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Posted: 9 years ago
punishment for cabir n manik ...awesome
she wanna share his every pain true soulmate
ty for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb Update.
loved it.
MaNan convo was very nice.
bechara Manik kaise 1 din spend karega.
best of luck for ur exams
keep smiling
stay blessed.
lots of love
Purna
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Posted: 9 years ago
hello..dear..i'm first time ur updates its nice..bt why 5,6,7,8part is nt open...poz tell how to do...
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Posted: 9 years ago

awesome update...

loved it so much...

glad that nandu found out...

but the punishments for manik...are impossible to keep up...no hugs and no kisses...poor manik...how is he gonna survive...

can't wait to see what happens next...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome n a little bit emotional update
don't know why i was crying while reading d update, u really touch my heart in today's update coz it affect me a little
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oh finally d secret is out nandu know all d truth n c was feeling guily of not been able to b with him in his toughest time,
very lovely
manik was restless coz nandu was not talking to him,
so sweet
manik was laughing on cabir coz for d whole day he had to eat khirchri with water
lekin baat me pata chala uska punishment jyada tough tha- no kisses n huggie for a day hehe...
feeling bad for him
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eagerly waiting for d update
STAY BLESS
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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing ...

love it...

poor cabir whole nothing only water n khicdi ..

manik is manik ..

cont soon ..
stay blessed .
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow diyu...awesome update... Nandu ghussa with manik... Oh she came to know everything about nyonika... Hehe acche punishment mile hai cabir ko...bichaare manik no kiss and hugs its impossible... Let's see kitne der resist karenge dono... Continue soonish... Wow exam postponed ho gaye too good na you got more time to prepare for best...take care stay blessed
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update dear
Nandu knows everythings
Nandini give punishment to cabir...😃😃
Khichdi and Water
And mnik's punishment...
Its really funny
No kiss and hugs..
Waiting for the next part
take care dear😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey guys ...sorry didn't reply any of ur comments...well I have to prepare for my exams naa ...that's why ...and this is the reason of ur short updates too ...well am happy last chapter of this thread ...hope you guys like it...ENJOY😛

Part-17 (B)


Nandani smirkingly said:No huggies and kisses for today...

Manik was shocked by listening his ...punishment ...he just could utter only

Manik shockingly said: what?

She placed her hands on her chest and smirkingly said

Nandani : Yes ...no huggies and kisses for today

Manik looked at nandani in shock ...

Manik pov :

how on the earth am i going to survive without hug and kiss ...no ...no ...this can't be possible ...

he was just looking at her without blinking ...she is about to go but Manik held her wrist and said

Manik : u r joking right?

He couldn't believe ...like nandini said all this ...

Nandani seriously said : am not ...

Manik horrifiedly said : u can't be serious ...

Nandani : well am hell serious about it ...

Manik : how can you say that

Nandani : well the way u hide it for me ...so I can do this much right

He knows she was right ...but this punishment was too much for him ...

Manik : Shona look naa koi aur punishment de do ..ha main cabir ke jaise kicchadi kha lunga ...in fact tum kaho toh voh bhi nahi ...par baby yeh nahi ...u knew naa I can't live without you for a second...acha ek kaam karo I will not kiss you but please naa yaar hug ko allow kar do ...

He was pleading her ...nandani looked at him ...as he knows she melt with his puppy face ...but no this time she can't be weak ...he really needs a punishment ...after all he hides something from her

Nandani : Nope this is ur punishment ...

She left from there leaving horrifiedly manik...

Manik pov :

God what I did ...I should told her but now this punishment ...god punishment! ...how on the earth am going stay away from her ...no ...no ...kuch soch manik ...soch ...

He was moving here and there to think about what to do not to do? ...suddenly an idea strikes in his mind ...

Manik smilingly said : so Mrs. Malhotra ...as u said ...I can't hug u ...I can't kiss you ...but u can ...now I will see how u resist me ...

He said with a smirk on his face ...and went to washroom for freshen up ...and taking shower he saw nandani who was arranging breakfast for both of them in table ...he smirks and come towards her ...nandani saw him and said

Nandani :tum aa gaye come lets have breakfast ...

Manik : hmmm

He had a mischievous smirk ...that didn't go noticed by nandani ...but she kept mum ...nandani served him breakfast and about to sit on her chair ...but manik held her hand and pulled her towards him ...she instantly fall on his lap ...manik held her by her waist ...she stare at him angrily and said

Nandani : what was that?

Through manik was enjoying but innocently said : what ?

Nandani was is like "O" Shape ...manik saw this

Manik pov :
God why she making these faces ...I soo wanted to kiss her ...but no manik ...control ...control ...

And back with the innocent mode...

Nandani angrily said : what ? Like Scriously u remember u r the one who pulled me ...towards u ...and bcz of that I fall in ur lap

Manik : so?

Nandani shoutedly said : so matlab u should apologies naa ...u can't kiss me or hug me ...remember ur punishment ...

Manik smirkingly said : well I remember everything but u forgot shona ...u r saying I can't kiss you or hug u ...but I can touch u ...I can held ur hand ...I can pull u like this ...u knew ...

Nandani is looking at him in disbelief ...she just couldn't believe ...she is staring at him ...

Manik smirkingly said : hey don't stare okay ? I knew am hot but u knew u can't kiss me ...well I don't mind but u knew naa ... my punishment ...

She again makes a oO shape face ...but manik filled her mouth in food ... she couldn't utter anything ...both were having there breakfast together ...both feeds each other lovingly ...after sometime both finished their breakfast ...she is about to get up but manik holds her hand ...she again falls ...

Nandani angrily said: Manik

But manik ignored it ...he was busy nuzzling his nose in her neck ...his hands traveled on her back ...nandani was having a very tough time to control ...she just couldn't able to speak ...but said

Nandani : M..M..an..ik...

Manik who was enjoying nandani's condition but control his laughter and said

Manik : hmmm

Nandani : Ma..n..ik ...stop ...pl..ease

Manik smirks and said : stop what nandani ...

His hands were on her bare back that gives a shiver

Nandani : Manik please

Manik : Nandani am not hugging u ...not even kissing u ...then what should I stop ...

Nandani looked at him ...she understands what he trying to do ...

Nandani : I knew very well ...what are you trying to do ?

Manik smirks : oh really

Nandani : Really

Manik smirkingly said : Then let's do one thing ...if u hugged me naa ...then my punishment will be over ...

Nandani : fine ...but u knew it's not that easy ...it's almost impossible

Manik smirkingly said : I love to make impossible things to be possible ...

Nandani get up from his lap and left from there ...manik smirks ...it's being noon ...manik did nothing that bothering nandani ...he was just doing something in his phone ...

Nandani pov

Ese kya ho gaya ha ...why he is behaving like this ?kahi iska koi plan toh nahi ...nahi agar plan hota toh kuch toh action ya react karta ...

Nandani was in her deep thoughts
...suddenly she saw something that makes her scared ...she shouted

Nandani : aah..aaahhh...manik ...aaahhh

She shoutedly go and hugged him tightly and said

Nandani : Manik please ese bhagao ...please ...

Nandani saw rat ...well our manik malhotra hugged her shona tightly and said

Manik smilingly said : kaha ha rat shona

Nandani broke the hug and pointed towards the rat and saw it's a toy ...who looks like a natural one ...then at manik who was smirking ...she pushed him and about to go but Manik holds her both hands and pinned towards the wall and started kissing her madly ...nandani was so shocked to react ...she takes some time to realized what was happening ...manik bitted her lower lip and entered her mouth ...nandani to respond him ...manik smiled ...there tongues were mingled with each other ...there were fighting ...dancing...With other ...manik explore each corner of her mouth ...they were kissing each other with good 5 minutes ...now nandani was breathless ...manik broke the kiss ...both were panting heavily

Manik smirkingly said: so my punishment is over shona


Screen frazes on Nandani blushed...and manik smirks



So how's it Guys
I hope you guys like it
Well I just manage this
I hope itna long kaafi ha
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So now bye guys
Till then
Keep loving
Keep smiling
And
Keep shining For Ur loved ones
Love
Diya😛
Edited by diyaNarwal - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Aww our manik is so smart
Next update soon

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