Manan SS: Always Yours (( EPILOGUE: PG 91 )) 24 Oct (PMs later)

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shubhshash

@shubhshash

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Posted: 9 years ago

#541

Hii...I read yur story I one go...n I must sae the story line is incredible...its super duper awesome...

I loved it...

U r an awesome writer dear...

I am soo happy that u kept manan together without any seperation drama...

Nw waiting fr mukbhi to reunite...I knw its nt easy fr mukti...she is really hurt...😭

N I also want fab5 back with a bang n I hope it happens...

N the teaser ohhh god...mukti is really gonna burst...

Continue soon. ...

Take care!!😊😊

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AAVANI

@vani86

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Posted: 9 years ago

#542

awesome teaser
scenes r gonna be intense...
mukti is surely gonna burst...two shocks...!!! oho
eagerly waiting for ur update
thanks a lot for the pm
stay blessed

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Mamiza

@kitkat5756

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Posted: 9 years ago

#543

Omg jhatka Wala update tha ... Plz update jaldi jaldi ...mujhse rula nahi ja raha hain parne mein ...love u ...tc...with lots of love and hugs

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Isha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#544

Originally posted by: kitkat5756
Omg jhatka Wala update tha ... Plz update jaldi jaldi ...mujhse rula nahi ja raha hain parne mein ...love u ...tc...with lots of love and hugs

Haha awww. Thoda sa wait karolo bas. :*

Edited by Ishaaaaaa - 9 years ago

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Isha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#545

Originally posted by: shubhshash
Hii...I read yur story I one go...n I must sae the story line is incredible...its super duper awesome...
I loved it...
U r an awesome writer dear...
I am soo happy that u kept manan together without any seperation drama...
Nw waiting fr mukbhi to reunite...I knw its nt easy fr mukti...she is really hurt...😭
N I also want fab5 back with a bang n I hope it happens...
N the teaser ohhh god...mukti is really gonna burst...
Continue soon. ...
Take care!!😊😊

I just loveee long comments :')

Thanks a ton! <3 keep showering your love :D

Will update tonight :)

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Isha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#546

Originally posted by: divtan

Multi is shattered..
She is in a vulnerable state..
She is bound to react a little differently !!
She will take time and with love and care she will be normal ! :)
Okk...u hav teased enough ;) :P
Update bhi jaldi dena :D :)

"You have teased enough " hahahahaha. Really like this line xD

Will update tonight :*

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cutypie04

@cutypie04

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Posted: 9 years ago

#547

Awesome promo dea. ...

Update soonnn

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shubhshash

@shubhshash

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Posted: 9 years ago

#548

Originally posted by: Ishaaa

I just loveee long comments :')
Thanks a ton! <3 keep showering your love :D
Will update tonight :)

so if this is the thing...I promise I wull always comment lamba...😊

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Isha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#549

CHAPTER 11:

Druv came forward and hugged him really tight.
He then held his shoulders and said "I just can't believe it..tu yahan kaise?"

Alya: Manik... she hugged him aswell.

He then looked at Mukti who was still shocked. He himself went upto her and held her hand "kuch nahi bolegi mukti?"
Tears had already taken over her eyes. She just pounced into his arms and cried out really loud.
Manik's heart again tore into pieces. He felt the most guilty person in the entire world.. He made his friends cry. How...how could be do?

Mukti was still crying in his arms. Alya and Druv came up to them and hugged them.

This group hug was somethingelse. It was magical. It was as if they were trying to heal each other..as if erasing each other tears..as if making up for all the times they died inside for each other...as if...recreating the magic of Fab5!!

Alya "Cabir hota toh bolta 'Bas karo ab kitna drama karoge'"

This made them all laugh and they broke the hug.

Manik wiped Mukti's tears and made her smile a bit.

Mukti: Where were you Manik?

This was it. The question that He knew would arouse different reactions. He was scared..scared how will they reach.

Nandini came forward and interupted "Mai bhi 4 saal baad aayi hun..mujhse nahi miloge?" She said with a cute baby face.

They all smiled and hugged her one by one.

Navya: Ab sab baatien khade khade hi karni hai? Arram se betth jao

They all settled themselves on the bed and beanbags.

Druv: Buddy..bol na..kahan tha tu?

Mukti: aur cabir? Wo bhi..hai na?

She chocked at her own words.

Manik looked at Nandini. She understood he was getting vulnerable.
But Manik had to do it. He had to tell them. It was time.

Manik: Guys vo actually
... ((tells them the entire story ))...

Alya: Manik...comaa? Omg! And look at us. Itna sab kuch ho gaya and we had no idea about it

(Nandini left and came back in 2 mins)

Druv: life bhi kaisi kaisi tragedies khelti hai naa..

They all were upset.

Mukti was numb. She got two shocks.
Firstly, that of Manik..and ABHIMANYU.

nandini: Mukti...vo..someone is here to meet you

She moved aside and Abhimanyu was standing behind her.

Things were happening too fast for them. For eveyone. But that's life...never in your hand.

Mukti couldn't say anything. She just didn't know how to react. Pehle Manik...and then Abhimanyu. She was shattered.

Mukti started clapping sarcastically and laughed a bit.

Mukti: Bravo!! BRAVO! (She yelled)

Everyone was shocked at her reaction.

Mukti: kitna easy hai na? I mean it's so easy for both of you na? Kabhi bhi walk in..kabhi bhi walk out?
welcome back abhimanyu! (she had a big sarcastic smile on her face while she spoke) ab kitne dinno ke liye ayye ho?
Mukti ke pass jaunga, thode din rahunga..and then kya? Jab maan karega chala jaunga. Haina?

Abhimanyu : mukti its not like that..

Mukti: dont you even!! (She shut him down) mai toh koi soft toy hun na? No feelings. No attachment?

And manik? Tu? (She now turned towards him)
Tu kabse iske jaisa ho gaya haan? Tu kabse itna selfish ho gaya?
3 saal tu coma mein tha...but what about one year han? Tu willingly alag raha humse? Haan..bol?

Nandini kept her hand on Mukti's shoulder to calm her down. Mukti jerked it.

Mukti: i know..i know you won't have any answers. Because there is no bloody answer for it!! (She again yelled)

Manik had nothing in defence. He understood mukti was frustrated..she needed to get it out. So he let her speak!

Mukti: Forget it. It's useless talking about it. You know what? (She took at abhimanyu ) I'm serious done with all this now. I'm so so sooo done!!

She was leaving when abhi held her fingers just as she was passing.

Abhimanyu : I'm sorry.

That was all he could say. He knew he was at fault.

Mukti just said in a low voice between her tears "Its too late to apologise..its too late!"

And she left.

"Mukti wait!" Alya ran behind her. And so did druv.

Abhimanyu wanted to cry out aloud. He too left.

"hum abhimanyu ke peeche jatte hai..tum yahan manik ke sath raho" Navya told Nandini and left.

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Background music.
Violen tone.

((PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE LISTEN TO LEHREIN - AISHA. YOU'LL FEEL THIS 10 TIMES MORE THEN, PLEASE))

Khoyi khoyi si hoon main
Kyun yeh dil ka haal hai
Dhundli saari khwaab hai
Ulja har khayaal hai

(Mukti came running to the terrace, knelt down and cried aloud. Her sobs were echoing on the roof. She was shattered )

Saari kaliyan murja gayi
Rang unke yaadon mein beh gaye
Saare gharaande reet ke
Lehrein aayi, lehron mein beh gayi

(She blamed herself, her life. It was such a mess. She never wanted to shout on Manik and abhi..they were her life. She screamed at her life. She...she just didn't know what to do..she knew abhi was wrong. Yet she wanted to be with him. But she couldn't sacrifice herself again. That's how love is maybe? Overrides alll mistakes of the partner)

Kya kahun kyun yeh dil udaas hai
Ab koi door hai na paas hai
Choo le jo dil woh baatein ab kahan
Woh din kahan raatein ab kahan
Jo bhi dhakhal hai ab khawab sa
Ab dil mera hai betaab sa

(Alya and Druv came running behind her. Alya hugged her and she cried like a baby. Druv rubbed mukti's back to console her)

Saari kaliyan murja gayi
Rang unke yaadon mein beh gaye
Saare gharaande reet ke
Lehrein aayi, lehron mein beh gayi, beh gaye

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Manik didn't say anything. He was still. No crying no voice nothing! It was as if his life had stopped.

Nandini just hugged him tight. She kept her head on his heart and closed her eyes.

"Manik I know it's all really tough for you. You're a fighter ok? Yeh phase naa...this time it'll all pass. Sab thiek ho jayega. " she said still hugging him.

He was still standing straight ( not hugging her)

"Manik? " Nandini looked up waiting for his response. He was looking up he wasn't looking at her.

She tiptoed on his feet. He held her waist so that she doesn't fall.
She kissed him on his eyes and wispered a "I'm always there for you, humesha" in his eyes.
He looked at her finally. She could clearly see how broken he was. He hugged her back at last.

"Nandini sab pehle jaisa ho jayega na? Please bolo haan. I can't live without them." He said in a pleading tone.

Nandini was ruffling his hear while being in his embrace "haan manik. I promise sab thiek hoga!"

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Abhimanyu went to the balcony.

He was having a flashback. How he entered space. How he meet mukti in the hospital. How slowly slowly she started falling for him. Holi party, valentines day. How he had to walk away. And mukti's words were ecoing in his ears. He was drowning in the pool of memories.

Someone suddenly gave him a glass of water. He turned around to find navya.

He wiped his tears and smiled.

Navya: Rehne do. Zabardasti smile karne ke zaroorat nahi hai

He kept quiet and looked away

Navya: I missed you abhi

Abhi: I missed you all too!

Navya: par humme abhimanyu wapas chaiye

Abhimanyu gave a confused expression.

Navya: Jiss abhimanyu ko hum jante hai wo humesha khush rehta tha. And sabko khush rakhta tha.

Abhimanyu : Ha! Mai wahi hun navya

Navya : vo abhimanyu kabhi haar nahi manta tha. Aur tum kya soch rahe ho?

Abhimanyu took a deep breath and said "Vo sahi hai navya. She is right. I have no rights to even apologise. I treated her like a toy. Mai...mai mukti ke liye sahi ladka nahi hun!"

Navya: bas ek baar usne tumne thoda push kya kiya you're giving up?
Kabhi socha ki tum usse chod ke gaye and how she kept trying

Abhimanyu felt guilty and lowered his gaze.

Navya stepped forward and kept her hand on his.

Navya: Dekho abhimanyu, mukti bahaut sensitive hai. Tum himmat mat haro. Agar tumhara pyaar sacha hai toh vo zaroor maan jayegi. Tum usse realise karwao you won't leave her again. Baaki sab mata rani pe chord vo. Vo acche logon ke sath kabhi bura nahi hone degi.

Abhimanyu looked at her emotionlessly. He was feeling better, but guilt wasn't going anywhere.

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((Imagine screen being divided into three parts.
Alya hugging mukti and druv consoling mukti. MaNan hugging. Navya with Abhi giving him confidence))

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Phew! Long update + quick update. Yaaay. ;)

This is personally one of my most favourite updates. It's soo emotional. :')

Also, shows how people who love you will always help you put all your broken pieces together. ;)

Do comment. Takes a lot of efforts to write long updates. Please do comment. :) I'm really expecting a spectacular response.

Love,
Isha :*