Manan ss - fireflies and stars are manan| PART-15ON PG-14

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musicalstars

@musicalstars

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

nice character sketch...but is rishabh also suffering from attacks like in the story...?? please tell as u dint mention about it...n continue soon...

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cutypie04

@cutypie04

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Nice

Continue soonnn

Do pm me nxt time

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ishikasharma

@ishikasharma

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

PART-1

the story revolves as..

Nandini is returning from usa to mumbai.. And fab 5 was for a concert in usa! They were also returning back to mumbai after the concert! Due to the bad weather condition the flight gets delayed. So they had to wait for the night in a hotel Nandini And fab 5 stay in the same hotel. So they all took there bags and decided to rest.. Manik was lying near the swimming pool gazing at the stars Nandini was passing by the pool and she accidentaly bumps onto manik due to manik's leg and falls on him they were lost in each other..! The cool breeze passed from there.. They were in their own world! Suddenly Manik's phone rings..and it was alya.. MaNan came to senses.!

Manik-(in irritated voice) Can u just get off me.

Nandini(gets up annoyingly)

Manik- are u blind dikhayi nahi deta tumhe..

Nandini-sorry i did not mean to.. It was by mistake i am sorry..! Why r u being so rude..

Manik- listen u just shut up!! '

Nandini and Manik move from there in opposite directions!!

after sometime manik came back for taking his phone as he forgot and he saw anklet lying near the pool , he picked that up and put it in his pocket

The next morning at the airport!! They are in a restaurant in the airport..

Nandini places her order and fab 5 too..

But by mistake their orders get misplaced and nandini goes and complains to the manager. He apologises to her and asks her to find Manik Malhotra..with whom her order got replaced.

. Nandini-oh god! where do i find him in such a big airport..

From other side Manik comes to complain manager

They bang!!

Manik- what the???

Nandini-Ouch!!

Manik-Not again you...

Nandini- oh this time it was your mistake..

The food falls down and nandu takes a step forward and slips but Manik gives her a hand..! and again they felt something which is very diffrent as they both know eachother from years .Slowly he pulls her up..!

They come back to real world!!

Manik- you better not mess up with Manik Malhotra ..you get that straight..!

Nandini- oh so meri order tumhare saath exchange ho gayi thi (in attitude)

Manik- so ur that dwarf..!! Nandini Murthy..

Alya watches that MaNan scene!! (when he was pulling her up)

Alya- what happened Manik and who the hell is she..??

Manik- Nothing..our order got misplaced with this.. Dwarf..( annoyingly)

Manik while going back turns and- please zindagi mein phir kabhi mat milna..

Nandu- move her face opposite to manik

Pls do tell ki kaisa hai we have done lots of of efforts

and if u can pls sread this story !!!

Edited by ishikasharma - 9 years ago

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kainatazhar

@kainatazhar

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

amazing ... it is just too good can't wait for the future updates lz update frequently and lengthy parts ... best of luck for the future updates and may Ur ff get all the success it deserves ...

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sharon.babu

@sharon.babu

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

awesome...loving this side of the story...

make manan meet again soon...

introduce other characters as well...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

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samreen

@Manansamkhan

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Amazing .

starting is good .
manan meeting n thr fight was cute ...

ab adaat si hogaie hai manan fight first meeting fights ki.

superb .
cont soon.

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priyasmiley

@priyasmiley

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

nyc update

love it

manan first meeting wth cute fightings

continue soon

keep smiling

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cutypie04

@cutypie04

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

fab update dea...

continue soonnn

tnx fr d pm

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ishikasharma

@ishikasharma

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: kainatazhar
amazing ... it is just too good can't wait for the future updates lz update frequently and lengthy parts ... best of luck for the future updates and may Ur ff get a
ll the success it deserves ...

Thank u so much dear it means alot

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ishikasharma

@ishikasharma

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: sharon.babu
awesome...loving this side of the story...
make manan meet again soon...
introduce other characters as well...
keep up the good work and continue soon...

Thank u. So much 😊

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