*| ROYAL BUT DISLOYAL FATE |* a FF. IMPORTANT NOTE. Pg 85.. - Page 3

Eee Loved it !!
Manik ki entry kb h?
Update soon and pm if u can ;)

Originally posted by: manya_189

Eee Loved it !!
Manik ki entry kb h?
Update soon and pm if u can ;)

He will come thoda Sa late.. N vese bhi heroes Ki entry toh late hi hoti h.. ;)

Superb update
The story looks very interesting
Continue soon please

IMPORTANT NOTE: I didn't want to update cauz I didn't get the expected response. Many of u r just liking the post n some of them r even not doing that. As a writer, it hurts. Its my first story so I want feedback, be it good or bad. If u don't like anything tell, If u loved something, plz tell that too.. N If u have any suggestions. They r also always welcomed. But plz cmment n let me know that u guys liked or not. I respect those who r commenting, but I will not be able to work on this story of I didn't get a good response! Thanks for reading! 😊
Now, here is the update..

Chapter 1(b):

| AUSTRALIA |

"Navya! I just can't believe this !! Me bina bodyguards ke mall me ghum rhi hun! Mera last day Australia me bahut memorable rhega.", Nandani said flashing a big smile. "True that. Mata rani Ki kasam Hme bhi na un bouncers ko dekh ke na bahut gussa Ata tha.!!", Navya said. Nandani was about to say something when her phone started ringing. She saw the caller ID and was surprised. Navya asked who is it. She said, "Why is lady don calling me at this time? Vo is tym kbhi call Ni krti..". Then Nandani realised something. Navya said, "Kya tym bhi vhi soch rhi Ho jo hm soch rhe h?". "Navya yr yeh bouncers toh Kuch zyada hi fast nikle unhone itni jldi kese Rani Maa ko btadia (Nandani calls Meenakshi Rani Maa)..", Nandani said. "Ab kya kre?", Navya said. Nandani said, "Kya kya kre? M not going to pick up her call. Unhe Jo krna h kre.. Lekin aj ka din me unki vajah se spoil Ni krne wali!". Navya asked her, "U sure?". "Damn sure! Ab tu Jake yeh dress try krke aa. It will suit you!", came the reply from Nandani.

After 2 hours of shopping, both came out of the shopping mall. As soon as Navya saw the car, she shouted, "Not again! M not going to sit with you." Nandani said keeping their shopping bags in the car, "Kya yrr Navya! Drame na Kr chup chap bethja !!"
"Agr hm abhi tumhare Beth gye na toh kl Kisi ke sath bethne ke layk Ni rhenge.. Tum toh Mata rani ke pas pahunchakr hi rhogi hme.. Mall tk gadi chalakr tum jese layi Ho na.. Jaan hi nikal di thi tumne hmari !!"
Nandani sits in the car and said, "Navya tumhe bethna h betho vrna me ja rhi hun!!"
"Acha baba thk h.. But plz try to driver like humans."
"When u know that u r getting freedom for the last time in ur life, is better to enjoy it to the fullest!", Nandani said.

They went to Lisa's house to get ready for the party! Nandani wore a simple but sexy white short dress with her hairs open and light make- up. She was looking stunning. Navya wore a blue knee length dress which Nandani has chosen. They were about to go when Nandani's phone again started ringing. Nandani was busy with her hairs so she asked Navya to check her phone. She said, "Navya see na! Who is calling? Is it lady don again?" Navya saw caller ID n saw Nandani nervously. Nandani asked her again, "Who is it?" Navya replied, "Ma.. Madhyam!"
Nandani sighed n said, "Mera din acha ja rha Ho or yeh kharab na kre.. Aisa toh kbhi Ho Ni skta.. Don't pick up the call!". Then Madhyam called at Navya's number. "You need not to pick up the call Navya.", Nandani said. Navya said, "Don't worry! I will talk to him." She picked up the call.
"Tumhari friend ko phone uthane me aakhir problem kya hoti h?", Madhyam said as soon as Navya picked up the call.
"Vo actually hm abhi ek party ke liye ja rhe h.. N Nandani is getting ready so baad Me call Kr lena..", Navya replied.
"N u think Ki Madhyam Singhania will wait for her. Right? I know Vo wahin h phone speaker pe daalo."
"Hmme kahan na she is getting ready.. "
"I said turn on the speaker.", Madhyam said sternly and Navya had no choice but to do so. She turn on the speaker and said to Nandani who was checking herself in the mirror, "Nandani phone speaker pe h!". "Hello Princess! Ajkl kuch zyada hi parties Ni krne lg gyi tum.. I mean tumhe mujhse Milne Ki itni Khushi hai mujhe pta Ni tha.. ", Madhaym said.
"Why did u call?", Nandani asked coldly.
"I don't need any reason to call u bby! N vese bhi ab tumhe adat daal lene chahiye.. Because now that u r coming back, tum chahkr bhi mujhe ignore Ni Kr paugi!"
"Well, u know that m ignoring u but phr bhi tum mera peecha ni chod rhe.. Get a life Madhyam!"
Madhyam laughed n said, "Ab u noe na how much I love u.. Kese chod dun tumhara peecha..". Nandani rolled her eyes.
"Madhyam m getting late! Bye." Nandani said coldly n cut the call.
Navya said, "Sorry! I shouldn't have picked up the call. Sara mood kharab hogya na.. ". "Navya ready hojao jldi.. Hm late Ho rhe h.. ", Nandani replied.


| RAIGARH |

"Phone uthaya usne?", Meenakshi asked fuming with anger. "Nahi! Busy aa rha h.. ", Mahesh replied nervously. "Yeh ladki kbhi Ni sudhregi.. Phele hmara phone uthaya Ni.. Or ab pta Ni kis se baat kr rhi h..". "Mummy ji ap shan't hojaiye bchi h.. Glti hogyi us se..", Shanno tried to defend Nandani. "Bchi Ni h Vo ab!! Or galti ek baar hoti h.. Baar baar Ni..!", Meenakshi barked. "Lekin.. ", Meera interrupted Shanno n said, "Ni Shanno, Galti Ki h Nandani ne.. Use is tarah Ni jaana chahiye the.. Use pta hona chahiye that it's not safe." "If u all say toh me ek baar wahan ke chief se baat Kr leta hun..", Mahesh suggested. "Ni, koi zarurat Ni h.. Infact Kisi Ko bhi pta Ni chalna chahiye Ki Nandani bina bodyguards ke ghum rhi h.. Or Singhania's tk toh yeh baat bilkul Ni pahunchani chahiye.. Or phone try krte rho Nandani ko aur agr Vo uthale toh hme bta Dena..", Meenakshi said. Meera nodded. Meenakshi went upstairs.
"Yeh nandu bhi na! Kesi harkate krti h.. Aise Ni Jana chahiye tha use!!", Meera said. "Bhabi ap chinta Mt kro, hmari nandu me thoda bchpana h.. Lekin Vo samajhdaar h..", Mahesh said. "Han Bhabi, nandu apna dhyan rkhlegi.. Ap chinta Mt kro..", Shanno tried to pacify Meera.

| RAIGANJH |

The scene starts from when Nandani cuts Madhaym's call. Madhyam was smirking looking at the phone. "Ek baar vapis aajao! Phr na tum mere phone kaat paogi.. Or na mujhe ignore Kr paungi.. CAUSE U DON'T HAVE ANY OTHER OPTION PRINCESS!". Then only Alisha came to his room n saw him stairing at his phone. "Kis se baat Kr rhe the beta?", She said sitting on the bed near him. He kept his head on her lap n said, "Apki hone wali bahu se!". Alisha eyes sparkled. She asked, "Acha kya baat Kr rhe the?" "Vo toh Mt hi pucho ap..", Madhaym muttered. Alisha asked, "Kuch kaha tumne?" Madhyam got up from her lap n sat in front of her n said, " Me bs yhi keh rha than Ki kuch khas baat Ni hui.. Bs aise hi.. " "Ab Madhyam apko kyu btayega badi mumma Ki Vo Nandani se kya baat Kr rha tha.. Kyu Madhyam?", Cabir came into room saying this. "Are Cabir tum..!", Alisha was surprised seeing him. "Bad manners Cabir! Bina knock kiye aise room me ghusna.. Tch tch tch.. Galat baat.." Madhyam said. Alisha hit Madhyam playfully n said, "Madhyam, bhai h Vo tera! Jb mrzi Vo tere room me ghus skta h.. Samajh me aya.. ( looking at Cabir) tum betho baatein kro is se.. Me abhi ati hun."
"What's up Cabir? Aj mere room me kese..?", Madhyam asked Cabir. "Kyu aa Ni skta? Kuch baat krni thi tujhse..", Cabir said.
"Nandani ke baare me... Ryt?"
Cabir smiled and said, "Ya right! Ab Vo vapis aa rhi h Madhyam.. N I think ab hme seriously is baare me baat krleni chahiye.. "
Madhyam was least interested in his talks because he knew what exactly Cabir was taking about.. Cabir continued, "Tum dono ka roka Raigarh Ki safety ke liye Hua tha Madhyam.. Or koi reason Ni tha.. Na tum us se pyar krte Ho.. Or nahi Vo tumse.. Or nahi ab Raigarh ko safety Ki zarurat h.. Don't u think Ki tumhe bade papa or badi mumma se is bare me baat krleni chahiye.."
Madhyam laughed evilly n then said dramatically, "Aww mere bhai.. Kitni chinta h na tumhe apni bachpan Ki dost Ki.. Or tumhe kisne kaha I don't luv hr.. I luv her so much yr Ki me uske bina jee bhi Ni skta.."
"M serious Madhaym! Is rishte se na tumhe koi Khushi milegi na use.."
Madhaym cut him in between n said sternly, "Oh plz Cabir! Tujhse mene kitni baat kaha h Ki meri personal life me interfere krne Ki zarurat Ni h.. Yeh rishta toh hoke rhega chahe tu kuch bhi krke.."
"Tu achi tarah se janta h MANIK AUR NANDANI ke baare me.. Phr bhi.."
Madhyam laughed and said, "Cabir seriously? Tujhe lgta h 6 saal phele Jo bhi Hua uske baad Manik or Nandani ke beech kuch Ho skta h.. Common man! Come out of ur dream land!! N vese bhi agr indono ke beech kuch hota bhi na.. Tobhi Nandani has no choice except to marry me.. So sapne dekhna band Kr Cabir."
Cabir smiled n said, "Yahi toh Teri galatfehmi h mere bhai.. But u will soon realize Ki me kya kehna chahta tha..". Cabir got up n was about to go but stopped at the door n ka, "Or jahan tk Manik aur Nandani ki sawaal h na toh VO DONO CHAHKR BHI EK DOOSRE SE DOOR NI REH PAYENGE!". Madhaym just rolled his eyes at Cabir's statement.

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Don't forget to comment guys.. Caus I want response! Then only I will continue this story !!

Awesome..
U have updated just two chapters.. And that too without Manik.. First update few chapters and make it more interesting.. Then see whether people like it or not.. Don't mind!

Hey I just love part 1 B :)
It was just awesome
Cont soon
Ps when nandani will back to india na then make her come in short clothes I want to see others reaction
Just a suggestion

Originally posted by: suraiya77

Awesome..
U have updated just two chapters.. And that too without Manik.. First update few chapters and make it more interesting.. Then see whether people like it or not.. Don't mind!

No, it's completely fine. I just wanted to know that hows it going.. People r liking it or not. U see it's my first ever story.. Toh thoda Sa feedback chahiye tha.. But its k.. I will follow ur advice.. 😊

Originally posted by: Nitika27

Hey I just love part 1 B :)
It was just awesome
Cont soon
Ps when nandani will back to india na then make her come in short clothes I want to see others reaction
Just a suggestion

She is modern only. Don't worry! They r Royals that means elite class, so here Nandani will wear western clothes only.. 😊

So, here is last part of first chapter. Enjoy! But after reading, plz answer the question asked at last. 😊

Chapter 1(c):

<font size="4">| AUSTRALIA |</font>

"The party was fun na?", Navya asked throwing herself on the bed. "Tu party chod! Or mujhe apne surprise ke bare me bta!! Kl se u were saying Ki Tujhe mujhe koi surprise Dena h..", Nandani said taking out her earrings. "Han Han late h tumhara surprise. Wait!". Navya returned with a big suitcase. "Navya! Yeh suitcase! Yeh suitcase tha tumhara surprize? Like seriously?? For ur kind information, I have already packed all my stuff! Mujhe Ni chahiye yeh!", Nandani said irritatingly. "Toh kisne kaha yeh tumhara h?"
"Mtlb?"
"Matlb yeh hmara suitcase h.. Hmne apne kpde pack kiye h isme.."
"Apne kapde pack kiye h mtlb? Mene kaha tha na tumse Ki tum mere Jane ke baad yahan reh skti Ho aram se.. It's my farmhouse only.. Phr?"
"Yahan toh hm tb rhenge na.. Jb hm Australia me honge.."
Now, Nandani's patience was giving up, she stood up and asked irritatingly, "Navya kya bole ja rhi Ho..?? Spill the beans.. Kahan ja rhi Ho tum??"
Navya replied cheerfully, "Hm ja Ni, aa rhe h.. Vo bhi tumhare sath!!"
"What !!!!??", Nandani couldn't believe her ears. She was convincing Navya from the past two months to come to Raigarh with her. But Navya was not paying any heed to her. "Mtlb! Kb? Kese? Achanak se? Tum.."
"Nandu! Nandu! Nandu! Achanak se hui cheez ko hi toh surprise kehte h!"
"Mtlb tum jaan buchke meri baat Ni maan rhi thi taki tum last day mujhe surprise de sko?"
"Yo! So hows was it?", Navya asked cheerfully.
"Abhi btati hun me Tujhe.." N by saying this Nandani hit Navya by a cushion. "Acha bachu! Abhi btate h hm tumhe.. " Navya also hit Nandani with the cushion. N by this both indulged into pillow fight. Both fell onto bed when no cushion was left n started laughing like maniacs. Whole room had become a mess.. With feathers all around. Then Nandani instantly hugged Navya n said, "Thanks. Thank u so much! I loved ur Surpize.. Now I will not be alone there. But hey! What about ur job?" "Toh hme tumhare Raigarh me job Ni milegi kya?" "Milegi na.. Kyu Ni milegi..", Nandani replied with teary eyes.

"HeyNandani! Kya Hua? Why r u crying?", Navya asked with concern. Nandani wiped her tears. "Naah! Kuch Ni.. Mujhe apne friends Ki yaad aa gyi.. Fab- 5 Ki yaad aagyi.. Cabir.. Mukti.. Dhruv.. Aur.." Nandani stopped in between. "Aur.. Manik na? Vobhi tha na tum logon ke group me? Tumne mujhe sb ke baare me bta rkha h.. Sivaye uske..",Navya asked. (Navya doesn't know what happened between Manik n Nandani years back.. She just know that she is in a forceful relationship with Madhyam n that's why she doesn't want to go back). "Navya! It's already too late.. I think hme so Jana chahiye.. U now kl hme Jana h.. So time se so Jana chahiye.. Me change krke ati hun..k..",Nandani tried to avoid the topic.

<font size="4">| RAIGARH |</font>

Meera knocked at Meenakshi's room. "Andr aajao Meera..", came a reply. "Nandani se baat hui?" "Ji.. Bs abhi Hi hui.. Vo thk h.. Farmhouse me safe h.. Bs sone hi ja rhi thi Vo" "Hmn.. Koi baat Ni.. Baki baat toh jb Vo ayegi hm us se khud hi krlenge.. Ab vakt aagya h Ki Vo apni zimmedariyan smjhe.. " "Mummy ji., Vo.." Meenakshi cut her in between, "Ni Meera, ab tum beech me Ni aogi.. Blki ab hm Nandani aur hmare beech me Kisi ko Ni bolne denge.. Vo 6 saal baad aa rhi h.. Or itna samay khafi hota h beeti baton ko bhulake age bdne ke liye.. Ab hm uski in harkaton ko aur Ni sahenge.. Ab Vo vhi kregi Jo uske or Raigarh ke liye thk hoga.. Aur ab tum bhi jakr sojao.. Kl bahut kaam h..". Meera sighed and left after wishing her good night. She knew what Meenakshi was saying, was right.. But her daughter is also right at her place. "Who will win this fight?", she thought.

<font size="4">| RAIGANJH |</font>

Madhyam was playing video game with loud music N our poor Aliya was not able to read even a book in her own room. "Bhai!! Apko mere room me hi kyu video games khelne hote h? Just go from here n let me live in peace!", Aliya said. "Toh tu chli ja yahan se! Me toh Ni Jane wala.. ", Madhyam spoke busy in playing his game.
Aliya stood up and turn off the game n said, "It's my room so Jana toh apko hi pdega !!"
Madhyam stood up and snatched the book which was in Aliya's Hand. "Bhai! Give it to me."
"Kyu bhyi? Kisne kaha tha meri game bnd krne ke liye.. ( looking at the book ) Or yeh tu kesi kesi boring si love story wali books pdti rehti h Han.."
"Look who's saying! Jiski khud Ki love story shuru hone wali h.."
"Haha.. Kyu Ni.."
"Vese bhai kl Nandani vapis aa rhi h.. Ap us se 6 saal baad Milne wale ho.. Kuch surprise plan kiya Ki Ni?"
"Surprise aur Mein?? (He laughed) Isliye kehta hun me yeh books vooks Mt pda Kr.. Tera dimag kuch zyada hi chalne lg jata h.."
"Arghh Bhai.. U so boring !! Poor Nandani! I seriously pity on her."
"Tum ldkiyan bhi na!! But don't worry.. Teri shaadi na hm gift store wale se krdenge.. So jitne gifts lene honge na.. Lelena!!"
"Bhaaaiii..!!!!!!"
Madhyam laughed n went out of the room.

"Surprise haan? Lgta h ab toh tumhare liye kuch plan krna hi pdega Nandani.. Can't wait to see u darling!", He thought and smiled wickedly.

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I Hope u liked the update. I know many of u are waiting for Manik's entry.. So I wanted to ask regarding that only. U want Manik's entry or Nandani's return to Raigarh in next update? Do tell me plz! 😊
And don't forget to give feedback of today's update! 😉

I read all the three chps in one go... And i found the stry interesting...