely ignored about his question
seeing no one answering navya answered on her own
nav:hi,m navya
m:oh nice to meet u navya
with this soha once dragged manik away holding his hand knowing that 2 min more and thier gang wud have exploded
all this was too much for nandini to handled so excused herself and headed towards the wash room where as navya went to attend a call
mu:W*FH was that,woh aise kaise jaa sakta hai,hamare bina?
al:iguys i think manik is very much serious about soha
d:even m afraid that its true
c:for now,but i know maniks solace lies with nano,abhi kuchh mat karo,apne aap samjhega woh,agar ham samjhayenge toh zidd mein aake aur nai sunega
abhi:i think cabir is right,but we all know manik,bina koi blunder kiye usse kuchh samajh nai aata,i just hope woh kuchh aisa na kar jaye jo nano ko todh de
c:hmm,and we need to keep an eye on this soha,kehne ko hai toh nano ki behan parr usse completely opposite hai
then navya returned and they decided to get nano and head for their class

precap:manik-soha fiasco,fab5,abhi&nano shock,navya to become a part of their plan to bring manan close
Edited by deepanksha - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
Please update.. waiting and waiting for the chapter..
My favourite part is the nickname "Nano" and Minions.. ba ba ba ba ba banana.. sooo cute
And that Soha I really wish to rip her off..
Why our Nano is like this.. why she let soha rule over her.. jabki fact is that Nano is super duper talented..
Plz reveal nandini's qualities.. and let everyone specially manik see that nandu kya cheez hai..


P.s- this ff is getting in my mind.. I should be studying now but instead I'm waiting for the update

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